Ishra SS Koi Teri khaatir hai jee raha- pt 7 on pg 127 on 18/1 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Different concept
Waiting for the update
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Thankyou so very much friends for all your comments and suggestions .I m glad you people gave your genuine comment .Many has asked for prologue so here I m posting it .

KOI TERI KHAATIR HAI JEE RAHA


Symbiosis institute of Puna .Raman Kumar bhalla second year student of MBA was standing in corridor waiting for his best friend Vikram and was getting irritated when he saw him entering .Vikram came out from his car and went directly to Raman and made a sorry face .

R( angrily )- This is not fair vicky you always keep me waiting .

V-what should I do ,you know my sister ,she make somuch food in breakfast and made me eat every thing.

R- you are lucky man ,here we are not getting proper food in hostel ,and you are making faces when you are getting home made food .

V- actually you are so right my Dee is too good ,she took care of us when amma and appa died ,she became a father figure for us .Though she was only 21yrs old that time then also she took all the responsibilities.she took over appas business ,she did marraige of Naina dee( his second sister after ishita), and still taking all my responsibilities so that I can study well and can achieve something in my life . .

R- yaar I have listened so much about your sister in this one year that I just can't stop myself to meet her .ok tell your Dee to make delicacies as I m coming for dinner tonight .

V- no man ,not tonight ,today we are going for some business party.

R- why you always go with her in all parties .

V- because she is not so comfortable between so many men .

R- then she should ignore going to these parties .

V- she wants to do same but you know she has to be social for the sucess of our business .

R- ohh .

After a while vicky told raman ," Raman can you please do me a favour ".

R- what favour .?

V- yaar ,Rinky( his girlfriend)has planned dinner for us today but I have to go to party with Dee .can you please go with her in party today .

R- why will I go with your sister ,yaar I hadn't met her yet ,it will be so awkward.

V- arey date pe jaane ke liye tode na bol raha hoon ,you just have to accompany her .

R- but ..

V- please please please Raman can't you do this tiny thing for your best friend.

R- ( thinking after a while )- okk but only today ,don't make it a habit .

V- you are such a sweetheart .

R- chup I m not a girl .

In evening Raman got ready in crisp white shirt with dark blue jacket ,he was looking charming as ever with his gelled hair and lil beard with his killing smile flashing his cute dimples .He reached Vikrams house ,only to find him waiting for Raman .

V- Raman tu aa gaya bhai .

R- humm kahan hai Teri Dee.

Vikram called his sister ,soon they saw a lady in her late twenties ,she was climbing down from the staircase wearing a peech color saree ,her hairs were half clutched with the help of hairclips ,she has just done lil makeup but still looking devine in her simple attire .Raman was lost in her first sight ,he was just looking at her with opening his mouth in perfect O .Vicky saw this and spoke closing her mouth" Raman control yourself she is my elder sister ."

Till then the lady reached them ,Vicky introduced both of them.

V- Di he is my friend Raman ,Raman she is my Di ishita iyer .

That's all friends ,reading to this you must have known that its not a normal lovey dovey story but an intense one .Do respond and comment ,update will depend on your response only .


SYNOPSIS

Many people had told that they should not be prof /student many said that ishita should not be strict ,so people I m giving a short synopsis of this story .

Ishira is a 29 yrs old girl ,who has taken all the responsibilities of her siblings after their parents dismissal .Raman 24 yrs old boy is her brothers classmate and he will start loving ishita as he is impressed of her personality and beauty .At first ishita will deny but when she accept this relationship gradually.After that Raman will see her real self who is a simple girl but acting strong as she don't have anyone to take care of ,then he will become her support who will be always with her .

Hope you liked it .The people who is not liking this theme are free not to read and comment in this story I will not mind but that doesn't mean that you people will stop commenting on my rest stories .
Edited by Divanru - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Reading this prologue , I remembered myself in my college days..Yucky Hostel food..😆
Lovable track..Loving the prologue
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
Such a wonderful Prologue
Just beautiful
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Its very interesting
Waiting for update..!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Great and really interesting prologue
Waiting for the first part😊😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
its really interesting di
so ishita is vikram sis
and vikram and raman buddies
raman left open mouth seeing ishita
lovely syonopsis
update soon di
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Nice update
Thanks for pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Hey NYC prologue continue soon
I have a request plzzz tell me the exact age of Raman so I can know k rama ishita she kit a chota hai
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Interesting
Ishita's brother and raman r friends
Ishita has taken all responsibilities on her
Synopsis was good
Eager to travel in this journey of ishra

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