#3 IshRa SS: Muskurane Ki Wajah Tum Ho.....( chapter 29- chapter 40 )

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Aarohi Talegoankar

@Albeli26

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: kaa1202
Congrats Aarohi for the new thread...🥳
This Story deserves it..
Cont soon...

thanks kartik bro. it was nothing without u ppla. thank u again for giving immense love to this story

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1023427

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

congratz for new thread and amezng update continue soon and best of luck for ur exams.

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RitaDivan

@RitaDivan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Hie 😊

First of all congratulations for the 3#threads on this SS ... The concep of parents hating their children was diferent .. Very interesting too ... And how Ishra got married and their thought very well put, this Ashok and Shagun are always behind them to create problems yaar 😡 ... Lots of Ishra moments thanks for that 😊 well I felt so since I've read all in a go ... 😆 Couldn't stop from knowing what was next ... Mihir and Mihika's love was also good ... Finally Raman has go 😭 that's sad ..

I just loved the story and waiting for your next updates & best of luck with your exams!

If you have an index of your writings, could you pls PM me & also PM of your updates pls

Thanks yaar

Amritha 😊

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rgoyal02

@rgoyal02

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Nice story..waiting for next uodate

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Aarohi Talegoankar

@Albeli26

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: super_cutie
Congrats for the New story yaar🥳
Continue soon

thanks dear

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Aarohi Talegoankar

@Albeli26

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Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: fSharm
Congrats.. Now waiting for an update in new thread...

sure buddy. and thanks too

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Aarohi Talegoankar

@Albeli26

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: maanvir
Congratulations & Celebrations!!!🥳🥳🥳
Third thread!!!! Yeh dekh ke toh Manma Emotion Jaage Re...

Aap aai, bahaar aai
Aur dekho mera dil garden garden ho gya

Itna badhiya mouqa ho aur mai gaana na gaaun, ye kabhi ho sakta hai bhala😉

Nhi ho sakta hai, we know 😆
Toh arz karo

Muskurane Ki Wajah Tum Ho
Gungunane Ki Wajah Tum Ho
Jiya Jaaye Na Jaaye Na Jaaye Na
O Re Piya Re

I know kuch bhi original nahi tha...Asli track se hi copy kuya hai...
Kyunki woh gaana aur uske bol ka jaadu itna asardaar hai ke uski replacement me kuch aur ho hi nahj sakta...

Aur aur aur...
Ek Albeli si natkhat si pyari si Aarohi is gaane ke bol ko lekar kuch aisa jaadu kar sakti hai ye toh koi soch hi nahi sakta tha...
Shayad tu khud bhi nahi...Am I right?

Haan so toh hai
Socha toh Maine bhi nahi tha ki simple song ke simple se lyrics se itna badi story ka theme soch lungi

Mujhe na is waqt hamari pehli conversations yaad arahi hain jo CKD ke through hui thi...

Aur jab tune FF ki pm mujhe bheji toh maine immediately padhna shuru kardiya tha...
N I liked the concept...
Tujhe toh pata hi hai how lazy I am in cmntng...
Par ispe maine pehli baar padhte hi cmnt ki thi...
Later on I became irregular...blame it on my waqt ki pasti n likhne ki susti

Pasti and susti
Yeh tha zordaar. 🤣
but koi na di aapne padha mere liye yahi main hai. Jin writers ko main follow kar rahi hoon woh meri story read karne, isse best aur kuch ho hi nhi sakta

Is story ke through tera sk bilkul hi alag sa roop humein dekhne ko mila...
Jo ke mai hamesha kehti rehti hun k shocking hai

Shocking 😆😆
Aap log na mujhe MDP ka mareez ghoshit kar doge aise toh

Mujhe nahi lagta k kisi bhi tareeqe se is FF ka shrey mujhe jaata hai...kyunki maine toh sirf FF padha hai aur usko appreciate kiya hai...

And that said iska shrey agar jaata hai toh sirf tujhe aur Behna ko...
Tune agar ek moorat banayi hai toh behna ne uski surat ko sajaya hai...

Haan so toh hai
Pankhu di ka barabar ka contribution hai is story mein
Chahe woh translation ho ya idea ya proof reads
Di ne humesha meri help ki hai. Yeh SS mera nahi ab di ka bhi ban gaya hai

Isliye I dnt deserve a thanks...But haan pyaar jitna man ho barsa dena...
Kyunki mai toh pyar ki bhooki hoon...
Aur ye lala h toh marte dum tak khatam nahi honewala

Mat karo kahatam
Mere paas pyar thok ke bhaav mein jama hota hai jaani

Once again Congratulations for the third thread...

Yaar ab teesre thread pe agaye...ab toh IshRa ki confession karwa do...
CVs ke raste pe mat jaao plz

Aapka hukum sar aankhon pe sarkaar
Umeed hai yeh thread aapki samast manokaamnaao ko poorn karega 😉😉