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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Jinal_999

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Loveliest
Superb update
Long update thi..fir bhi mann kar raha tha padhte hi jau padhte hi jau.

Ruhi is too cute..nd her antics..😛
Ruhi ki har ek baat sunn kar raman ko ishu ki hi yaad aati hai.
Nd hospital mein agar ishita nahi thi toh voh dead person koun tha?
Agar aisa hai to ishu kyu bhaag rahi hai.

IshRa ek dusre se pyar karte the..but ishu left him...ishita nd gold digger
Nd raman hates her.
Whats their past story?
Now raman is married...wid shagun..
All d bhallas loves ruhi..except shagun

Ruhi was slipping wid raman..her leg on his stomach😆
Ohh i love this ruhi way too much..wanna eat her..😆😆
I truly looove this story..
This story is really interesting..nd i m super excited for this..
Waiting for ishita's entry.. what will happen when they come to know ruhi is ishita's daughter..
Its became my favorite story..😃
Plzz update next part ASAP


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for this loveliest comment
will continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: varala

Wonderful update

I am sure cutie pie ruhi is ishra's daughter
What happened to ishu??? Now where is she???
Why raman hate ishu? ?
I am dam sure ishu is not a gold digger there must be something wrong😲
Raman married shugun why ????? I can't tolerate it😡😡
Continue soon
Thanks for pm😊


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: FUNFICTION2002

RAMAN AND RUHI ARE SO DAMN CUTE😆👏
i luv this ss plz update soon
and if ruhi's mother ishita died how will ishr abe united?
I WANT ISHRARU COMPLETE
AND SHAGUN OUT
hiwever ur story ur choice i luv it anyways


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ishra.arshi

Superb update.ruhi is ishra's child,no doubt in this😳.ishita cannot die😕may be some confusion.shagun and raman r married😭.

ruhi is soo cute😆,seeks raman permission before doing anything.family has already got attached to ruhi except shagun🤢.this part was full of surprises,mihir -ishita r sibling.raman shagun married,ishita left raman(there must be some solid reason still).awesome part👏
Continue soon anisha.😃


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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 3
Life is so unpredictable no one knows. Sometimes in just mere seconds life changes and from the dark and life less life to a life full of liveliness where everyone enjoy their each moment to their fullest .

Years passed by and bhalla house which have lost their happiness years ago in form of ishita 9 years ago have found their happiness 5 years before in form of ruhi ironically ishita's daughter . This is what we call destiny.

"Ruhi... ruhi ruhi beta where are you " raman came down finding ruhi . He was finding her since 10 mins but she was not anywhere.

In hall

Everyone gather around the hall hearing his screams for ruhi . Mr bhalla and mrs bhalla were asking him when where how this happen . While mihika was askin them to be quite and hear her.

Raman shouted - ruhi seriously if this is your prank then its going over board now .

Mihika calming him down - bhaiya calm down . Romi is also not in his room .

Mrs bhalla - bas inka rooz ka hai . Ruhi toh bacchi hai but romi baap ban gaya par bachpana abhi tak nhi gaya .

Mr bhalla - chal raman so ja ab wo romi ke saath hi hogi .

Raman getting little hyper - no papa I am not going to leave him today . Its just 7 in morning and I get up at 6:00 for some work and ruhi was their I don't know since both left . Where they both can go at this time .

Mrs bhalla smiling - I don't know what these two will do in one hour .

Mr bhalla - aary toshiji it's not sure na it can be they leave minutes ago only .

Mihika smiling - nhi papaji , ruhi gets up the next moment when bhaiya leaves . Its like his warmth gives her sleep .

Mrs bhalla - bhalla ji jaisee bachhe ko apni ma ka ehsaas hota hai na , waise hi ruhi ko raman ke hone ya na hone ka ehsaas ho jata hai . Wo raman ke bina ek pal nhi so sakti usse samay jaag jati hai .

Mihika - khoon se rishte se jyada mazboot hai in dono rishta .

Raman smiling - ohh hello both of you meri beti hai usse pyaar nhi karunga toh padosi ki beti se karunga Maa I am coming in 5 mins I left my mobile in study

Mr bhalla - I am very happy toshiji my both sons are happy , raman akela hai lekin khush hai and simmi she is coming today after 9 years .

Mrs bhalla sadly - She has not come in 9 years don't know what happen .

