SS- Tum bin jiya jaaye kaise(current track)-Pt 3&4(last) on Pg12 - Page 6

Fantastic

Another beautiful update
So emitional
I was flat when raman spoke ..ja rahi ho
It was so intense
Raman should correct his mistake soon
Superb
I m asking for favour
plz pm me
Dont wanna miss this story
update sokn

Originally posted by: Veeann

Reswa

Edited.

Loved it Ann. The way Puttar cares for biwi, then him getting to know about the impact of his words on her, how she has suffered.

And then Puttar with Adi.

I love how biwi is being thoda sa cold with him and not giving him too much bhav.

So well written and so emotional too.

Please continue soon

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Originally posted by: .TIA.

Res 😛

Edited.

Love the update Ann 😳 puttar looking after her and realising his mistakes 👍🏼

I loved how he called Adi and tried to make things up to him 😃

Biwi still being cold and not listening to him 👏

Waiting for the next update.

Thanks for the dedication

🤗 🤗

Originally posted by: QueSeraSera

Hi Anusha,

Just came across this piece of yours and think its wonderfully wriiten.

Read both the parts at one go and love how you have explored the conflict Raman feels for feeling attracted towards Ishita but moreover how it feels right to be with her.

And finally you let him have a glimpse into Ishita' torment and how it changed him for the better as he not only reconnected with Adi in that sweet scene

Awaiting the final part of this one

Love & god bless,

Aani

Originally posted by: abhisree

awesome update..

Originally posted by: ishradivek

Nice update raman has realized his mistake but ishita is not giving him a chance to speak . Update soon

Originally posted by: shalz_123

Anusha, I m humming dat song again thanks to u...thanks for dedication darling...thanks for giving Ishita the backbone. U know how much it means to . I love.u bas. Cant.wait.fr.the.next chapter

Originally posted by: sush_rddt

Amazing... Loved it...

Originally posted by: apoo91

Awesome.. something that I really want to see in the show!!

Raman has realised his mistakes.. finally

Waiting for next