Ishra TS - Aao mil jaaye hum- pt 8 on pg 118 on 18 may

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Roohachu

@Roohachu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Superb Update Dii
But u must make it a TS
I mean it had no proper ending Diii
I want they both to realize their love
But on a second thought make it an SS
Whats say?
Woh sab chodo
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Update was sooo sooo superb
Raman na he was sooo cute
He is studious OMG
Kaisa padti hai?
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Aur Ishu she is too naughty na?
She is always chirpy na?
Kya bolun uske baare mein?
She is almost like me
hates parents' lecture
Who will like it when ur parents says to look at someone else n be like them.
I hate it
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N seriously her gang of frnds are bad Dii not her
N the way she promised to Raman
It was like Awww😆
Update soon
PLS PLS MAKE IT A TS

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nafnaf

@nafnaf

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Aaawww you have to continue I would like to see their relationship grow into loving relationship please!!!!!!!

Getting married as per Appa's request - no bonding, no friendship growing up - aaahhh!!! She feels suffocated!!!!

Call from police telling of Ishita's arrest but he has confidence that Ishita is innocent - so sweet!!!

Ishita apologising cutely and promising to obey him!!!!

Please continue

And please no villainy or sadness!!!!

Looking forward to next update soon!

Thank you so much for the pm!!!!!!

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anisha960

@anisha960

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

lovely dii
ishu is soo childish nd her antics r too cute
raman is too matured
both married at young age
aww raman us soo protective
n she behaves childishly
liked how raman believes her
n their hug too gud
n sleeping was to gud
make it a ts
continue soon

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smilesusmita

@smilesusmita

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Ishita is vry childish and cute
Pls continue

Edited by smilesusmita - 9 years ago

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Divdri01

@cutie95

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Lovely update
Ishita is so cute
Continue plzzz

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rufana

@rufana10

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

congrats for your success di

u absolutely deserve it...👍🏼

superb update

ishra r a young couple...ishita is only eighteen!

both of their parents died in a accident...poor them!

ishu is naughty nd naive whereas raman is studious,responsible nd matured...

as ishita is his responsibility so he always thinks about her safety

but ishu doesn't like it nd always fight with raman on this matter...

ishita's friend took her to a rave party nd there police arrested her...

poor ishu didn't know that it was a rave party...

liked d scene when she promised raman that from now on she will listen to him

in d police station...she is cute!

liked ishra talk in her room nd d scene when they slept cuddling each other...

want to read how they fall in love with each other as now ishu doesn't love

raman nd raman only cares for her...

plz make it a SS di 😳

eagerly waiting for d next part...

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Ramyasri

@Twihard18

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Interesting story Di!

Continue soon... :D

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Sharmin

@fSharm

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Amazing dr... Plz write some more parts dr..

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SAPNA

@ruhi_ishra

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Raksha di and you have decided to surprise us together
2 Os ina day
Hehe
Anyways again a different concept
ishra married in young age
Raman responsible and ishita spoiled
Lovely
Liked the way he handled her
If possible make it a TS
Will love to read further
Awesum work
Thanks for pm