Mihika - hmm mummyji I haven't seen simmi di she was not in our wedding also .

Mrs bhalla - han mihika the day ishita left simmi also left the house . Beheno sa pyaar tha dono mein .

Mihika - you know mummyji I feel guilty sometime when I think that my own sister have betrayed raman bhaiya . How ca..

She keep quite when she see raman coming down . He comes and settle down on sofa . Minutes passes by and ruhi was no where to seen . Raman was getting impatient with every passing second .

Raman shouted on top of his voice - ruhi if you are not coming out then I am going . Just think then we will me...

Before raman could complete his phone rang seeing the caller id of romi he picks up the phone - seriously I am not going to leave you , meri beti kaha hai
Ruhi - shhhsss shatabdi express . When I will come out na pakad lena Sanam will get up . She slept very late in night and was very cranky . You do one thing just come out with everyone I have a surprise for you .

Without hearing anything she cuts the call and everyone moves out of the house but their was no one neither ruhi nor romi. Raman again shouted ruhi and then a girl came from back wearing a cute pink nightsuit with two high pony tails showing everyone her cute adorable dimples and seeing everyone with her doe shaped eyes . Looking like an angel . Winking at raman she passed by him riding a bicycle at a very high speed . Raman run behind her and asks her to reduce the speed but she fasts her speed .

Raman scared - ruhi this is not a joke speed down the bicycle otherwise you will fall .

Ruhi shouted - chill down mere pyaare papa nothing will happen you just enjoy .

Raman - ok now enough come down we all have seen it na

Ruhi didn't listen to him rather was busy in riding and enjoying . All were looking at her the way she was enjoying while riding a bicycle but raman was very scared all the colours from his face were gone seeing his princess riding a bicycle as once she has fallen from it when she was small and was badly injured .

Ruhi was going on taking rounds and was laughing like a free bird , everyone was clapping for her , she was going to take a turn some stone comes between the tyre and her cycle got disbalanced . She screamed and was going to fall but raman reaches on time and holds her before she can fall . Hugging her close to his heart he looked at everyone glaring especially at romi Hugging her as tight he can he moves towards the house and everyone followed him he make ruhi sit on the sofa and started searching for any wound .

Ruhi smiles at his over protectiveness nature cupping his face - papa I am fine . See nothing happened . Nothing can happen to me until my papa is their with me .

Romi - bhai yaar she is fine

Raman pointing his finger towards romi and ruhi - both of you just shut up . Not a single word .

Mrs bhalla - raman baachi hai gir gir ke hi badi hogi .

Raman ignoring her - mihika bring hot milk with haldi in it .

Ruhi - no chachi no please .

Raman glaring - not a single word ruhi . Mihika you go

Mr bhalla - beta ji theek hai wo

Raman - ruhi what is the need for all this . What if I did not reach on time then then tell me what would have happened .

Ruhi giggling - gir jaati aur kya .

All laughed at her witty reply while raman's glare make everyone quite . Mihika brings milk for her and passes the glass over to raman . He takes it towards her mouth but she tightly closes it . Raman with his other hand tries to open her mouth but she didn't bulge .

Ruhi - pehle bolo you are not angry with me

Romi like a kid raising his hand - me too me too

Ruhi winking at him - han chachu too . Say it first

Raman glaring at both of them - ok I am not .

Ruhi clapped like a small excited kid and settles herself in raman lap and holds her nose tight opens her mouth. Seeing her cute antics raman smiled and makes her drink the milk with his own hands .

Ruhi after finishing the milk makes a yukky face - papa this is so bitter .

Raman hugging her close to his - why did you all this . If you get injured then . Have you think of papa

Ruhi - papa I am fine . Why are you scared papa I am not going anywhere . Ruhi can't live without her papa . Dekhna my husband will also live in this house only .
Mrs bhalla - lo ji kar lo baat ghar jamai layegi hamari ruhi .

Ruhi - han daadi dekh lena . Ruhi will not leave her papa ever . Jo marzi ho jaaye jaise papa ruhi ke bina nhi reh sakte ruhi bhi papa ke bina nhi reh sakti .

Mr bhalla - samajh gyee

Ruhi giggling - good daadu . Chachi where is sanam . I want to play with her .

Mihika - ruhi baby please she is sleeping .

Ruhi with her puppy eyes - please just five minutes . Chachu bolo na chachi ko .

