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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: --HANSA--

congrats for your changing color n 1000 post 👏

updt soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: akriti154

congrats on turning goldie dear

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Originally posted by: cutieruhi

Congrats for turning Goldie and for ur new story

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PART 1

It was Turkey and everyone was doing there work in farm then the beautiful girl was cutting the grass then the handsome guy was calling her but she was busy in her work then he took the piece of an Apple and hit her then she saw him she is none other than Mihika and the boy was mihir she went to him

Mihir: kesi ho meri jaan
Mihika: mihir mene tumhe kaha tha naa ke mera peecha chor do khuda ke liye
Mihir: dekho meri jaan mene tumhe itne saare calls kiye tumne ek call bhi pick nahi kiya
Mihika: mihir mene tumhe pehele hi kaha hai ke me ye shaadi nahi karungi me apni maa ko nahi chor sakti tum apna yaha pe kaam Kyun nahi doond lete ho
Mihir: dekho meri jaan mera sub kuch waha pe hai
Mihika: achcha ab mujhe jaane do
Mihir: achcha ek minute ruko dekho me tumhare liye kiya laya hun

He took the necklace from his pocket and give her she open the necklace and saw his and her photo

Mihika: mihir ye kiya hai
Mihir: ye rakh lo

Mihika went back to her work then the lady called her she said: ji aunty

Lady: beti tumhe tou ghar jana tha naa
Mihika: oh me tou bhol hi gaye
Lady: achcha abhi chali jao aqif Bhai ke sath
Mihika: theak hai aunty. Saying so she went to her home


On the other hand

A girl was wearing a bride sout and was walking toward the garden and was seeing decoration she is none other than our milky, sweetheart, and beauty queen Ishita then a cute little girl came and said: didi baarat aa gaye. And she went

Then Mihika came and said: Ishita

Ishita turn her face to Mihika and said: Mihika kaha thi tum janti ho me bohat darr gaye thi achcha choro chalo Mihika me tumhe apna dulha dekhati hun

Mihika: me tumhe alvida kehne aaye hun Ishita

Ishita: ye tum kiya keh rahi ho Mihika

Mihika: haan Ishita hum log yaha se bohat durr ja rahe hai

Ishita: lakin kaha ja rahe ho tum log

Mihika: jaha hum bohat khush reh sake. And she went

Ishita: Mihika please ruk jao

Ishita turn her face and was went to the garden then the police man came with gun and point gun on Ishita. He is none other than Raman

Raman: hum dono ki kismat ek he saye se likhi gaye hai Ishita jo kismat tumhari hai wohi kismat meri hai

Ishita confused and said: nahi

Raman shoots

Then Ishita wake up and her heart beats very hardly then her 2 friends and room mates came nidhi and Sarika and both said: kiya hua Ishita tu theak tou hai naa

Nidhi: kiya hua Ishita Tumne koi bura khwab dekh liya kiya

Ishita: mera phone kaha hai

Sarika: yehi ho ga naa

Ishita took her phone ( first Ishita lived in hostel )


Mihika came in her house and she screamed: maa jaldi chale hamhe Ishita ko Lene Jana hai

Madhvi came and said: tum pehele kapre ekhate kar lo phir chalte hai

Mihika: maa apne apna kaam bhi khatam nahi kiya mujhe laga hum jaldi he chale jayenge.

