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Originally posted by: rufana10

thank u so much for sharing ur very first writing with us Harshada...

but really it doesn't look like ur first story coz like always u were

perfect dat time also when u didn't know much about writing stories...

u were always meant to be a writer dear 👍🏼

coming to d update, it was superb start...

ishra r childhood best friends...dey both r very sweet...

raman is so protective towards ishita...

ishita is also caring nd she is really very lucky to get

a best friend like raman...

villain has also made his entry through FB 😉

loved raman so much ❤️

will be waiting to read further...

best of luck for ur exams 😊

Originally posted by: ishra.arshi

Awesome part👏.loved it thoroughly.you are good at writing from the beginning dear.I'm still not able to believe that this is your first story😲. Harshada,thank u for sharing your first story with us.😃

you are a Brilliant writer,very good with words,emotions,characters everything is jusT perfect abt your stories.

Now coming to this ss-(🥳one more story from u and that too your first story ever toh 🥳🤗welcome toh accha hone he chahiye)

Raman and ishita r childhood besties😳.their parents also shares a good bond lovely.raman is very Possessive abt ishu no doubt😆.ishu is a chilled out kinda girl may be she is very sure abt her safety and happiness as her raman is their 4 her😉.Yuvraj ki ek friend request aur raman ka dimag kharab😈.kuch toh gadbad hai🤓.

Raman and ishu's mom convo was also very nice.looking forward to this story.

All the best 4 your exams👍🏼

Keep smiling and shining😃

Originally posted by: Boo2014

Thanks for sharing your first ever story.

Ishra are cute. Great start.

Originally posted by: Mdwst

Sweet story

Originally posted by: smilesusmita

Congrats for new story
Ishra bonding was so lovely
Raman is very protective fr ishu
So here villain is yuvraj
Update soon

Originally posted by: kenika

Really ... this is your first stoty? This is amezing ... 👏 raman and ishita childhood frnzz ... raman is very protective for ishu and ishu too care for raman ... yuvarj is something up to... plz plz update sooonnn and thanks for pm dear... 😊

Originally posted by: lalibhaskar

Wow I can't believe this is ur first story that you u wrote 4 yrs back

Beautifully written

Loved the title

Loving raman care towards ishita and their bonding is beautifully explained

Eager to read more

Originally posted by: divz9769

Wow so beautiful story

Ishra parents were childhood freinds I loved their name

Ishita and raman share beautiful bonding

Raman is so protactive of ishita

What that yuvraj is planning

Raman and ishitas mom bonding is so cute

Ishita is really childish

Who called ishita on landline

Pls update soon

Originally posted by: sweet.Aman

Awesom harshada