ISHRA story AFTER LEAP,UPDATED part 11 on pg 136 on 9th oct

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divyaruhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#661

Originally posted by: traveller_girl
Part 8 i and ii
Awesome updates
Nicely written
Continue soon

thanks di
will update soon

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divyaruhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#662

Originally posted by: lonelyyy
part 8-i
diii itna rula diya aapne iss part mein
ru hugged her ishima tightly
n then ishima hugged her tightly
ishru talk so emo

now reading 8-ii
will commemt soon

n big wala sowy for late reply

oh...
i am sorry for making you crime
its okay
you commented atleast,that's what i want

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divyaruhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#663

Originally posted by: lonelyyy
part 8ii
raman ne bta diya pihu or ushu ko sab kuch
pihu ne jb no kha main toh dr gyi
ruhi is also hurt
thankgod now everything is ok
noww waiting for ishra talk i think one more emo update is on way
waitin for update
update soonn

once again sorry for rply

yes,its going to be emotional
will update soon dear

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divyaruhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#664

hai friends,this is to thank you sincerely each and everyone who made this story a success,i have not even dreamt of it crossing even 50 pages, but today i am here to thank you all for making this story cross 100 pages

THANK YOU SO MUCH,GUYS

the reason why i am here goes to you only,my loyal and lovely readers.though i got demotivated many times,some of my friends boosted up my energy and never let me do so.i am happy now that i didn't do anything as such

i will end my bakwaas her and THANK YOU ALL once again
scroll down for update

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divyaruhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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PART 9

raman went to the room only to see that ishita and ruhi were still sleeping,he came out and went out calling someone.
after sometime,aaliya and pihu came there and before aaliya could stop her,pihu went and woke ishita,and that broke ishru's sound sleep.
Ru what happened pihu????why did you wake me????
and then,she again snuggled herself into ishita keeping her head on ishita's chest while ishita just hugged her.pihu made a sad pot and faked her loud cry
I what happened pihu?????
Pi i too want to hug you
ishita opened her arms and pihu ran and settled herself on ishita's lap and ishita hugged her both daughters,one on her lap and the other beside her.aaliya looked at this and is happy as well as sad.she is happy to see her amma finally happy,but is sad that she has to live away from her amma from now.
she was silently going away from there,but ishita noticed that and called her back and hugged her too.aaliya felt happy with this gesture of ishita.
their moment was broken by amma and appa who had brought food for her.
Am can i also have that luck to hug my daughter???
all the four looked at the door only to see amma,appa standing there. as soon as ishita saw amma she could only remember amma's slap and tears again started to flow reminiscing that her own amma now hates her.seeing tears in their mother's eyes,the three daughters stood between her and amma-appa as if protecting her
Ru paati,if you have come to scold ishima,then please go away
Pi yes paati,just now my ishima started to laugh and you are making her cry again
Ap no,we came here to give carrier to your ishima
Ru why???i have already brought one naa
Am it must have become cool.so,we thought to bring a new carrier.
I who told you that i didn't eat the carrier which ruhi made for me??
Ap adi told us ishu.now why this interrogation????won't you hug your appa.i missed you a lot kanna
ishita stood up to go to her appa,but before that appa himself came to her and hugged her
I i too missed you a lot appa
Ap then,why didn't you atleast let me know that you were alive
I i am sorry appa
and again she started crying.pihu immediately ran to ishita and wiped her tears and kissed her cheeks
Pi don't cry ishima,i also feel like crying
ishita made her sit on her lap and kissed her too.
Pi taata.i told you naa,don't make my ishima cry.see what you did?pihu is angry with you
and she kept an angry pout.
Ap sorry,pihu.from now,i will never make your ishima cry,okay
Pi okay,done
and then she turned to ishita
Pi ishima,i am hungry,you will feed me naa
I of course,pihu
Ru mujhe bhi
Aa mujhe bhi
I sure,everyone come
ishita sat on bed and her three daughters too sat in front of her while amma sat on the stool nearby and opened the box which she has bought
I i will eat the one which my daughter prepared
Am ishu,are you still angry with me that i have beaten you??????
I😭 no amma,you have right to do so,but i didn't expect that you would leave me and go away
Am i am sorry kanna
Ru ishima,please don't cry naa
ishita immediately wiped her tears and smiled looking at them.
Am so,i will feed my daughter today and she will feed her daughters, what say??????
Pi no,i will feed my ishima
Ru&Aa me too
soon,ishita was fed by everyone and she too fed everyone.
she had her first morsel and moaned
I hmm...its so yummy.till date,i didn't eat something tasty like this. amma,you must learn from my daughter.
and she winked at amma.
Am oh sure,why not????what ruhi,you will take classes for me,right??
and she laughed.they all had a happy time together and soon,all of them left home leaving aaliya with ishita.ruhi and pihu promised that they would come at evening along with bhallas.
ishita is just sitting on bed in half laying position reminiscing the time she spent with her ru.she was playing with her dollar and that made sound.
aaliya looked at ishita lost in her thoughts with a smile on her lips
Aa wow,amma.this pendant is so pretty.i didn't observe you wearing this before
I its a new one,aalu.my ru gave it to me
Aa when amma?????