Raman - no ruhi she is sleeping na let her be . You get ready for school .

Ruhi tapping raman head - no school for two weeks papa . Buddhe ho rahe ho aap papa . Dekhna jaldi white white hair aa jayenge .

Mrs bhalla - hayee rabba mera beta buddha ho gya . Main toh

Ruhi - daadi app toh double bhudiyan

Raman pulling her cheeks - oye bad manners

Ruhi holding her ears - I am so sorry daadi . Main toh mazak kar rahi thi

Mihika - but ruhi why no school for two weeks .

Ruhi - school was going on trip to shimla .

Romi - then why u didn't go .

Raman - ruhi you should have also gone na baba .

Ruhi - no I can't live a day without papa so I missed it . And now I can live all the day in house. Daadi daadu ke saath masti , sanam aur chachi chachu ke saath and night mein papa ke saath .

Raman - aary buddhu baccha you should have gone their .

Ruhi nodded in no and ran towards her room but in between stairs she got bang with shagun . Seeing shagun her smiling face firms a straight face .

Shagun sternly - ruhi look and then run this is not a garden .

Ruhi looking straight into her eyes - speak slowly if papa listens to this tou will ne gone . Shukar karo main bach gyii warna aap toh gyee the aunty .
Saying this she ran towards her room leaving a sulking shagun behind .

Shagun - raman ne sir pe chada kar rakha hai is ladki ko .

Romi who have heard this all this - obviously bhabhiii bhai ne apni bete ko hi sir ke chadaya hai . Kya problem hai ismein .

Shagun - wo raman ki beti nhi hai . She is no one to this house .

Romi pointing his finger towards her - don't say this again she is the life of this house . Jaan basti hai sab ki usmein .

Shagun - ya whatever

Ruhi who was coming down after regretting that she should not talk to shagun like this have heard it . Tears formed in her eyes but hiding it behind her smile she again comes down and goes to shagun who was now in hall .

She stands in front of shagun - sorry aunty

Raman looks at her and picks her up - ruhi what happen why are you saying sorry .

Ruhi - papa I misbehaved with aunty .

Shagun with sugar coated smile - its ok ruhi beta .

Raman turning towards ruhi - see its fine . Maa I am very hungry now breakfast kab milega . Make it fast
till then me and ruhi will fresh up . Both leave from their

Their was a knock on the door . Neelu opens the door and their was simmi enters the house with luggage and tears in her eyes as she was coming after 9 years . All were happy too see her . Romi ran towards her and hugged her di . Soo mrs bhalla and mr bhalla also joined the hug .

Simmi pointing towards mihika - romi yeh teri mihika
Romi nodded in yes and simmi opens her arm for mihika . They too hug and simmi settle down on sofa . All were chatting with her
Mr bhalla - simmi why you never contacted us in these 9 years . Why simmi where were you

Simmi sadly - papa let it be . Papa you all know what ishita matters to me . She was not only bhai wife for me but she was my best friend , my sister . Today also I remember how bhai have thrown her ou...

Mrs bhalla - simmi leave that . Tell now after how many years you remember us . Yaad aa gyi maa baap bhi hai

Simmi ignoring the question - . I am just here for some work . I will go after completing it . I am just here because this romi want me to meet his mihika . Don't worry I will leave only after 2 days . Mujhe yaad ye ghar bhai ka hai

Mrs bhalla crying - simmi what happen to you . Yeh tera ghar hai

Simmi - maa us shagun ke saath nhi reh sakti main . Bhai have choosed her over me and given her ishita place .

Mihika - mummyji simmi di leave all this . We will not talk about all this . Mummyji simmi di is here for 2 days so we will live to fullest .

Mrs bhalla - but where you both met

Simmi - in market ma and he convinced me somehow to come home . Ok now make me meet your baby sanam .

Before romi can say something , ruhi came down running and laughing and behind her raman was running. Ruhi was giggling while raman was trying to grab her. While coming down ruhi pass by simmi but raman and simmi both got banged with each other . Both looked into each others eyes . Raman has tears in his eyes while simmi also has tears in her eyes but anger overpower her tears . Raman moves forward to hug her but she took a step back .

Simmi showing her palm - don't please . I know its your house I will leave soon .

Raman - pagal hai tu . You are my sister . Jitna mera hai utna tera bhi hai .

