Ishra ss-tera jaana jaise koi baddua,pt 8 on pg 123,teaser on 131

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raksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Divek-ishra
Happy brtday sapna..
May god bless u ..nd get all happiness which u want..

Coming to updt..
Very emotional di..
Y appa want to kill raman..
Updt soon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: anisha960
happy birthday ishra locker
meri sapnu dii
god bless you

ohh di raman crying for ishita
appa wants to kill raman
but ishita came in between
continue soon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Jinal_999
Very nice prologue
Bt very emotional one

Raman ki haalat bohot kharab hai
Felt very sad for him

Appa tried to kill raman..
But why?

Ishita in hospital
Ohh god..
Hope doctor will give good news.
Loved it

Update soon dear

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Yes Raman was shattered

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Mdwst
Hbd
What did Appa do?

Soon u will know

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Originally posted by: nafnaf
Many Happy returns of the day Sapna or should I say Dr Sapna
Hope you had a wonderful day - may you be blessed with love and happiness always - may you always be successful!!!

Prologue

A lovely update Raksha!!!
So Appa was trying to shoot Raman for loving Ishita but instead Ishita got shot and now she is fighting for her life!!!
And Raman is so angry that he says:"kyunki agar use kuch bhi hua toh main kisi ko nahi chodunga.saari duniya ko aag lagaa dunga.yes Mr vishwanathan iyer,I will kill u with my bare hands.he said crying bitterly while appa was just standing feeling guilty for his deeds."

Looking forward to the next update soon please and also thank you so much for the pm and the song choice is great - one of my favourites!!!
Collage as usual beautiful!!!!

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Posted: 8 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: divyaruhi
many many happy returns of the day di
my belated wishes for you

sorry for being late

prologue is damn interesting
loved it totally

raman has become craxy
hope nothing happens to ishu

and appa s the reason for it😕

thanks for pm di
please update soon

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Originally posted by: divyaruhi
i forgot to say

congratulations for new story di

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Originally posted by: -DivyanKaran-
Continue it sooner, pls.

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Author's note- before updating this updt I want to wish all of u a very happy new year 2017.May this new year bring many opportunities your way, To explore every joy of life & turning all your dreams into reality & all your efforts into great achievements. Wishing you a fabulous 2017 with full of great achievements and experiences. A meaningful chapter waiting to be written HAPPY NEW YEAR!

PART 1

Raman hold mr iyer's collar and said-chale jaiye yahan se isse pehle main bhool jaaun ki aap meri ishita ke appa hai jisse woh bahut pyaar karti hai.chale jaiye yahan se mr iyer.

Mr iyer-I am really sorry raman.please don't do this with me.i know I am at fault,i shouldn't have done this but please mujhe rehne do uske paas,mujhe meri ishu ke paas rehne do.usse thik ho jaane do phir chahe mujhe jail bhej dena but please mujhe uske paas rehne do.he said folding his hands,tears were flowing freely from his eyes.

Seeing mr iyer's condition raman hold his hand and said-please don't say like this sir.just pray ki meri ishita thik ho jaaye.i can't live without her.raman said crying bitterly.

Mr iyer hugged Raman tight and said-I am sorry raman,so sorry .

Raman-just save her.he said between his hiccups.mr and Mrs bhalla came to him.raman hugged toshiji tight.

Toshiji-don't worry puttar,isjita jaldi thik ho jayegi.uss bachchi ne kisi ka kuch nahi bigada hai toh bhagwaan uska bhi bura nahi karenge.tu vishwas rakh puttar ,she said and make him sit on the couch.

Everyone,raman,mr and Mrs bhalla,mr and Mrs iyer were sitting and waiting for the doctor to came out and give them some good news .

After two hours,doctor finally came out,raman ran to him to get some news about ishita.

Raman-how is she.he asked worriedly.

Doc-operation is successful.we have taken out the bullet.but she is still unconscious.uske hosh mein aane par hi hum kuch sahi sahi bata payenge.

Raman-can I see her once.

Doc-not now,soon we will shift her in ICU,then u people can see her but only one by one.aur please aap log yahan crowd mat lagaiye,sirf ek person hi ruk sakta hai pateint ke saath.saying so he went while raman and all were waiting for ishita to be shift in ICU.

After about an hour,ishita was shifted to ICU.all went to see her one by one,first Mrs iyer,then Mr iyer,then Mr and Mrs bhalla and finally Raman went inside.

