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Posted: 9 years ago
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What YHM has now come to be
And the things we bear and see

Raman agreeing without ado further
In all good faith ' Shall I be Mother'

Ishita teaching him new method math
And she following the street smart path

To excell in bringing up a dear child
To learn how business rules to abide

A formidable task has been scripted
And the leads have been to it fitted

Things are getting really banal and trite
And the scenes are getting just sterile

When will this trail end - even the lollipops
like thirst quenched with sugar free coke

He looks heavy in face and a bit tardy too
She looks bit stuffed and wears a same look

The charm,the novelty, freshness forlorn
Both struggling daily but look quite gone

Who took this show from where to where
Are showing often signs of wear and tear

Be it Ekta in her enthusiastic stride
Or the scripters and creatives beside

Wanted to do a show with a new thought bang
But presently are facing a great mind traffic jam

Why not listen and attend for a change
To the the avid viewer's demand range
Instead of churning out scenes
From literally the old trash bins
Of hackneyed ideas -- crap
And if spelt out read ' old hat '





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