IshRa Revival SS - 27/9/16 - Pg 12 Part -3

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MlovesKSG

@MlovesKSG

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Beautifully Written Dear
Emotional One
Raman's emotion Very Well portrayed
Hope Aise hi kuch Epi m mile

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Suma

@Suma1012

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

awesome concept. beautifully written. I loved it so much.very emotional convo bw both father and son.waiting for ishita POV. pics are very nice. if it is possible plz PM me.

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kaa1202

@kaa1202

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Beautiful Maya..

Raman's POV & his admiration for Adi rtoo good..

U nailed it..

CVs know only to butcher Raman..

Hope they show like this in future too...

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Roopareddy777

@Roopareddy777

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

wowww it z jst fantastic...
u wrote very welll...

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MEHRIN SHANAVAS

@mehermalik

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

its is very emotional and heart touching part cont soon waiting

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Dhristi

@Rayaland

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Very emotional part hope the bond shown in show too of adi nraman

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

I haven't read much of anyone's work before.Just started reading stories because I miss the OLD YHM and this piece of story from you gives me just that. It's brilliantly put. I love how you've kept the story tied with logic, kept Raman like Raman who realizes he made a mistake and also amazed at how beautifully you have scripted Adi and his relation. Adi is the best person according to me who could be mediator for his parents and families.

Looking forward to see how you move ahead with the story. 😊