ISHRA SS :|| DIL MEIN JO HAI CHIPA|| Part-4 (Page 30) (July 7)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys,

Many of u might not know since it's the first time I am writing a story here. It's been quite long since I have been on this forum but never thought of writing anything . But now since the next one would be my 1000th post , I wanted to try something new.

I would like to dedicate this story of mine to all the wonderful writers on the forum whose stories inspired me to write this one especially Tanu dii aka ..Armor_Ishra.. and Inshu dii aka -DivyanKaran-.

I seriously don't know how it turned out but I still hope you guys enjoy reading it.

Yours

Akanksha

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PART 1

It was a Sunday morning and he got out of his bed and switched on the radio. He, as usual, was waiting for the clock to strike at 8. This had been his Sunday morning routine for the past 2 years. As soon as the 8 am show started he heard...

RJ: Goood Morning Mumbai

And those words were enough to make Raman's heart skip a beat. After all she was the love of his life, HIS ANGEL, whom he loved since the past 24 years. He started going down the lane...

FLASHBACK

Bhallas and Iyers were best friends since past 30 years. Mr. Bhalla and Mr. Iyer were childhood buddies and their strong friendship resulted in their families bonding so well together. They both lived with their families in neighboring houses and were partners in business. For them caste was never a hurdle. They both were brothers from different mothers.

Both got married around the same time. Mr. Bhalla soon had a son whom he named Raman and Mr. Iyer had a daughter who was named Vandita. After three years of Raman and Vandu's birth, Mrs. Iyer gave birth to an angel who was named Ishita by Mr. Bhalla . After a few years Mrs. Bhalla had twins whom they named Romi and Simmi .

Ishita was the apple of both Bhallas and Iyers eyes. She with her chirpy nature and innocence won everyone's hearts. But for Raman she was his life. When Ishita was born he was the first one to touch her. He fell in love with her innocent face since the first time he saw her. But at that time he was too small to understand such a complex emotion called LOVE .

FLASHBACK ENDS

His chain of thoughts were broken by Ishita's voice

RJ Ishita: Hi guys, it's a brand new Sunday morning and here I am back to you guys. Today being the day of love, the theme for our show today is UNSAID LOVE. I know u guys will find it a bit different. But have u guys ever thought that voicing out love for the second time is easier that voicing it out for the first time. There are many such people who love someone immensely but hesistate to tell it. So today guys I would like all such people who have a special someone whom they are yet to confess their love to do that today itself because THERE IS NO PERFECT TIME FOR SOMETHING ITS YOU WHO MAKES IT PERFECT. So lemme start today's show by a very romantic song from the movie Azhar "Itni si baat hai"

Tere dar pe aake tham gaye
Naina namaazi bann gaye
Ek dooje mein yun dhal ke
Aashiqana aayat ban gaye Main aur Tum

Kaisi dil lagaai kar gaye
Rooh ki rubaai bann gaye
Khaali khaali dono thhe jo
Thoda sa dono bhar gaye Main aur Tum

Chalo ji aaj saaf saaf kehta hoon
Itni si baat hai mujhe tumse pyar hai
Yunhi nahi main tumpe jaan deta hoon
Itni si baat hai mujhe tumse pyar hai

Chalo ji aaj saaf saaf kehta hoon
Itni si baat hai mujhe tumse pyar hai
Mujhe tumse pyaar hai..

Lage na yeh dhoop zaroori
Lage na yeh chaanv zaroori
Milte hain ishq zameen par
Ab do hi naam zaroori Main aur Tum

Apna khuda bhi hoga
Apna hi Rab le lenge
Khud ki bana ke duniya
Ye zindagi jee lenge Main aur Tum

Chalo ji aaj saaf saaf kehta hoon
Itni si baat hai mujhe tumse pyar hai
Yunhi nahi main tumpe jaan deta hoon
Itni si baat hai mujhe tumse pyar hai
Mujhe tumse pyaar hai..

