Valentine Spl IshRa FS - A Day 2 Forget? part 5A & B pg 16 - Page 14

Originally posted by: gargpoo

Awww such a nice parts Shivangi...Raman made parathas...
So truth is out n ravan Kumar faking anger..bt jkr knows him very well.
Loved their convo n then lovely dance..

Originally posted by: mayasundar

Hi Shivangi,

Superb,

Cat is out of the bag and Ravan Kumar tried to control it with fake anger and got caught😆

Ishita emotions were so palable😭 poor her but she found her soul mate😉

Their outing was superb

Nice ending.

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: nafnaf

Oh Shivangi you surpassed all expectations!!!!!

That was a beautiful story - Ishralicious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

So Raman wants to help her with the cooking - he said that as they are both tired they should both cook together!!!! - so sweet!!!!😉

After dinner whilst sitting in the living watching TV Raman feels lonely aaahhh!!!!!

Both of them go through their wedding album and Raman feels: "As they were nearing towards end of album ,raman said-"kitna paagal the na hum ishita.." and when he saw ishita looking at hims confusedly he continued saying-"I mean yeh sab hamare shaadi ke moments jo humare liye itne memorable ho sakte the who hamne ladte jhagadte nikaal diye."

Ishita said-" raman uss time haalaat.."

Raman -" haalaat ki baat nahi hai ishita, haalaat hamne khud banaye the ..agar humne ek doosre ko jaan ne ki aur koshish ki hoti toh shayad aise bachchon ke jaise ladte nahi rehte poori shaadi mein... inn palon ko sundar bana sakte the hum ishita only if it wud nt have been abt our egos."

Ishita was amazed listening to his thoughts and then said-" raman aap maano ya mat maano par uss time situation who ho hi nhi sakti thi jo aap chahte ho , hum chahkar bhi kuch nahi kar sakte the raman so let that be."

Raman was solemn-" par phir bhi ishita yeh rishta, yeh shaadi kitni achchi ho sakti thi agar..."

Ishita interrupted him and had a firm look in her eyes and she said-" achcha hi hai raman , yeh hamara rishta hamari shaadi bohot achche hai unn rishton se jo hamein dhoka dekar hamara dil todkar chale gaye...jo hamein akela chodkar chale gaye , unn shadiyon se better hai jahan dhoka , nafrat aur aansoo hote hain... humara rishta bohot better hai unse raman and we shld be happy for that."

He knew what she was saying and said-" I know and I realize this par phir bhi who moments..."

Ishita-"yaadon aur palon ka kya hai raman who toh aur nayi bann jayengi agar hum saath honge toh , pehle walon se bhi better aur bhi khoobsurat aur haseen , meri aur aapki... hamari...hai na?"

Hope in her eyes gave new hopes to raman too and he nodded and said-" haan ban jayengi , hum banayenge yaadein ishita , hum banayenge." And they smiled looking at each other only till raman turned around and ishita stopped him saying-" jaise aapne aaj banayi nayi yaadein mere liye sab kuch karke aaj , mera din itna achche banakar , apne kaam ko chodkar..."

I loved this part of their conversation it was so real and showed how much they have moved on together! It also shows that the way their day today has brought them closer and more at ease with each other and therefore are able to discuss this rationally - that is so amazing!!!

And then the dance omg so delicious mmm!!!!❤️

Then he tells her that he wanted to forget this date and all the sad memories connected to this date but she said that she will never forget this day as: "Ishita was amazed at his thoughts and said-" par aisa toh nahi ho paya na raman."

Raman confusedly asked-" nahi? Kyun?"

Ishita-" kyunki aaj ka din toh main kabhi bhi nahi bhool paungi , it is has become so special for me after all. Haan farak itna hai ki pehle iss din se dard aur sadness jude the aaj ke baad it will be one of the most cherished days of life mr bhalla. I dnt want 2 forget this day ever, it is actually not a day to forget. Samjhe? And its all becoz of u raavan kumar so thank u."

Raman was ecstatic as he felt his day had been fulfilled to the most and he hugged her tight out of happiness and said-" thank u ishita for making me believe ki main bhi kisi ko khush rakh sakta hun. And ya u r most welcome meri Jhansi ki rani . yeh din main bhi kabhi nahi bhoolunga ishita kyun its one of the bestest days of my life too na so thank u for being wid me throughout the day."

Ishita reciprocated his hug wid warmth and said-" that's gr8 since u also loved this day so we are even now mr bhalla, no sorries, so thank you'es pending between us."

Raman chuckled while hugging and said-" done , all clear."

And they kept hugging each other tight as if both of them wanted to feel loved and desired. A sense of not being alone, having a soulmate soothed their hearts and they wanted to remain that way forever if possible."

Absolutely fantastic - I really wish this had happened on the show - it was out of this world!!!!!!!

Thank you so much for this story and now I look forward to your update on the other two stories you are in the middle of please and also look forward to more stories like this one please, please, please, please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you so much for the pm!!!!🤗

Originally posted by: sanayhm0001

Awesome updates

Originally posted by: traveller_girl

Lovely update

Too good

Raman tried to fake anger but in the end they talked it out

Ishita found her soulmate

Thanks for the lovely story

Originally posted by: super_cutie

Superb story yaar

Very beautifully written

Ishra are so adorable and lovely

All the best for ur future works

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: ranisa123

oh dr it's fantastic story dr.i really really love it.u wrote it nicely. its indeed not a day 2 forget. thanks for this amazing story and for the pm.

Originally posted by: swathin

Beautiful

loved it

Originally posted by: kaa1202

Read 3,4 & 5 parts in a go..

This is my fav of yours Shivangi..

RKB mode of Raman is nice..

Both their feelings portrayed nicely...

It ws amazing yaar..

Originally posted by: heemasomani

Nice update