Simmi shouted - ohh bhai please . I know who matters to you more . I just remember your each and every word you said to me in past . Shagun is your priority not me . So please now don't pretend .

All were looking at them thinking might be their differences get solved but ruhi was looking at simmi that how she was shouting and then at raman who was looking at her with tear filled eyes . She moves towards raman hugged his legs . He picks up ruhi and hugged her . Ruhi wipes raman tears and asked him not to cry . Turning towards simmi he looked at her angrily .

Ruhi pointing her finger towards her - I don't like papa crying and you are making my papa crying . You just go from here . Jao aap yaha se

Raman cupping her face - no baby papa is crying because he is meeting his sister after years . See she is simmi bhua .

Ruhi wiping his tears - ohh khushi ke aansu . But I don't like them

Simmi - ohh wow congratulations bhai.

Mrs bhalla - chal raman simmi come have breakfast .

Simmi - maa bhai move on . You all must be very happy . He has everything now a perfect life .

Raman sadly - yes simmi I have everything . My ruhi is my world .

Romi - she is our jaan simmi di

Simmi smiling sadly - wo toh dikh hi raha hai . Shagun and this ruhi is the happiness of raman bhai life

Mr bhalla - bas bahut hua simmi . Come and eat
Simmi leaves from their . Raman puts ruhi down and run behind her.

Ruhi - daadu I will not eat anything

Mihika making her sit on her lap - why

Ruhi playing with her hair - because is papa is saying that he will not take me for dinner at night .

Romi - ohhh ruhi we will go . We will make a plan .

Ruhi smiling - chachu I have one wait

She ran out behind raman who has gone behind simmi .

In garden

Raman was holding simmi by her arms and she was trying hard to free from his hold .

Holding her tight and with red eyes raman shouted - ruhi meri beti nahi hai . She is not mine simmi . I have kept my promise with you . Shagun is no one to me .

Simmi was shocked to hear this and tears flow from ruhi eyes who was coming to him but stopped hearin him shouting and ran back inside.

Simmi with a straight face - ruhi kiski beti hai phr .
Raman making her sit next to him on bench - I don't know .
And he narrated her how he finds ruhi and the event that followed after ward .

Raman - simmi you know she is my life line . I can't tolerate a word against her so please .

Simmi smiling - ishita ke liye bhi bhai tu itna hi possessive tha na

Raman sadly - I haven't left her she left me alone . But leave she is happy and I am happy in that .

Simmi (st)
She is not bhai aur aapki jo yeh khushi ha na wo bhi ussi ki di hui hai .

Raman - simmi can't you know forget everything and live with us happily.

Simmi nodded in no - I can't bhai . I agree ishita left you she have her own reason but y you married shagun then .

Raman shouted - ishita ke liye

Simmi shockingly - what

Raman - han simmi for ishita I have married her . It...

Before raman could complete romi
Called him to come fast as ruhi is not opening the door .
Raman ran fast leaving simmi alone and shocked . But soon she also followed him .

Outside ruhi room . Their mihika and romi were continuously banging the door but she was not opening it and loud cries were coming from inside with the banging of things here and there.

Romi - bhai what happen to her , why she is doing all this . Aary lag jaayegi usko . What have you said she came too you

Raman - me and simmi were talking she didn't come to me . We were just talking and it then struck him what might have happened .

Raman banging the door - ruhi I didn't mean what you are assuming . Seriously ruhi just listen to me for once

Simmi - why is she behaving like this

Mihika - ruhi see open the door then I will pakka I will not stop you from waking sanam from her sleep ever . Pakka ruhi promise. Bhaiya what have you done

Raman with breaking sound - ruhi please open the door .

From inside came voice of something breaking down and then the shouting of ruhi in pain . Hearing that both romi and raman breaks the door and were shocked to see all the things scattered their and some blood strains on bed sheet but ruhi was no where to see but raman instantly goes behind the bed and their he finds ruhi holding her foot which was slightly bleeding and was crying uncontrollably . Raman moves towards ruhi but she moves away from him .

Raman crying - ruhi just come to me see its bleeding . Papa can't see ruhi like this

Ruhi nodding in no and trying to stop the blood with cloth itself - aap hi bol rahe the na ke main aapki bete nhi hun . so it should not matter to you that if I laugh or cry .