Ek tum, ek main, teeja maangu kya khuda se
Dil doon, jaan doon, kya doon itna bata de
Tera mera rishta hai saanson se bhi naazuk

Tum sa, hum sa, koi duja na hoga na hua re
Do dil sa ik seene mein hai jaise Main aur Tum
Ab dono hum ik jeene mein hain jaise Main aur Tum

Jaan se zyada chaha tumko piya re
Harpal, hardum, humdum tumko jiya re

Aaj saaf saaf kehta hoon
Itni si baat hai mujhe tumse pyar hai
Yunhi nahi main tumpe jaan deta hoon
Itni si baat hai mujhe tumse pyar hai

Chalo ji aaj saaf saaf kehta hoon
Itni si baat hai mujhe tumse pyar hai
Mujhe tumse pyaar hai..

Raman (Thinks): She cares so much about others love. Here it has been 24 years and we are both not able to come out of the JUST FRIENDS ZONE but she wants everyone else to start their love story today. PAGAL MADRASAN. You understand everyone's feeling but can't understand mine. But now it's high time. I will have to tell her about my feelings. Even I should tell her today itself because as she said THERE IS NO PERFECT TIME FOR SOMETHING ITS YOU WHO MAKES IT PERFECT

After some time...

Ishita : That's all for the show today . So it's me RJ Ishita signing off and will be back with an all new theme next Sunday morning. Have a great Valentine's Day guys and may you all have an awesome week ahead.

Raman (Thinks): I guess I should start my surprise by picking her up today. He calls her

Raman: Hi angel

Ishita: Hey Nonu...as usual perfect timing. Did u listen to my show today??

Raman: Angel has there ever been an instance when I have missed you show.. I'll not even miss it for the world

Ishita: Awww you are such a sweetheart. By the way why did u call?

Raman: Angel I am coming to pick you up from the radio station.

Ishita: Why Nonu? I'll come back on my own.

Raman: Nooo... I have a surprise for you. Wait for me there. I'll be there in 15 mins . Bye

Ishita: Ok I'll waiting... come soon. Bye

Little did they know that their day was going to be full of surprises and shocks ...

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Please do read and comment guys to motivate me. It's the very first time I am writing a story on the forum.

Edited by agm1998 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congratulation for 1000 post.. its a nice story.. continue soon...
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INDEX
PART 1 - PAGE 1
PART 2-PAGE 11
PART 3-PAGE 21
PART 4-PAGE 30

Edited by agm1998 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Firstly a very big congratulations on becoming a goldie dear🥳
and again congratz for ur very 1st story👏

coming to story
its awesome 😊
loved the concept 😃
nicely written⭐️
plz continue soon
and ya pm me wen u update next part😉

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Posted: 9 years ago
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CONGRATS 4 ur first story n den turning goldie
nw cming to d story
nycc concept
ishra r frnds
raman in love hesistant to voice out his feelings
waiting 4 d nxt one
cont soon
thnxx 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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u wanted long comment
lets see how it turns out to be😉
Well "CONGRATULATIONS"
Actually Double congrats
first for turning into Goldie
and then for starting ur firsst ever story
and yeah..Thanks a lot for dedicating to me with whole writers...
Love u Akshu
and now coming to the updat
usse pehle i told u i want a TS so thanks for making it as TS
hmm
It was awesome yaar
So raman and Ishu are childhood friends
ishu is his Angel and hi is her Nonu..nyc name😉
so ye pyar abhi k zamane ka nhi balki 24 saal pehle ka...😆
cool...
usk baad Raman loves ishu but what about ishu???
does she love him
well u know jab m ye question puch rahi hoon mujhe wo dialogue yaad aa gaya..movie m ka
wo m tujhe personally bataungi😆
hmm..so it was valentines day and then Ishu is a RJ..wow
very well said dear
"There is no perfect time for something, its you who make it perfect"👏
so raman's gonna propose ishu
u know i always eagerly wait for this confession part😳😆
so I m eagerly waiting for that
arey ye kya...what shock and surprises??????
i wannt its update ASAP...pls...
me curious😉
its pretty long
so updte ASAp
Congratulations again...
Edited by ..Armor_ishra.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrtulations for being Goldie dear 😛

Enjoy the new colour🥳

Congratulations for first story dear 👏

Interesting dear...😊

Waiting for Raman's confession 😉

Continue soon 😳

Thanks for pm 😃
Edited by Sanjana_IshRa - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow dear...loved the update... well written... thank you for the pm... :-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats 4 turning goldie dr
Nice start

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