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richa

@rcha_bhrt

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

superb post

loved RAVAN KUMAR signature 😆

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Balasri

@Sri1091

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Awesome peice dear his POV and den her POV and then their confrontation everything was awesome and den adi sweet heart itz soo good so Raman didn't sign the papers with his correct signatures thank his he realized dat he can't let her go away without explanation and she without keeping mum atlast vented out everything it was jst awesome

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WhyAmIHereAgain

@WhyAmIHereAgain

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Vee... u wrote...aaaw... ha ha group main nahi hu to batai bhi mat...

That was a lovely OS. plz tell me Shagun kya chila rahi thi end main...😆 m so curious to know...

Raman n Ishita...sigh... they better clear the mess before ruhi truth comes out...wish something lik this happns..

he signed ravaan kumar???🤣 i cant stop laughing...

thank darling... I love u too..

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-Gan-

@-Gan-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Vee... I love you bas !

I hope the YHM Cvs steal this ...

I love that you dealt with every aspect of their relationship...their relationship as a couple ... Not as parents...

Thank you thank you for this. Dil se 🤗

Edited by -Gan- - 9 years ago

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momb24

@momb24

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Beautiful

started off all emotional and the ending made me laugh.

thank you for writing this, they reunited before knowing about ruhi😃

If only yhm cv's gave us something close to this, I'll be happy.

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Anju.s

@Anju.s

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Loved it vee. Both POV and Ravan Kumar is not ready to leave his Jhansi ki rani .

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Rkchinju

@Rkchinju

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Outstanding 👏 👏
Totally loved it...
Great work 👏
Keep writing..

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Maya

@mayasun

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Hi Vee,

Superb. I hope CV steal your script.

This was very refreshing instead of blaming one person it is was very balanced.

The part I liked the most was the dealt the issues as a couple and not as parents.

I really want to know what Shagun was screeching. Hope you give a epilogue about it.

Thanks for the friends who blackmailed you to write this it a wonderful piece😆

Edited by mayasundar - 9 years ago

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-K.13-

@-K.13-

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Yayyy! You finally wrote an OS 🥳

I'm so happy you caved to peer pressure 😃

As for the story - loved the confrontation but the icing on the cake was the post script...how apt for Raavan Kumar 😆

Hope you find more inspiration in the near future 😉

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jhansi26

@jhansi26

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Simply awesome work...

Beautifully scripted and you have done justice to both the characters and their emotions. I simply hope the CVS could do half of it.

Loved all the parts but...the most loved part will be the post script. I just loved how Raman has not let her go and just signed as Ravan kumar.

I just hope we could see these type of beautiful works in future too though I know now yhm hardly worth it.

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