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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Anum_says

OMG... Its really shocking..

And Interesting..
Ishita is in Coma...
Looking forward to read more.
Pleaseee update soonish

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Originally posted by: traveller_girl

Very nice update

Nicely written
Intriguing
Continue soon

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lalibhaskar

Entirely different concept

In ur stories ishra first meet would always be a pleasant one, but here it's sorrow
Ishita has lost her husband, child and also fighting for her life because of raman

One thing I liked the most is raman did not run away, he wanted to save her
He is guilty for ishita's state, I the other hand he doesn't want her to file a case against him

The way he was worried for his daughter not able to understand what she needs, unable to provide her mother's love e was really too sad
U have written his helplessness beautifully

Wanting to read mire
Pls update soon

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the update especially the concept and how it is different from all my other stories! Raman's not running away has begun the story and given a glimpse of his character, and I'm glad you liked it! Happy you liked how his helplessness was portrayed! Thank you so much for liking and commenting! Will try to update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: akriti154

Superb update prabh
raman did an accident in drunk state
leading to death of ishita's husband n baby
all assumed him to be her husband
she's in coma
continue soon
thnxx 4 pm

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Originally posted by: mamtasingla

awesome update dear

different concept

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey everyone! Back with a small teaser for this one! I was hoping that I would get the update done by today, however as it seems to be getting longer than I had expected, I will need to change up how the flashback will be incorporated, so it will take more time to complete. So until I get the update done, probably by tomorrow or the day after I have this small teaser for you all. Hope you all will like it...


TEASER

He returned to her room after having his dinner at the hospital cafeteria and brought up his laptop along with a bouquet of get well soon flowers adding onto the many he had placed around her room bringing one whenever he had the chance to whether they were from a real flower shop or from the children that sold flowers down at the entrance of the hospital. And seating himself by her side, he talked to her about her day as much as he could as he worked and attended a video conference trying to conceal where he was as no one knew about Ishita besides him. And after finishing up his office work, he looked down at his watch finding the time to be past visiting hours. Smiling as he knew that no one had disturbed him, he looked over at her understanding that she was getting the special care he wanted her to be getting. And holding her hand yet again, he looked at her as silence for a few moments before he whispered to her...

"I'll see you tomorrow...please get up by then..."

And she had listened to him. The next day he was heading to his office when his phone rang flashing the hospital's number. Parking his car to the side immediately as he panicked fearing the worst, he gulped praying with all his heart that everything was alright and picked up the phone bombarding the doctor on the other side with numerous questions...

"Hello. What happened?! I never get a call at this time, is everything alright? Is Ishita doing okay? Was there any movement or do you need any medicine? I hope nothing went wrong! If you need I can-"

"Relax, Mr. Bhalla. There is nothing to worry about. In fact I have very good news, Ishita has come out of her coma. She just gained consciousness early this morning and I called you right after we finished all the testing and gave her a complete check up."

Was it real? Was she really okay? He didn't know when his tensed expression turned into a wide smile as he put down his phone for a moment taking in the news. She was alright. She would be hurt, angry and would hate him when he would go to the hospital, but she was alright. He thanked Matarani as tears of happiness and relief from his eyes and he was about to immediately rush to the hospital when he heard the doctor trying to speak on the phone. Getting back on the call, he didn't hear the important news the doctor was trying to say and hung up the call after he excitedly exclaimed...

"Are...are you serious?! Ishita's fine?! Oh thank God! I'll...I'm coming right now!" Throwing his phone to onto the passenger seat, he rushed to drive to the hospital cancelling the meeting he completely forgot about on the way, unaware of the shock he was in for once he got into the hospital...

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That's all for this teaser! Hope you all liked it and let me know what you think!😉

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Posted: 9 years ago
no...
prabh why all writers are hell bent to tease me????
I was expecting update from u and u gave teaser, huhh!!!!!!
anyway I am excited to read Ishita reaction and their blooming love, misunderstandings which lead them towards new way to love 😳
plzzz update soon
I know u will hear my pleads. u are our sweet writer na???
so update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
teasing teaser...😛
Please update soon... waiting to see Ishita's reaction

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Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting teaser
What us the shock awaiting
Pls update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
Such an interesting story you have started Prabh..loved it..the teaser is very intriguing too..I hope he has not harmed himself in any way
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautifully written..👏👏...loved every part of it!! Waiting for the next part...

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