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kavya

@s_kavya

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#121

Another awesome update Prabh you penned down it simple and beautiful... both ishra realizing there mistake... and realize from which situation the other going through... it was such beautiful update... very well written... waiting for next update continue soon .. 😊

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Shravs

@shravsss

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#122

Awesome girl... You rock... Beautifully written...

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Nadeeka

@niluhansani

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#123

nice updat dr.. i love their hug in last.. they understood each other.. lovely part.. update soon nxt part

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peggy

@peg_pionne

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#124

A really excellent and outstanding update everything was perfectly describe waiting impatiently for the next update 😉 👏

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yashivid

@yashivid

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#125

Lovely update prabh. Enjoyed every bit of it.

Finally they understood each by stepping in each other's shoes. Sometimes turning the tables around solves greatest of the problems and that's wat happened here.

U described both their POV n emotions exceptionally well.

And finally their hug solved their fight. Jadoo ki jhappi sorts biggest problem u see.😉

Can't wait to read the next part after reading the precap so pls pls pls update sooner this time.

Thanks for the PM

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Isha Pathare

@Isha_Pathare

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#126

Kya tum ne thaan li hai, ki mujhe rula ke shodna hai😭

Ek din mein kitna rulaoge

Ok jokes apart

Brilliant update

Changes among both resulting into the realisation there mistakes is written so beautifully 👏

Eagerly waiting for Ishra talk

PS: one request if possible can you post one light hearted shot , not necessary of this story or any of your ongoing stories

But a simple moment in your style 😊

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#127

This was a beautiful idea to write on. Something so different from the usual. The man caring more for the girl, busy in enjoying his life and the girl more bothered about their future and thus end up hurting each other. I would have expected an intense and long bitter separation here but the mature angle this story has taken surprised me. Both the characters went though a journey of understanding the others point and situation and in fact came out stronger from the ordeal.

I am in love with how you can create such strong characters in the span of a few updates, sometimes even just One shots. That although they aren't the same from the show, we can feel them.

Can't wait for the next one. 😳