Raman trying to get hold on her - ruhi what are you saying you matter to me the most .

Ruhi nodding in no - no I didn't matter to you as I am no one to you . Main toh aapki beti nhi hun na . Aapne yehi bola tha na bhua ko

Raman - nhi baccha you are taking it in a wrong way . I was just saying that you are not my blood but you matters to me the most . Ruhi pagal ho tum how can you think like this . You are the reason of my existence

Ruhi sits their and was sobbing . Raman gets up , picking ruhi moves towards the bed and make her sit their . Mihika passes him the first aid box . Softly cleaning the wound and blowing air in between he asks - is it hurting too much .
Ruhi nodding in no - jitna pain yaha ho raha hai (pointing towards her heart ) uske mukable kuch nahi .You know that shagun aunty says this that I am no one to this house hundred times but it didn't hurt me but when I heard this from you na papa that I am not your baby it hurts so much .

Their was a silence in the room in which only sobs can be heard of ruhi , who was making everyone cry

Simmi was shocked to see their bond she tries to touch ruhi but ruhi jerked her hand

Mrs bhalla holding his ear - ruhi puttar yeh jo tera papa hai ne mera puttar pagal hai kuch bhi bolta hai .

Mr bhalla - chal raman meri pooti ko sorry bol .

Romi hugging ruhi and kissing her - enough of your crying come with your chachu . You know na I love you so much

Ruhi - agar yeh mere papa nhi toh koi mera kuch nhi lagta . Nai koi chachu na daadu na daadi koi nhi

Saying this ruhi lays down throwing the things away from bed and covers herself with a sheet .
Everyone was looking at raman while he was looking at ruhi constantly without blinking his eyes . With his shivering hands he tries to pull the sheet ruhi was taking . She was all curled up like a small baby having hiccups .

Raman heart bleed seeing his life in this condition and that to because of him . He moves closer to her , tucking her hair he kisses her on her eyes . Having her father warmth ruhi started to cry again loudly . Not able to see this raman pulls her up and snuggle her into him kissing her on her face several times and mumbling sorry several times .

Every one leaves from their giving them the much needed space because they were sure that only raman can heal her pain . Ruhi tries to come out his hold but he was not leaving her as his hold was much much more stronger than her .

Raman making her look at him and cupping her face - ruhi listen to papa first then do what ever you want to do .

Ruhi sobbing holds his collar with her shivering hands and say with lot of anger in her eyes - main aapki beti hun samajh aayi aapko . I am ruhi raman kumar bhalla . Did you get this

Holding her small shivering hands in his , kissing them smiling between his tears and looking into her eyes - this is the beautiful truth of my life .

Ruhi jerks her hand away from him , goes and sit far from him with red eyes due to constant crying and the anger . Raman moves towards her and sits beside her . Ruhi was not speaking and not looking at him also so raman break the silence .

Raman - I know how it feels when the person you love the most did not respond to your love .

Ruhi nodded in yes - I hate you wheb you said that

Raman chuckling - and I love you meri jaan

Ruhi looking into his eyes with her eyes also teary - papa I can't live without you . Please don't leave me .

Raman making her sit on his lap - what do you think that papa can live without you . I was just telling bhua that though you are not ...

Before raman can complete ruhi puts her hand on his mouth nodding in no with her hand .

Ruhi-main aapki beti hun na . Hamara dil ka rishta hai . Bolo na papa main apki beti hun na

Raman snuggling her into him -ruhi meri beti hai and no one can change that . You are my ruhi only mine . Meri beti ho tum . Pagal i am just living for you .

To be continued ...
Just wanna ask do you people want past in detail as flashback or a small view of that ...
Waiting for your reviews ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Updated above have a look
Pm later
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Make Raman came 2 know abt ishita
Cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
I want past in flashback this story very heart touching
I really luv this
Plzzz continue update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was Amazing Part.😊
Ruhi and Raman Part was so Heart-Touching.😭
It was so sad to see Raman like this.😭
I hope Raman will know about Ishita.😊
Waiting for Ishra Past.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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It was nice and emotional update
Ruhi and raman bond is so powerful no one can break it
Ruhi is so cute she is jaan of the bhalla house
Romi and ruhi bond is also cute
Ruhi got angry when raman said ruhu is not his daughter
Simmi loves ishita so much she knows why ishita left raman please bring ishita soon
Pks update soon

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