ISHRA story AFTER LEAP,UPDATED part 11 on pg 136 on 9th oct

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divyaruhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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hello friends,i am here to present OS
its gonna be a long part and will post half today and the other half again,may be tomorrow,if i get satisfied with the response,and i am happy with the response as i got 50 likes for the first time,hope you continue this love
it will be mostly on ishita as i really feel bad for her and also may be i am a girl,i can feel her pain,will write about raman too,may be in the other part
THANK YOU friends

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coming to the update,
it starts after romika marriage,all the guests left and only family members are left now.everyone are in their own thoughts.the one and only confused one is the little poor soul.our little pihu.today,she is seeing different shade of her family today,especially her father.he is not the lovely father today she know and loves,she felt she don't know this raman

ishita is standing away from all the members,but ishra are stealing glances at each other.ruhi(ruhaan) is watching everything decided to go away,ishita observed this and signalled aaliya to stop ruhi,which aaliya did immediately,ishita is fully determined to expose the whole truth today,but waiting for the right time and also to take a stand for herself as she had had enough.she looked at abhi and he signalled that everything is over as planned and everything is umder their control

then,she went near mr.&mrs.bhalla first and bent to take their blessings.they hugged her and she whispered
sorry mummyji and papaji,i did a big mistake by leaving you all,i was really helpless,i thought i failed a big time and i behaved selfish,and didn't care about anyone.i could not use my mind then,i must have informed later,but guilt and fear overpowered me,so i did an unforgivable mistake,but today,ipromise i will give you back that valuable thing which is far away from you because of me
then,she went to simmi and hugged her and whispered
i know simmi,you are angry on me,but all i can say is i am sorry as i failed as DIL of this house and i didn't think about anyone except me,i really thought i am a bad omen for your family as your brother said.so,i want to keep you all safe away from me
then she hugged mihika and romi,they bent to take her blessings
you both should always live happily.don't ever differentiate between between you two,think both of you as one rather than you and me,there should be no talk of mine and yours in your lives.live for each other rather than yourself and also be for each other whenever just because you love each other.don't allow any cause to enter between you,because a couple must be together because they love each other,not because they have a connecting string between them
then,she went to vandu and bala and bent to take their blessings.they hugged her and she cried like a kid
I all i can say is sorry,i am really sorry,this is what i can say
she hugged shravu and kshitija too and gave them each kisses

raman could not see this drama anymore.he thoght of going away.but,he can't leave pihu alone where all are in their own world.so,he searched for her only to see her between adi and ruhaan.from her face expression,he can understand thatshe is confused and terrified too,she is holding adi's hands tightly,not leaving him even for a second.he remembered pihu already telling him that she would be with her adi bhayya as her dad is not the way she loves him.she also told him that he is rude and arrogant and not lovely and said to talk to her only if he behaves like her dad.so,having no other choice,he went away from them and sat silently showing his back to them as if not interested in all these

then,ishita went to amma and appa and folded her hands before them and said
i am sorry amma and appa.because of me,you both suffered a lot.from my childhood,i made you worried for many things.you are always tensed for me in one way or the other.in childhood,you are bothered about my health,then about my marriage and after thatmany dramas in my life and then,thinking i am dead,i am really your culprit.but,what can i do,the 2 persons whom i love the most left me,i lost my identity itself,i could not think straightly.so,i did that.i didn't even think once about you.but,only thought about myself,i am really so sorry
appa couldn't bear anymore and went to hug her.she cried bitterly in her appa's arms,soon amma too joined them
finally,she went to kids and at first hugged adi
I ishima is really sorry adi,i only thought about ruhi and raman,i didn't think about you.but,you kept on thinking about me.i couldn't live without ruhi.but,couldn't think that i have one more child,my adi and he too needs me.mumma has become so selfish,you are not angry on me,naa,you will forgive me,naa.but i have to tell you adi,if its ruhi that made me feel like a true mother,its surely you who made me feel like a successful and proud mother,thank you adi
adi hugged his ishima and cried like a kid.he cried as if removing out all his burden through his tears.ishita kept on consoling him until his cried reduced.everyone present there had tears in their eyes,ruhi also got teary eyed without her knowledge seeing her ishima in tears.but she couldn't understand what they are talking about and why is she away from all
she went near ruhi to hug her,but backed off thinking something,then she went near pihu and hugged her to her heart by kneeling in front of her,that's the time raman turned towards them

will update ishra confrontation in the next post
it already became a long one

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Edited by srujanaroy - 9 years ago

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divyaruhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