flashback

ishru were talking with each other when suddenly ruhi asked ishita to close her eyes
Ru ishima,close your eyes.i have something for you
I why ru??????
Ru its a surprise ishima.please don't argue naa,please pls pls
ishita simply closed her eyes,and ruhi immediately put that chain around ishita and told her to open her eyes.
ishita opened her eyes and was in awe looking at that beautiful pendant

Ru how is it ishima????
I i just loved it,ru.oh god,its so simple and beautiful.but when did you but it???
Ru i bought it with my first earning.i always thought that i will gift you something precious with my first salary
I when did you think all this,ru????
Ru when adi bhayya brought you a clutch purse with his football match money,then itself i have decided that i would buy you something with my first earning.
ishita had tears hearing this
I but,you were angry with me naa????
Ru yes,but i couldn't stop myself from buying this.as soon as i saw that,the only person i remembered is you,ishima.i agree that i was angry with you,but i prayed everyday that you should find me soon
tears are flowing continuously from either eyes and each are wiping the others.
I i am sorry,ru.
Ru i am also sorry ishima.i should have trusted your loved on me.you know what ishima????whenever,nidhi used to say that i am her son,i wanted to shout aloud that,only my ishima is my mother,no other person have that right.
ishita hugged ruhi close to her heart and
I i love you ru,i am really sorry baccha.
Ru ishima,don't remove this gift,okay
I of course,i am not going to do that ever.

flashback ends

Aa you love ruhi a lot naa
I of course,she is my jaan
Aa amma,i want to ask you something.you won't feel bad naa
I of course,no aaliya.we are more friends than mother daughter.you are free to ask whatever you want.
Aa amma,are you going to stay back in india????
I yes,aalu.
Aa why amma????these people left you 7 years ago naa.raman uncle sent you out naa.how will you go back????
I i know raman.he was angry with me then,but the truth is he can never think of hurting me.he did so because he want to vent out his frustration and anger on someone.
Aa whatever you say,i can't accept that you are going back to the same person because of whom you were in so much pain for the past 7 years
I enough aaliya.lets end this topic.
Aa what about appa and me,amma????
ishita became silent with this as she has no answer to it.
Aa appa loves you,amma.he want to marry you,and...
I enough aaliya.i and mani already talked about that and mani understood what i want to say.you have to understand one this that whatever happens,raman is,was and will be my husband.
Aa what if raman uncle still is angry with you and won't allow you into house.
I that will never happen.i know him well and i said that i would stay in india not in bhalla house
Aa what are you saying amma????
I you will understand it soon.
Aa amma,are you angry with me for talking like that.i am sorry,its just that...
I its okay aalu.i can understand.but,you have to know that i am only raman's and even if i want,i can't erase him from my heart.i think you are mature enough to understand this.i don't want to hurt you,but please understand my point of view
Aa okay amma.i am gonna miss you,once i returned australia
I i will also miss you,but don't worry,i am going to disturb you everyday and lets videochat.
Aa sure amma
then,they talked for some more time and slowly ishita drifted to sleep under the effect of medication.aaliya covered her fully and went out.

after 2 hours,raman came into the room with lunch in his hands only to see ishita sleeping peacefully.he went near her,caressed her cheeks with the back of his palm and planted a feathery kiss on her forehead.

i hope it is worth enough to read.i want to update ishra talk too.its almost over.but,i was disappointed with the response i got in prevoious part.only 59 likes in part 2 while i got 78 likes in first part.its my feeling that you people are not able to read as i am updating long parts.
so,i will update ishra talk in next part,that too only if you satisfyu me with your likes and comments.
i want atleast 100 likes.

Edited by divyaruhi - 9 years ago

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divyaruhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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updatec part 9
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Edited by divyaruhi - 9 years ago

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Tulishikha Biswas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#667

Super duper update
Love it
Thanks for pm

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divyaruhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#668

Originally posted by: Dark-Beauty
Super duper update
Love it
Thanks for pm

thanks di
glad that you loved it
you are welcome

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lonelyyyy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#669

unres
great update
luved ru pihu luv for her ishima
dat scene was so good
khana time was also nice
dat pendant was so awesome
i like d way ishu make aalu understand

whole update was good
i just luved it muaahhh

i was thunkung y cv's cant think like dis???

update sooonnn

Edited by lonelyyyy - 9 years ago