ISHRA story AFTER LEAP,UPDATED part 11 on pg 136 on 9th oct

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hello friends,
today is my friend's birthday and she asked me to write an OS on the current track as her birthday wish,she is not a member of IF,but reads stories here,and she requested me to not mention her name,so its her birthday gift

actually,i don't like the idea of leap itself,but for my friend's sake,i am writing it,don't know how it will turn out,so,please pardon me in advance

first,i will update prologue today and seeing the response,i will update the whole story,you are free to bash me too

PROLOGUE

on romi's marriage day

only family members are present in the marriage hall,all the guests left,ishita is all ready to expose all the truth,she looked at abhi and he too gave her signal


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ishita went near pihu and kneeled down and hugged her to her heart,seeing this scene ruhaan(ruhi's) blood boiled
raman went near them and pulled pihu to himself
ishita looked at raman in surprise and little anger and signalled simmi to take her out
R be in your limits,ishita,don't you ever come near my kids
I what are you talking raman???i am her ma
R you are not her mother,you are not even a step mother
I enough raman,i won't hear another one word against me,you have tested enough of my patience




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R you killed my daughter,my ruhi,can you get her back???
I FYI,she is my daughter too,but what do you want now
R i want my ruhi back,will you give her to me
I of course,i will
then,she went near ruhaan who is seeing the whole scene abd removed her wig in a jiffy,and turned towards all the people who were shocked
I here is your ruhi,


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ishita crying uncontrollably
I you have said true,i am really a bad luck,but you can't say that i am not even a step mother,i really loved all the kids as my own,but you don't worry,you don't need to kill me,i am already dead,just i am a living corpse,now i will really disappear from this world,and blood came ot from her mouth
soon,she fell unconscious on the floor leaving behind a shocked and crying family

INDEX

PART 1 PG 8
PART 2 PG
18
PART 3 PG 22
PART 4 PG 30
TEASER 1 PG 33
PART 5 PG 43
TEASER 2 PG 48
PART 6 PG 61
PART 7 PG 81
PART 8 PG 93
PART 9 PG 107
PART 10 PG 120
PART 11 PG 136

that's it,tell me your views on this
and if i get satisfied with the response,i will update soon
HAPPY BIRTHDAY my dear friend



i hope you will read this and feel happy
enjoy your birthday

please read and comment
don't forget to hit LIKE
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traveller_girl thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Me 1st...yay
Wow superb prologue
Continue soon
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hi...
superb prologue buddy... my birth day wishes to ur friend... may all dreams come true..
continue soon buddy
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg.. It's really emotional...
Update soon
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Uff srujana it is awesome
I want update of it asap
Uprate sooonnnm
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continue soon..
it ws awesum start...👏
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Happy Birthday to your friend
Nice Prologue
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Superb prologue hope yeh show mein ho yaar
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Update soon..pls show Raman getting punished...he is continuously verbally abusing her!!
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Very nice and interesting start plz continue soon want to read more on this and wish ur frnd happy bday from my side.

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