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@pammi108

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

hey

this is too good for first story...very well written..

nobody can tell it as first story because no faults at all:)

very sweetly written..

wish even we get some friend like raman:(

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Anju

@Muskan193

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

very lovely update dear...update next part soon i am waiting...

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@ItsNoorfatima

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

So it was your first story
Nice one
I loved it
I like childhood stories of ishra
Waiting for your Come back
Update soon

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varala

@varala

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Congratulations for ur first story 🥳

Very lovely update

Ishra are childhood friends

Raman Is soo protective and ishu is caring 👏

They have very good bond yet to realise their love😉

I think Yuvraj is on landline 😕

Come back soon 😛 waiting for ur update

Thanks for pm 😊

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Aradhana

@aru_27

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

awesome update
love their bonding
nice

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gargpoo

@gargpoo

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Interesting start
Ishra r best friends
Raman is ptotective for her
She is caring
Yuvraj is behind ishita
Ramsn is worried
Waiying for next

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rufana

@rufana10

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

thank u so much for sharing ur very first writing with us Harshada...

but really it doesn't look like ur first story coz like always u were

perfect dat time also when u didn't know much about writing stories...

u were always meant to be a writer dear 👍🏼

coming to d update, it was superb start...

ishra r childhood best friends...dey both r very sweet...

raman is so protective towards ishita...

ishita is also caring nd she is really very lucky to get

a best friend like raman...

villain has also made his entry through FB 😉

loved raman so much ❤️

will be waiting to read further...

best of luck for ur exams 😊

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preeti

@ishra.arshi

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Awesome part👏.loved it thoroughly.you are good at writing from the beginning dear.I'm still not able to believe that this is your first story😲. Harshada,thank u for sharing your first story with us.😃

you are a Brilliant writer,very good with words,emotions,characters everything is jusT perfect abt your stories.

Now coming to this ss-(🥳one more story from u and that too your first story ever toh 🥳🤗welcome toh accha hone he chahiye)

Raman and ishita r childhood besties😳.their parents also shares a good bond lovely.raman is very Possessive abt ishu no doubt😆.ishu is a chilled out kinda girl may be she is very sure abt her safety and happiness as her raman is their 4 her😉.Yuvraj ki ek friend request aur raman ka dimag kharab😈.kuch toh gadbad hai🤓.

Raman and ishu's mom convo was also very nice.looking forward to this story.

All the best 4 your exams👍🏼

Keep smiling and shining😃

Edited by ishra.arshi - 9 years ago

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Boo2014

@Boo2014

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Thanks for sharing your first ever story.

Ishra are cute. Great start.

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: sririt
Lovely update
IshRa childhood friends and their bond is amazing.
This Yuvraj, the villain. I am sure he only called Ishu.
He is stalking her.

Beautiful piece you know

Thank you so much Rituja
Glad you liked the part dear.
Indeed, their bond is something which is the main aspect of this story.
Well, for that you will have to wait for the next part 😆
Really ? 😳 Thank you so much.

Lpve
- Harshada

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