FF || I Was Trying To Take Your Heart | LAST PART on Pg-74 | Mar/21 | - Page 23

Originally posted by: Cutie-smiley10

very unique story. lovely update.update soon.thanks for the PM.

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

good..

Originally posted by: mamtasingla

amazing update gaya😳

Originally posted by: Divek-ishra

Awsome updt..loved it

Originally posted by: sulochana90

wow superb

Originally posted by: Divanii

Amazing update
Raman is behaving quite normal
Update soon

Originally posted by: aymin

Great pls update soon and pm

Originally posted by: jaya1867

Superb update

Originally posted by: swathin

Hot n sweet

Originally posted by: sarayasriya

very nice story dear
read all 3 parts
thanks for the pm😊

Thank you so much for commenting guys...
I'm glad you people are enjoying the story.
I'd try to update the next part ASAP 🤗

Originally posted by: mayraa

Read both part in one go

It was awesome

Very interesting and different concept

Ishu's parents I hate them from the bottom of my heart

These greedy people only thinks about money not about ishu's happiness

They wanted her to sacrifice her happiness

After knowing Raman's past I feel really bad for him

He had gone through so much

I don't blame him for his condition how can a person be his sane mind after witnessing his wife and son's horrible death

But there is something in ishita which attract Raman towards her

He it mad for her

Which make Ishita to marry him

Love ishra moment

He want to change the rules😉

Waiting to know more

Continue soon Gaya

Thank you so much for reading and appreciating this story Malvika 😳
Glad you enjoyed it 😃
I'd try to update soon...
Hope to get good reviews from you 😳 🤗

Originally posted by: sanayhm0001

Nyc update
First ishitha denied for marriage bt finally dey r married bt he s soo cute n innocent
Raman past was too painful
Cont.soon

Thank you dear...
Glad you enjoyed it 😳

Originally posted by: Mitishrafan

Amazing awesome update
What next part last 😭
Pls make raman normal
I'm feeling bad for ishita's insecurity

Thank you...
Yeah next would probably be the last part 😳

Originally posted by: sririt

It is getting interesting day by day. I am curious about what can come next. Nice update

Thank you dear...
Glad you found it interesting 😳

Originally posted by: Devyani.Bagla

Awsumm... fantastic... superbbb... amazinggg... lovely... dhassuu.. is wat i can say bout ur dis storyy... ufff dis concept... i soooi love it!!! I love Raman's Innocent wid "Not-so-Innocent" antics...!!! Loved it..!! UPDATE SOON!!!

Thank you dear... 😳
Glad you enjoyed it...
I'd update soon 😳

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Mai late hoon I know but life 🤢
Anyway
Shot 1
Are you keeping a tab on me that what I m watching ;)
1. I watch old epis of yhm n you have a story of that era :P
Now this. I m watching actually trying to watch Bidaai.. N old show where the hero Aalekh is mentally challenged.. Your story is on similar case
But I find aalekh irritating lol
N this Raman is so cuttu... <3

Hmmm...you're late... 😳
And what's this Aalekh and all 😆
Anyways... Glad you enjoyed it 😃

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Shot 2
Raman's past was really very bad and sad.. He lost his wife and kid before his eyes
Ishita is a real strong character
But end me ate ate kya Hua
Raman has literally became"epitome of seduction"

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Shot three
That was the cutest innocent wala romance but not so innocent

Thank you so much for the comment 😳
Yeah he's indeed an epitome of seduction 😳
Glad you enjoyed it

Originally posted by: ishitaruhi

Awesome... This concept is old but d way u write it ,is very refreshing der emotion actually ISHITA's emotions N RAMAN's innocent behavior r quite catchy.I reminded of 2-3 movies on dIS theme one in which d song "khiloona janke tum to mera DIL tod jate ho" I haven't watched it but I think in end hero not accept heroine after being normal N den d kamal hasan N sridevi movies I think in DAT also both separates ,it's really heart breaking if sumone forget u after living wid u for months or years N after u committed to dat person but it's all destiny whether u will be in his memory or not.
Keeping aside above notion I enjoyed d update. I really try to imagine kp in dIS role so checking in my mind any scene wer kp did this type of scene or not ,den I remember d scene wer RAMAN attack by suraj goons N hospitalized den he indeed behaves like kid scared of injection, hiding below bed N irritating nurse in midnight .this was small glimpse of kp's this side of acting.
Sorry I start commenting about update but cudn't stop myself from writing my thoughts which occurred while reading.

Yep... This was the only form left for Raman in my stories 😆
BTW, I didn't see the song you said but the one you mentioned of KH and Sridevi, I've seen that one. That's a sad one and there's a beautiful song in it awww 😳
Glad you could connect KP with this character...
He indeed was acting childish in those scenes you mentioned ☺️
Thank you so much for commenting 🤗

Originally posted by: Mdwst

Nice update

Ishu senses changes in ramans behavior

He wants to do the deed with her...he wants her yo be his Soave..

If and when Raman gets better...will their equations change?

Thank you Viji...
Glad you enjoyed it 😳
No their equation won't change when he gets better but his memory is a problem