ISHRA CONFRONTATION

ishita hugged pihu and is shedding tears silently,ruhi is burning in anger seeing this that her ishima didn't hug her,but hugged her own daughter and she could not take it anymore and went out,soon aaliya too followed her,raman came there and pulled pihu to himself and looked angrily at ishita while ishita looked with little anger and surprise
ishita signalled simmi to take pihu out as she don't want pihu to witness this ugly fight.ishita thought to settle scores with raman as she won't get this chance again
I what is this raman??
R how dare you,ishita,don't you dare to come near my kids
I why shouldn't i?they are my kids too
R don't you dare to say that again,they are only my kids,now you don't dare to claim them as yours.you have lost that right when you left leaving them 7 years ago
I FYI,you are the one who told me to go awat from your life and also told me not to show my face to you ever again
with that,raman became silent.but,ishita thought to prolong it as it is the only chance for her to open up raman,she want raman to open up all the grief that he hid inside himself for 7 long years
I so,now i have decided,i have had enough of this,i will meet my kids whenever i want
R don't you dare ishita
I why shouldn't i ?i am their ma
R don't call yourself that,because you are never a mother,not even a step mother,you have left them for your selfish motive and even didn't come back in these 7 years,did you atleast once thought how they would have been without you?
I enough raman,i have already listened enough,i won't tolerate a word against me,yes,i behaved selfish,but you can't point on my motherhood,i never gave them a feeling of step mother,i loved them like my own children,i didn't want to come back because you called me as a bad omen and i was in guilt of killing my daughter,that's why i couldn't face you
R yes,then also you left them when they needed you the most,now don't tell that ruhi is your daughter,you have lost that right,nrither ruhi nor pihu is your daughter
I i know i did wrong by running away from my problems and also not facing them,but did you think you did all right?you didn't even tell pihu that i am her real mother,okay,i left you because you said that all the difficulties in your life is because of me and i too felt that right,i was hurt when you said that i brought bad luck in your life,i was blaming myself for the hurt in your eyes.i really died seeing the hate in your eyes and when you said that i am no more required in your life,atleast once,did you think how i would have felt all this time,no,you are in your own distress and hurt me more,i couldn't take it anymore,i am already in so much depression that i lost my daughter in front of my eyes,and more over that you blamed me for it and called me bhaanj too,the one who fought against the whole world due to that name,finally himself gave me that title.i could understand your condition raman,but no one is there to console me and its beyond the limit i can tolerate,i myself couldn't forgive me for all those happened,so,my brain didn't work and only thing i could think was to kill myself and give you all those happiness
she started it with a lot of angriness,but ended in full of tears
R enough enough,i don't want to hear your point of view,its all because of you that i lost my daughter
I shut up raman,i too lost my daughter,whatever you say,ruhi is my daughter,and okay,if me calling ACP there is the reason for all those,then what else would you have done,even if ACP didn't arrive,then that nidhi would have took away our ruhi,i thought that was the best then
R whatever you say,you are the reason that ruhi is not here today
ishita had had enough,now its high time
I enough raman,just enough,even i can blame you,if i am silent means that doesn't mean you will keep on blaming me,let me remind you,you are the one who thought of surrogacy idea,first of all.i was happy with adi and ruhi,i tried to make you understand too,i was satisfied with what i had thinking it as god's wish for me,but,you are adamant to give me my own kid to overcome your guilt,you went against god's wish and i am the one facing the result of that as i lost all the ones whom i love the most,i had to be away from my family,then also,you are the one who told that we should give ruhi and its not me,i am against that,but you made me agree,you also told that you will came from behind and save both our daughters,but i know nidhi would do something,so i called ACP,and you are blaming me for that,for once did you think how i will handle both of them atleast until you came
just then,ruhi came in along with aaliya and abhimanyu,ruhi who heared the last part that its his papa's idea to exchange her felt as if the ground under her is sinking down,she felt her world collapsing for thinking like this all these years and hating her ishima for no reason
ishita unable to control herself collapsed on the floor and continued
I you actually proved subbu true raman,that kids are needed in future to hold husband and wife together,he just said me,but you proved it,how much ever i tried,i could not become your wife,i was only your kid's mother,not your wife,and then you proved i am not even your kid's mother,you made me feel like a bhaanj
raman is literally shocked with all these words,but as soon as he saw,all he could remind was only ruhi,so again he got anger
R now stop all this drama,i don't have time for you,why are you saying all these,whatever you say,it won't change the past that you have killed ruhi,now whatever you do,you can't get her back,can you?????
I now,what do you want raman??????
R i want my daughter,my ruhi back,can you give her back to me
I of course,i will
then,she went to where ruhaan is standing and pulled out her wig in a jiffy exposing her long beautiful hairs,shocking everyone to bits,all are shocked with this new revealation
I this is your ruhi,raman,i gave her back to you,now are you happy,i rectified the mistake which happened due to me

raman is shocked to know that ruhaan is none other than ruhi,his princess.he went to her and hugged her tight and kissed all over her face,ishita is happy to see this,suddenly,she started coughing which drew the attention of everyone towards her only to see blood coming out of her mouth,all ran towards her,but she stopped them showing her hand

I you are true raman,i am really a bad omen,i have bought difficulties in many lives,actually i committed suicide 7 years ago,but mani saved me and lost his legs,so,i took care of aaliya,but i was not happily living as you said,i was dying each second with guilt and hurt,i agree i did wrong,but you can't say,i am not even a step mother,because i truly love them,but you don't worry,i will never meet them even if i want and you don't need to kill me for that,i am doing it for myself,from now,you can permanently get rid of this bad luck from your life
she is continuously coughing and blood is coming out from her mouth,then she turned towards ruhi
I now you are happy naa,rooh,you are with your superman and lovely family and as you wished you are away fron nidhi's clutches as i made her arrest and also your ishima,sorry ishita bhalla and papa will never meet again
with that,she fell unconscious on the ground slowly drifting into an unknown world

with this,i end it
i will update in next part about raman's feelings and how ishita came to know about ruhi
i think i didn't forget anything and ishra confrontation is something upto level
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Edited by srujanaroy - 9 years ago

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divyaruhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

updated part i of os
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Edited by srujanaroy - 9 years ago

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arreddy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

awesome update..

ishu feelings are so heart wrenching.. with the new olv i feel like killing rkb..any way u r too good in writing in this story.. update soon next part..