Ishra TS|don't leave me alone| part 2 on page 8

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divz9769

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Nice update

Shagun is so evil using kid for her benefit

Hope its ramans dream

Pls update soon

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anisha960

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

nive one
but ending scary it is
continue soon
thnx fr pm

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Diksha Naik

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

shocking end do continue soon

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Krishna priya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Nice one dear
Update soon
Thanks for pm

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Christy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

loved the os, but the end hope it was just a dream plzzz.. waiting for the epilogue

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Qubra

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: AniSweety
omg omg..ending was shocking
i just cant wait..😳

Hmm

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Roohachu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Very emotional update
ishita ka accident
Update next part soon

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Qubra

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Author note: hello friends I am back not with epilogue with new part I thought that this story is not of one shot so I decide to update more parts of this story so friends here is the teaser of my story. Hope you all will like it. Thank you

He screamed: Ishita

Doctor: relax ho jaye Mr bhalla

Raman: doctor aap ek baar aur check kar le naa

Doctor: Mr bhalla relax please

Raman was went to his home

Mrs bhalla: Raman puttar Ishita kaha hai wo tumhare sath hi thi naa. Bol naa

Raman was still in shock

Raman was remembering her moments with Ishita

Ishita: Raman me kisi Saree pehnu

Raman: me aadmi hun aurat nahi

Ishita: oh please ab buss karo

Raman: ok

Raman fell on the floor

Mrs bhalla got worried

Mrs bhalla: Raman bol naa. Tu bata naa Ishita kaha hai.

Mrs iyer: Raman bolo naa

Raman: arey Ishita nahi rahi naa iss duniya me. He screamed and again start crying

Everybody get shocked

Mrs bhalla start crying and Mrs iyer also

Mrs iyer: kiya meri ishu ko kiya ho gaya

Mrs bhalla: Raman yeh tu kiya bol raha hai Ishita zinda hai naa

Ruhi: ishimaa mujhe ishimaa ke pass Jana hai papa kaha hai wo

Raman again remember her moments

Ishita and Raman was dancing on Ruhi's birthday ( song is such na sake )

Ruhi: papa ishimaa ko kuch nahi hwa naa

Ruhi and Raman was crying and was hugging her

That's all for Teaser. Hope you all will like it

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lonelyyyy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

first CONGRATULATIONS on ur new ss😊

part 1
nice part
chup chup k date
shagy shaggy tu ni sudhregi na
pihu 😕
ishu ka accident n she is dead 😲
xcited for nxt part

will comment soon on nxt

ps sorry for late reply

Edited by lonelyyyy - 9 years ago