ISHRA SS WO HUMSAFAR MERA prologue added on pg 1 on 15 march

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Hello guys
i know my two stories are going on but kya karru i have this story n my mind from a long time but it takes time to penn it down...so i ll give a prologue and will update as i will get time because my exams aree coming too...hope u will appreciate my work as u had in my previous one

WO HUMSAFAR MERA

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Raman Bhalla is a Ganster of Satara. He is Godfather for them. He met a girl name Ishita and he fell in the love with her...This story is how he make Ishita fall in love with him...


will give prologue soon😉
Edited by ..Armor_ishra.. - 9 years ago
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Prologue

Raman Bhalla is a Gangster. He was a very responsible and elder child in his whole family. His Father died when he was only 21 yrs old. Being the elder child, the responsibility of his mother, younger brother Romie and younger sister Rinky fell on his young shoulders but he didn't complain, he faced life with a big smile and began working on his fathers paths...His Family was Punjabi but leaving in Satara followed all rituals which is followed by a Hindu family...They respect all religions.

His Father Mr. OM Prakash Bhalla was the Godfather of Satara. He always used to care for people and do everything for their wellbeing but his enemies killed him and started to trouble people of Satara...so Raman took his Fathers place...He killed those people who killed his father and hence entered into this world of crime. But he has kept his whole family away from this crime...and his mother is proud of him as people of Satara had a great respect for their family...Romie and Rinky were studying at pune and now after completing their studies they had return to Satara. Raman is 28 yrs old...where as Romie and Rinky are 23yrs old.

Raman has a right hand named Mihir. Mihir is an Orphan adopted by Raman and his Family. Mihir's dad were good friend of Mr.om prakash Bhalla and he died to save him. From that day Mihir is a member of Bhalla Family too...he is Raman's Bodyguard too...

Once Raman was talking to someone meanwhile mihir came with a news

Mihir: Bhai wo jameen Raghu hai ki hai...

[Bhai...that place belongs to Raghu]

Raman: toh?

[so?]

Bala(One servant): Bhau to jameen tyachi nave...tyane to zabardasti ghetli ahe

[Bro...that place doesn't belongs to him...He has taken that forcefully]

Raman: Mihir...ek meeting arrange karva...

[mihir...arrange one meeting]

Bala: Bhau tumhi ek mahine sathi jevaha pune gelya hota tevhapasoon to punha bekaydeshir dhandhe karna suru kela aahe...aata tyachyajavad ek pistul pan aahe...

[bro...when u were gone for one month to pune , from that time he again started doing illegal works and now he have a pistol too]

Raman: aata mala tyala dakhwala lagel ki Raman Bhalla ka ahay...

[now I have to show him who Raman Bhalla is]

Bala: pan Bhai

[But bro...]

Raman showed his palm to him and he stopped...

Raman: Mihir...

Mihir: ho Bhau

[yes bro]

Mihir nodded and they both went from there


so...how's it...do tell me...

guys i will continue this after my exams...i will give update before exams if and only if i got time..or else i ll start this in April...i cant assure anything...sorry for this...

but do tell me ...

like and comment babies😉

Edited by ..Armor_ishra.. - 9 years ago
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Index:-
summary and prologue added on pg 1
Edited by ..Armor_ishra.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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res😉
unres
start is interesting
loved the plot
waise ye log konsi language mai bat kar rahe the???
continue soon
Edited by vaishnavi28 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice Start
Interesting Yaar
Do Cont Haan
Nd Update Soon
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Originally posted by: Jinal_999

Aur Haan...
Nice Title Dude


Thanks dr😊
updating in few minutes dr
Edited by ..Armor_ishra.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nycc prologue tanu
do update soon
thnxx 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Gangster wala story..
Hmm.. Cont soon..
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Interesting prologue dear 😊
Update when ever you have time 😊

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