Madhvi: tum pehele kaam khatam karo phir chalte hai aur Ishita se puch lo ke wo abhi nikli ya nahi

Mihika: theak hai

Mihika's phone rang

She picked the call and said: hello dulhan sahiba abhi nikli ke nahi
Ishita: Mihika me thodi derr sou gaye thi
Mihika: hmmm tum bohat slow dulhan ho achcha me ab phone rakhti hun jaise ke tum jaldi niklo
Ishita: nahi nahi abhi phone mat rakhna Mihika mene bohat ajeeb khwab dekha aur uss me tum bhi thi aur tumhe pata hai mujhe abhi tak dulhe ki photo nahi Mili
Mihika: do din baad wo khuda he aa Jaye ga tou tum dekh lena apne dulhe ko
Ishita: nahi tum ek baar phir pata lagao naa
Mihika: achcha ab me phone rakh ti hun. Bye. Saying so she hung the call and said: mihir by happily but when the boy he was another and went from there and Mihika get sad and went back to her work


Ishita was thought the boy who shot her in her dream

Nidhi and Sarika was talking

Nidhi: ye janti hai ke iska dulha kon hai?
Sarika: nahi abhi tou isne uss se dekha tak nahi
Nidhi: huh


Then vandita came and said: Ishita bahar tumse koi milne aya hai aur wo tumhare baare me puch raha hai

Ishita: kon puch raha hai mera kon aaya hua hai

Nidhi: Ishita lagta hai dulha Bhai khuda he tumhe Lene ke liye aa gaye

Ishita get tensed and wear her shoes and ran from the room she forget her 1 shoes in room nidhi took her shoes and ran to her then she again forget her 2 shoes in stairs nidhi took and went to her Ishita open the door and went outside and start watching everywhere but she didn't look him then she asked with vandita and she said: dekho wo raha. she points to a boy

Ishita: ye tou abhi bachcha hai
Nidhi: achcha hai naa tum khuda he ishe pal kar bara kar Lena and she wear her shoes

Then the boy came to Ishita and said: kiya aap hi Ishita hai

Ishita nodded and said: haan me hi hun
Boy: ye aap ke liye hai. He give her a card and said iss me aap ke liye ek photo hai

Ishita: thank you. And he went from The place

Then Ishita open the card when she was about to saw the pick she thought Raman in her dream

Then she open the photo and saw mihir's photo and said by smiling: ye tou bohat cute hai

Nidhi: wah Ishita kiya larka hai

Sarika: kitna handsome and achcha larka hai Ishita Teri tou life ban Gaye

Then Ishita went to the bus


Mihir came and took Mihika and close her eyes and took her in the house but the house was destroyed

Mihika: ye kaisa surprise hai mihir

Mihir: dekho me iss ghar ko aisa Banao ga ke tum yaad rakho gi bass me tumhe khush dekhna chahta hun

Mihika: me tumhare bagaer nahi reh sakti

Mihir: aur me bhi. Then they went to their car



Ishita was sitting in the bus and then the man was talking

Woman: ye kiya ho hai Bhai
Man: aa ge checking chal rahi

Then the boy got tensed and said: ye kiya hai kaha ke driver gari deta and Ishita got tensed

Then the police officer came and said: jaldi se apne apne id cards lekar bahar jaldi karo jaldi sub log aa jao sab log

Then the boy came and the police officer: ruko tum Sara side pe Hona

The boy took the gun from his pocket and point gun at Ishita and said: aa ge mat barna aa ge aye tou larki haan se Jaye gi

Then police officer take their position then the car came of police officer and open the door he is none other than our hero Raman

He point gun on man Ishita saw him and remember him in his dream and she became more tensed then Raman shoot on the boy

Then boy fell on the floor and two officer took him and everyone went then Ishita took the Apple and hit Raman with Apple and said: ruko meri baat suno

Raman turns and moved toward her and said: tum kiya karna chahti ek tou mene tumhari jaan bachai aur upar se tum ne mujhe Mara. Aisa hi hena?

