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nahtani88

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Awesome

Update Soon

Thanks 4 The PM

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Balasri

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Nice one Shivangi sach Mein puttar is soo adorable yaar kitna kuch kar raha hein to bring his jkr back to action he is taking care of every little thing and wat all vandu said is soo true and now even ishita strted to respond to his efforts and he is taking care of her in dat too loved it

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ishra_JD_club

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Awesom shivangi...
Beautifully written...
U delicts ishita 's mental lositiin very well..
RamN's love n care for ishita...

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sririt

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Such a beautiful update

Glad Ishita is getting better with Raman's effort

Vandu's advice was commendable

Ishita is slowly coming out of her shell.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

too good and beautiful update loved it.. And also dnt snd me pm's of ur stories plz my inbox is full and if possible for u plz scrap me ur stories future updates and i want to tell u mere exams postpone hote hote june se finally 10sep se start ho rhe hai to me aapki or baaki saare writer buddies ki stories nhi pad paungi if i get any holiday in b/w my exams i try to read ur or other stories so i requst if u could scrap me all of them and i assure if not i definatly read all aftr my exams.

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DipaliG

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Lovely update
Slowly she is coming out of the incident
Loved by vandu's advice to ishu...
Raman's efforts are being paid off...glad
Continue soon and thanks for the pm

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nafnaf

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Part 1

Shivangi that was amazing - this particular track needed to be explored more!!

The effect on Ishita and the help she needed to get over the ordeal!!!

This was not addressed properly!!

But you have made a great start - you are showing just how much Ishita was affected all through Raman's eyes!!!

He is noticing how she is although acting normally and smiling with everyone - her smile is not reaching her eyes!!!

Also she is keeping herself so busy that at the end of the day she just comes in to the room and falls asleep as she is so tired!!!

He then decides to do something: ""ishita ko waapis Jhansi ki rani mode mein laana hoga warna main paagal ho jaunga..soch raman kuch soch"

He brings her to Ooty - so beautiful and romantic place - mmm kuch kuch hone waala haina?!?!?!?!

Both happy to share a bed!!

Ishita has another nightmare and Raman takes her in his arms and makes her feel secure and he promises himself that this is the last time she will have any nightmares!!!!

An awesome start please continue soon and also thank you so much for the pm!!

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Akriti154

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Lovely update shivangi
raman is doing so much to relieve ishita of her pain
ishita is also slowly opening up
continue soon
thnxx 4 pm

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Shivangi Agarwal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: lonelyyy
Part 1
it was so good dii 👏
i always wanted to read a story on this scene
raman apni jkr ko miss kr ra h
raman ishu in ooty yeee
raman hugged ishu tightly n slept😳
very xcited for raman's plan

a BIG SORRY for late reply

will comment on nxt part in sometime
so xcited for 2nd part

hey no need 4 sorry...thanks alot for liking😛

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Shivangi Agarwal

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: lonelyyy

PART 2
awesome part diii
i luved it totally
raman toh bilkul change ho gya apni madrasan k liye 😳
pehle bed tea den her favrite gobhi k parathe raman ishu apne hath se khila bhi dete 😳
ooo raman apni ishu k liye gana ga ra h
ishu ko phir nitemare n raman hugged her tightly
raman ki choice apni jkr k liye luvly
thanks to vandu ishu ko smjhane k liye use bhi first step lena chahiye
ishu is lucky to have raman
ishra ❤️
update sooonnn dii
m luving it so muchhh

thanks 4 reading yaar...🤗

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