Ishra ss - tu hi re ( part 4 updated)

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Akriti154

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Interesting plot
do continue
welcome to the forum

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attitudequeen17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

nyc part dear

but nxt time thoda bada...ye bahot chotu hai...

hmm...so ishu is now blushing

hayee..jaldi jaldi update karo...

update soon

thnx for the pm😊

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rufana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

nice update Aruna but

it was very short...

raman was lost in ishu's beauty...😳

if possible try to give a bit longer updates dear...

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Krishna priya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Welcome dear 😊
Congratulations for your first story 😛
Interesting dear 😳
Continue soon 😳

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gargpoo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Welcome dear..
Its really interesting...
Raman ne rang diya ishu ko..;).
Loved it..
Cont soon!

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Hima Bindu.CH

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Really nice dear!!😊👏

But itna chotusa!!!🤔

I want a bigger one dear!!!😃

Will be waiting!!! Please update soon!!!😃😃😃

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Love_pearl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Hi friends. Sorry that I couldn't update it yesterday. Was out of town. But now let's go for part 3

Part 3

" oh come on akka, please tell me na who is he? Are you in love with him? "

" MIKU, what nonsense yaar? Ok . If you want to know he was Raman kumar bhalla, the same rowdy guy who lives in front of our house. I think he mistakenly put colours on me. "

" Oh, then that was accident for sure. " mihika was sounding disappointed.

" but that ravan kumar, I just hate him. U know what he coloured me once again. He is so rude, didn't even said sorry, huh, " Ishita was fuming with anger.

" U know what akka, u r misunderstanding him. He is such a nice guy. Yesterday when I was returning from market I saw him helping an old man. Also he has helped Appa too. He is the same guy who helped Appa to get this house. " Mihika always had a fond of spying every one. She was always full of latest news in the chawl as like today.

" but still, don't u remember that day when we entered the chawl first time, he was beating a boy mercilessly. What about that? " Ishita tried to prove her point.

" that was the real rowdy guy. He was blackmailing Sarika . She lives in our chawl only. He was saying that he will destroy her life. That's why Raman warned him not to trouble her but he started badmouthing about her.So Raman beat him. And still Raman was the only one who then took that guy to the hospital and paid his bill also. Still do you think that he is the bad guy? "

" Oh god mihika, and I was scolding him like anything. Ayyo murgan, what have I done? " Ishita was feeling very hurt. In a moment she told mihika that she will meet her after some time. Before mihika could say anything Ishita was near Raman.

" excuse me, Raman..." Raman turned only to get surprised seeing HER again. He looked at her questioningly . Ishita gathered her all courage. And she spoke everything in a single breath.

" Raman, I am sorry. I should not have scolded you in such a way. I am feeling really bad..."

" you don't need to be sorry. I was the one who should be... and u don't need to be sad either

Udaas honey ke liye umar padi hai

Nazar uthao samne zindagi padi hai

Apni hasi ko hotonse Jane mat dena

Kyun ki aap ki hasi main meri duniya khadi hai

And don't ever forget that. I really mean it. "

And Raman went away smiling. Not before he could see ishu turning crimson. And ishu was all like blush blush and blush. It took a whole minute for her to regain her senses. Mihika who just got there was surprised to see her sister who was now playing colour with hands not even with her knowledge.

So this is it. If you like to read it then please leave your comments.

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Ritika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Res
Unres
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Can I know ur name? I am Ritika...
And welcome to the forum and this writing world...
-------------------
Back to the update...
I was just checking the forum when I found ur story and just thought to take a round there...
I was just reading casually and suddenly it seemed interesting.. I started reading it very carefully and to be honest I just loved it..
I read few stories where RKB is a business man, even in my stories he played the same role..but here something different...
Hmm!! So in their first meeting Ishita misunderstood him.. But she doesn't know she meant to be him..
Ishita doesn't like color but end up having color on her face and that too from Raman... Hayes!!! Pyar kaj rang hai utar ne se bhi nhi utrega...
Mihika spying.. That's quiet funny, she had much information about Raman.. Wow!! So finally Ishita is sorry and she went to apologize.
Awww!! Raman's shayari... Blushing blushing Ishita not bad... Abhi se yeh haal hai na jane aagey kya hoga...
And Raman... Through his Shayari he had already confessed his feelings...
Simply I loved it re...
Cont soon.
If possible pm me buddy...

Edited by SRKP_FAN - 9 years ago

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attitudequeen17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

itna chotu update

i want big one yaar

Awesome update like it

ao she started liking him...

nnyc one dr

update soon

thnx for pm

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Love_pearl

@Love_pearl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: SRKP_FAN
Res
Unres
-------------------
Can I know ur name? I am Ritika...
And welcome to the forum and this writing world...
-------------------
Back to the update...
I was just checking the forum when I found ur story and just thought to take a round there...
I was just reading casually and suddenly it seemed interesting.. I started reading it very carefully and to be honest I just loved it..
I read few stories where RKB is a business man, even in my stories he played the same role..but here something different...
Hmm!! So in their first meeting Ishita misunderstood him.. But she doesn't know she meant to be him..
Ishita doesn't like color but end up having color on her face and that too from Raman... Hayes!!! Pyar kaj rang hai utar ne se bhi nhi utrega...
Mihika spying.. That's quiet funny, she had much information about Raman.. Wow!! So finally Ishita is sorry and she went to apologize.
Awww!! Raman's shayari... Blushing blushing Ishita not bad... Abhi se yeh haal hai na jane aagey kya hoga...
And Raman... Through his Shayari he had already confessed his feelings...
Simply I loved it re...
Cont soon.
If possible pm me buddy...