Ishita: lekin tum ne itni dur se goli chalai uss aadmi ki jaga me bhi mar sakti thi

Raman: phikar mat karo mera nishan achcha hai. And he turns when Ishita

Ishita: Tumne mujhe sorry tak nahi kaha
Raman went to Ishita in angrily and said: dekho ek tou mene tumhari jaan bachai aur tumhe mera shukar guzar Hona chahiye nahi tou waha tumhari lash pari hoti. Saying so went and open his car's door and was about to sit when Ishita said: mene apni Zindagi me itna fazul aadmi nahi dekha. And she turns when Raman said: me buss apni duty kar rahi hun. And she turns again and he said: mujhe koi shoq nahi hai tum jaisi larkiyon ke mou lagne ka

Then Ishita went and sit in the bus



Ram: dekho agar tum iss joha me haar gaye tou tum apni beti Mihika do ge me uss se shaadi karunga

Orshan: theak hai


Then the play and Orshan lose the game and Ram said: me kal tumhari beti ko lene aao ga

Orshan: ok. Then he took the money and went to his way of home



Ishita reached and saw that Madhvi was hitting a man she suddenly went to her and said: mosi aap uss he Kyun mar rahi thi

Madhvi: Ishita aa gaye tum. Saying so she hugged her

Ishita: mosi aap uss he Kyun mar rahi thi

Madhvi: me wo sub tumhe baad me batao gi tum abhi ghar jao ye lo chabiyan me bass thodi Der me aa jao gi. Saying so ishita sit in the van and Madhvi went to police station and file the complain and then she went then the man came and he erase the complain and call on ram and said: Bhai Madhvi ne naa aap ki complain file ki thi Magar mene sab sambal liya

Ram; achcha theak hai



Then Ishita reached at home and went inside


Mihika reached at the village and then her Orshan saw her said: Mihika tum yaha kiya kar rahi ho

Mihika: papa wo me yaha aaye vi thi

Mihir saw her father was asking so many questions then he took his uniform of policeman and wear it and then he went to them and said: madam aap ko ye aadmi taang kar raha hai

Mihika smiling: nahi

Orshan: officer ye aap kiya keh rahe hai me iss ka papa hun

Mihir: oh achcha tou aap iss ke papa hai maaf ki jayi ga aap itne handsome lagte hai

Orshan: shukriya. Achcha ab me Chalta hun. Saying so they went and Mihir open his uniform and went to his car and went from The place


They reached Ishita hugs Mihika and also Orshan

Then Madhvi came

Orshan: kaha thi tum maa kahi aur thi aur beti ko bahar se lekar aya hun

Madhvi: tumhe iss se kiya ne kaha bhi jao

Orshan slaps Madhvi

Ishita: yeh aap kiya kar rahe hai

Mihika take Ishita inside

Madhvi: tum ne Mihika ko joha me haar liya

Orshan: meri marzi

Madhvi: tum joha Kyun khalte the ab me apni beti nahi dungi uss 56 year ke aadmi ko

Orshan: chup raho tumhe shukar guzar Hona chahiye ke me tumhari beti ke samne Tumhara pati hun

Madhvi: chup raho please



Raj: dekho Mihir itni khoobsurat larki hai aur tum inkar kar rahe ho

Mihir: aap samjh nahi rahe me kisi aur se pyar karta hun aur mene uss se shaadi ka wada kiya hai

Raj: mujhe koi interest nahi hai tumhare kisi fazul se wade me hum guns kese bejhen ge

Mihir: please aap samjho

Raj: tum samjh jao nahi tou tum Janet ho tumhare kiya hal hoga

Mihir: theak hai




Precap: ram took Mihika with him and she was screaming



Friends it's too long story so I decide to update very long part of this story. And do like and comment to tell that how's it



Edited by qubrasoomro - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
Nice update
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
Lovely updt
Cont soon
Thanks divya for sending pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
It's lovely update
If possible can u translate in English too...because some of the words I really don't know the meaning😕
I took time to read that why delay
Continue soon
Thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
First thanx for pm
N lovely part
Eagerly waiting for next part
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
Suspenseful update
Ishita is getting married
Who is her would be husband
Mihir is in smuggling business and loves mihika
What was the meaning of ishitas dream
Ishra fight was cute😳
Ishita hit raman with apple😆
Mihikas father is cheap😡
Pls update soon
Thanks for the pm

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