He went closer to her and saw her thoroughly.tears were flowing continuously from his eyes,he went closer and touched her bandaged forehead ,he bend and dropped a feathery kiss on her forehead.

That's when a nurse came and said-why u all r here,dont u know ICU mein sirf ek person hi ruk sakta hai.saying so she went .

Mrs iyer- main ruk jaati hoon.aap log jaiye.

Toshiji don't want to disturb raman but said - raman let's go.

Raman-no maa,main kahin nahi jaa raha.

Mr bhalla- raman please.

Raman-main kahin nahi jaa raha papa,main apni ishita ko chod kar kahin nahi jaa raha.i don't believe anyone for her.

Nurse came again and said-aap log halla mat kijiye,baaki pateint disturb ho rahe hai.

Raman-haan ,all r going.i will stay here only.

Nurse-tum uska pati hai??

Raman-uska hone wala pati.aur main hi yahan ruk raha hoon.he said stern at his decision.

Mrs iyer was about to say something when Mr iyer held her shoulder and signalled her to be silent .she didn't said anything and soon all went out of the cabin leaving ishra alone.

Raman sat beside her and softly caressed her forehead lovingly.

Raman-mujhe hamesha se pata tha ki tum pagal ho ,but itni badi ho nahi jaanta tha.kyun kiya aisa ishita.meri jaan bachane ke liye khud ko khatre mein daal liya.bahut galat kiya tumne.agar tumhe kuch ho jaata toh main tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karta.khabardaar Jo kabhi aisa kiya.i love u jaan,love u alot.he said and pecked her forehead lovingly.

It was midnight,raman was still sitting on the chair holding her hand when the nurse came inside and said- arey u r still awake,so jao thoda.she will take time to gain consciousness.

Raman-no I am ok.isse hosh kab tak aayega.

Nurse- kaha naa it will take time.tum so jao.saying so she gave an injection to ishita and went out.he close his eyes to get some sleep but all he can see waa her getting shot to save him and then rolling down the hill and her head getting banged on the big rock.

He opened his eyes in a jerk and look at ishita,who was still on bed laying unconscious.he went closer to her and hugged her tight.he showered her face with lots of kisses.

Raman-lagta hai jab tak tum nahi uthogi mujhe bhi neend nahi aayegi.so its better to just lay beside u and tell u a story.u know our story,our love story.for time pass,u remember how we met for the first time and how we use to fight.he said smiling and start narrating her their love story.

Three months back

Raman was getting ready when toshiji called him.

Toshiji-puttar aaja naashta kar lein.

Raman-coming maa ,he said coming down.

Toshiji served him hot aaloo ka parantha when Raman said-maa,itne saare mat do.i am getting late.aaj bahut bade company mein interview dene jaana hai.

Toshiji-chale jaana puttar,first have ur breakfast.phir Papa ka aashirwaad le kar chale jaana.

Raman-ok maa,saying he start having his breakfast.afyer having his breakfast he touched toshiji's feet and said-maa,bless me that I get this job.bahut achchi salary hai.agar yeh naukari mujhe mil gayi naa toh bahut jaldi hum ameer ho jayenge.then Papa don't have to work for Mr iyer.

Toshiji-papa will have to do his job either way but it will be great if u get this job.

Raman- but maa,i don't like Papa working as Mr iyer's driver.and I don't like his arrogant daughter too.kya naam hai uska,yes ishita iyer.gamandi kahin ki.pata nahi kya samjhti hai khud ko.he said making a dirty face.

Toshiji smiled hearing this and said-aisa nahi hai Raman,she is a very sweet girl.bas tu hi jhagdata rehta hai usse.

Raman-really maa,woh akad dikhati hai mujhe,paise ki akad.i don't like her attitude.

Toshiji-humekya karna hai puttar.woh maalik hai hum naukar.

Raman-main kisi ka naukar nahi,aur uss nakchadi chuhiya ka toh bilkul bhi nahi.

Toshiji-achcha puttar,bas kar.kyun subah subah apna mood kharab kar raha hai aur time bhi.

Raman-sahi hai,why I am wasting my precious time on that pagal madrasan.he said and finally went out cursing ishita.while toshiji was smiling hearing his murmuring.

That's all for now.enjoy and do comment and hit like.will wait for it.

Ps-150+ likes with long comments for next updt.