IshRa FF: Meri Duniya Hai Teri Chahaton Mein (Prologue Added)

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Pasoori

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Posted: 9 years ago

Meri Duniya Hai Teri Chahaton Mein

Hi all you guys! I know all of us are pretty disturbed with the ongoing track and we are ought to be! Our babies are separated, they are pitted against each other ... what could be worse than this? That's why, I am here to bring some light relief to the forum in the form of my story! 😃

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Aren't stories of boy loving the girl and sacrificing for her sake too common these days? So why not try something hatke! Come on, there's no, is there? Well, my story is about all consuming love from the balanced perspective of two distinct personalities. I hope you'll like it people...!!

P.S.No semblance to Mohabbatein in any which manner except for the names of the characters!

Edited by Badtameez_Dil_1 - 9 years ago

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Pasoori

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Prologue on page 1

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Pasoori

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Posted: 9 years ago

PROLOGUE
Ishita lazily rose from her bed, her body aching, yet she put on a smile and picking up her phone from the side table, she turned it on and lovingly ran her hand through the pic of the man who'd become the centre of her universe within merely seven months. She blew a feather kiss on the spot of his forehead. Hugging the phone to her chest, she put it away ever so gently and walked into the washroom to bring in this special day.

She'd done all the preparations and the only thing she was awaiting was the cake to get baked so she could decorate it in absolute accordance to his preference! Once everything was done, she called him on his cell a few times; upon not getting a response she gave up and just then she saw him knocking on the door. She quickly opened the door and pecked his forehead; hugging him tightly whilst wishing him a happy birthday. He reciprocated and ruffled her hair whilst whispering "not happy ... it's my happiest birthday! Ishita my dream has been fulfilled!!"

A crestfallen Ishita loosened her grip over him and quietly said "congratulations meri jaan" whilst he side hugged her and mouthed a big "thank you" to which she just smiled in response... an excited Raman animatedly asked Ishita what all she had planned whilst she held her tears back and got the freshly baked cake with his favourite decoration. She asked him to cut the cake with him but for some reason she couldn't get herself to do so ... all of a sudden she felt like an outsider in his life... a stranger and thoughts like these ate her up in the insides and broke a part of her ...

... she stood with him ... as a part of his celebration yet she felt like she was unneeded ... she asked him to leave as they had a plan to meet tomorrow as he made faces she realized that there were many more important things in his life to be worried about so she reassured him "it's ok"

Comment your views! Thanks 😳

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lakshmi

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Posted: 9 years ago

interesting start dear

superb prologue

love ishu touches raman photo on her phone then kiss him and make close to her heart dear

i am happy for raman dream fulfilled

love ishra hug and kiss

but i am confuse with ishu behavior dear why she suddenly have a feeling that she is unneeded in his life dear ?

what is raman dream that fulfilled after that ishu reaction changed ?

please continue soon dear

dear i have an request font size is so small unable to read comfortably if possible change the font size so that all can read with out any problem

thanks for pm me dear