IshRa OS: Ye raat aur ye doori (Aug 8)

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Reserved

Hey Nids 🤗

To begin with I had assumed thanks to the title this would be a funny one because of AAA 😆😆

But I am so pleasantly surprised to discover it wasn't so instead you used the song in a context that was entirely different and yet went with the flow of your story and was absolutely perfect in this situation.

Loved the kiss and the ending wherein Biwi and Puttar finally let their guard down and didnt give a damn about the consequences of being caught early morning 😃

This was fabulous.

Love,

Aani

Edited by QueSeraSera - 9 years ago

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Aradhana

@aru_27

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

very nice os
the kiss conveyed their all hidden emotions
beautiful ,,,loved it

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Priya

@priyadarshini.r

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Thanks for the PM Nidoo😊.

As usual this part was so adorable and sweet. I was wondering as to how would they go ahead with their confrontation and reconciliation in this part.

Puttar interested in south indian dessert?😉😳. To me it looked like the passionate kiss between them was enough to convey what they were desperately wanting to tell each other. It was very romantic and beautiful. I just imagined IshRa all through the story because I have given up my wish to see this passionate couple back on our screens.

Thanks again for this wonderful update.

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abcz123456

@abcz123456

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

I am commenting for both the parts together

Great work as usual.

Feels good to read what we actually want to see giving importance to the central characters.

WELLDONE!

But yes I badly want an update for dafa ho jao

Thanks for the PM.

Edited by abcz123456 - 9 years ago

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maanvir

@maanvir

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Hey Nidoo!!!

See wat u hv made me do? I have logged into IF after ages, just because I cud not stop myself from reading and commenting on ur work...

I read the previous one and this back to back...And I am in awe...

I definitely have no words to describe the depth of these two shots and OMG the way u have penned it is just amazing...

As beautiful the plot was so beautifully it was written...

U do magic with ur words and I could literally see the scene unfolding in front of my eyes...

The merger with the song was perfect...

Who cud imagine such an amazingly romantic yet emotional os based on a funky song from one of the funkiest movies...

The video of the song is nthng but hilarious...and to mould into something as beautiful as this surely a challenge...

Eveytym I hear the song Amir Khan with a clown topi is what comes to my mind...But aftr dis OS its only IshRa dat I will see...

Words would make no justice in appreciating this piece of work and the previous one...bcz its just beyond words...beyond perfection...

Amazzzing!!!!

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arreddy

@arreddy

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

awesome is only word for ur writing friend..

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gargpoo

@gargpoo

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Its so beautiful..
The one kiss said everything..
I just loved it..!!

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bscorp13

@bscorp13

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Oh you married one of my fav movies of all time with ishra romance😛...super awesome😛

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Raina

@Raina1234

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

This was just so good.

I loved both the Oses.

I'll be a bit more greedy now.

Want another part.😆

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Dmug

@Dmug

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Both the OS's were simply beautiful..and i have read all others too which u had PMed me..just cldnt comment at that time...i hope we get our ishra back like this sans kissing part cz thats surely not gonna happen onscreen but still...missing them like hell..