ISHRA OS LAND (OS 4 UPDATED ON PG 1 ON 6/10)

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Ruurmi

@Ruurmi

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#71

Sorry i dint comment early because i dint read it

Today i read all your parts

So please pm me your post

You are amazone writer

Do write ss also

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MONAPAREKH

@MONAPAREKH

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#72

Very nice update beautifully and well written i liked all your os it's an request plz write an os on ishita's pregnancy and Raman's pampering as current track is very boring

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varala

@varala

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#73

Very interesting story(OS 4)

Raman was blinded by love so he started taking revenge

Ishu as a light showed him the right path

Now become friends😃

continue writing 👏👏

Thanks for pm

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Twinkle Solanki

@Twinklesolanki

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#74

Real all ur 3 os in one ago n I must say u r good writer but miss ur 4th os plzzz pm me dear

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Mdwst

@Mdwst

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#75

It was nice
Nicely written.. Finally they are friends ..

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divz9769

@divz9769

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#76

Nice os

Raman loved raina but she died and he thought romI and mr.bhalla is behibd that so he wanted to take revange

He used ishita poor she

Mihika is so selfish she was supporting raman against ishita

But raman realised his mistake

Rainas mom told raman all the truth

Ishita make him understand

They becomr freind

Tnks for the pm

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sririt

@sririt

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#77

Wonderful OS

Just loved OS 4:: MANMARJIYAA

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Sapna

@kenika

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#78

Os4...
amezing os... raman loves raina... but she died.. raman thought romi and mr.bhalla do that ... he gives her pain for take revange... mihika and toshiji help him ... but soon he realised he did wrong with ishu... ishu know the truth... raina's mom told raman all truth... so is so heartbroken ... ishu support raman ...they became friends ... suprb... plz update sooonnn and thanks for pm dear

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apoo91

@apoo91

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#79

OS 4
Superbly written.. A very different concept
Ishita was actually a saviour for Raman..
I personally feel that u can consider continuing this story..