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Sk-Sharmin

@Sk-Sharmin

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#141

i am in love with this story...
haye...

so amazing...
i thought i won't like this story aftr reading 1st part...coz u made my baby rude..nd unacceptable..
bt now...
u dnt nw hw much i love this...
he is ruling.. jst ruling...
nd m loving it soo much...
it perfectly suits him...ruling the world...
he hate calling him mr. bhalla in frnt of hiz helps..
he felt jealous of raj..whn ishu HiFid him..
aww...
smthing smthing happening...
when dey will fall fr each other..!
nd jab ishu ko pata chalega k he killed her parents den..😔
update soon...
waiting...

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Roohachu

@Roohachu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#142

So nice update this was
So so loved it
N that blushing morning moments
They were too cute
Raman he's as always confusing me
Y is it so?😕
I just love his attitude
N yaa he's good at heart I already said that
Tabhi toh he told her to behave well with those servants
But indirectly he told her to be-have with him
n then the antakshari moment
He was jealous
Aweee
He was jealous that she's more comfortable with his servants than him
N he don't likes it when she called him Mr. Bhalla
Well that's so formal U know
N finally madam find it out
Thank God
But the final bedroom scene cracked me up
I just hope She'll be alive by morning
I don't want to think about the consequences when she got to know about his truth
I just hope he'll manage it
N i hope there will no more GFs in his life any more now

Update soon

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lalibhaskar

@lalibhaskar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Awesome

Ishita started crying when he said he called doctor

Poor girl thought doctor undressed her

Later he explained her

Firstly he asks her to treat the helps mannerly

But when he saw she was comfortably playing with them he scolded them

He did not like her calling Mr. Bhalla in front of the hekos

She wants her to be comfortable at least in front of helps

Last scene superb

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varna_varma

@varna_varma

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#144

superb update, loved it...
ishra 😳 ❤️
plz cont soon...
thnx 4 pm...

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peggy

@peg_pionne

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Awesome update so Ishita has feelings for Raman and Raman is falling in love with her but they are two strong people and i think it's going to be very funny how they accept each other please continue soon 😊

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jaya1867

@jaya1867

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#146

Superb update

ishra scene was awesome

loved it

update soon

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sukanksha

@sukanksha

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#147

Different concept...
N our very own guilt ridden bhalla but this time a cunning one

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Marvi15

@Marvi15

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#148

Its a request!!!! Plz update sooonnn, plz

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sukanksha

@sukanksha

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#149

@2
Gosh this Raman is so so so manipulative...
I was reading and wondering.. Hadh hai yaar... Bholi lomdi kahin ka...
I m speechless over Raman's character