OS || Tangle My Heart In You || COMPLETED || Mar/04 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
U r right Gaya..
One story of yours which I ll never like is this one..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OH MY GOD #Speechless. Lemme compose myself *deepbreath* .This is something i never expected from my hard core writer. Today You' proved that you're not only expert in writing some hot stuff but you're amazing in writing heart wrenching stories. This is the Best and Heart touching shot till date. Hey girl you don't know how much i cried while reading this. It's so painful. This is so painful . Bas ab centi bahut hogaya. Lets come to ishqholic mood ohooo ishra relationship bahut puraana hai ha they are done with everything in teenage😊 ammmadi😆 She tastes same after five years 🤬 . I like chess coz of it they became one😳. Now Angryholic 😡 abhi urgh he did what 😡 grrr @#$%^&* son of bitch coz of him my ishra went through so much pain. She lost her motherhood and their dreamy princess 😭. Karan aur maarna chahiye kameene ko . Damage his bloody part so that he never do that to any poor girl 😡. Shagun such a sweetheart she understood his love and she very well knows the meaning of love and sacrificed raman . I ❤️ her wholeheartedly and of course Karan. At the ISHRARU 🤗 . I'm so so so proud of you G😎 I'm not feeling guilty for torturing you if I won't then i will miss this Beautiful shot. Thank you again. ah ah One second itni jaldi kyu Finally it is is is is ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
That was really a roller-coaster ride...So technically Ishita did not cheated both times...first time she was married to raman but committed to abhii and second time...frankly i hate that part...that was just so saddening...i want to see Raman killing abhiii...though i imagined karan as same person🤣...i know i am crazy sometimes...

But story was emotional, heart wrenching...Frankly i didnt like some elements like what ishita suffered...she lost everything in one day that was just brutal🤢...


I just want u too add 3-4 lines that Raman killed abhiii...and i want ishita to confront Raman to atleast give her chance to speak...the day she lost everything even unknown to what she suffered...

Overall brilliant efforts...👏👏👏...Its so sweet that u completed this story for some of us...who wanted to read this one...Thank u yar...

I love it when u fulfill our wishes😳

Amazing work...

Edited by --abha-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: kaa1202

U r right Gaya..

One story of yours which I ll never like is this one..


I know why. And I don't expect anyone to.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: --abha--

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">A freind means more than time ...really u mean it...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">i am asking dds from aroun 2-3 months now🤔</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">so i am not freind</font>


You're my dear friend but dds is not 😆
I'll do that too 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb


I know why. And I don't expect anyone to.


Yeah, I dunno abt others but I m sure U know why I didn't like this..😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb



You're my dear friend but dds is not 😆
I'll do that too 😉

this u are telling me from 2 months😭...offcouse u will delay it more...
i will agree to friend thing once u update🤔...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
It's not necessary that everyone must have same taste. Sometime we must feel and accept bitterness too. Otherwise life will be "B.O.R.I.N.G". Sorry gaya if you got hurt by your readers by writing this. But still IDC i loved it 🤗. Take care. #NiceTryBravo
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: kaa1202



Yeah, I dunno abt others but I m sure U know why I didn't like this..😛


I know well
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: --abha--

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">this u are telling me from 2 months😭...offcouse u will delay it more...</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">i will agree to friend thing once u update🤔...</font>


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