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Hey Nidoo I am going to comment on both OSs together!!!
I loved Adi teasing Raman and for a change Raman did not shout at Adi as he knew that whatever Adi was saying was true as with his back to Adi he smiles!!!!
Nidoo you captured the scene so beautifully!!!
I love how you describe the two scenes with the two mothers and daughters!!!
The slightest of differences between the two mothers - one scene slightly hurts him!!!
That difference described just brilliantly - how do you manage to do it?!?!!!?!
You managed to convey so much in that!!!
Then the caress (almost) so sweet!!
She asks him if he has eaten and he felt like nothing had changed!!
Their nok jhoks during dinner!!
It was natural for her to land on his lap until the final comment making them both realise that things were different!!!
In the second OS continuing after dinner - Raman's little nok jhok about them taking up the whole bed to try and relieve the tension!!!
Both watching a movie together - Raman refuses the duvet but then he gets cold as expected!!!!
Their little tug of war so sweet and the song playing nicely interweaving with the whole scene!!!
Loved the way she ends up on his lap so naturally and the beautiful kiss mmuuhhahh!!!
And finishing off so beautifully in each others arms!!!!!
loved it loved it and loved it!!!!!!!!!!!
More of these please and thank you so much for the pm!!
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Advocate Anjali Awasthi
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