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Posted: 9 years ago

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Oh wow both parts were awesome!!!

Our RKB defending Ishita⭐️
Ishita then reminds him of the first time happened and what he had said then!!!!😆

They then go shopping and help each other choose their clothes - yayyy!!!
Outside the mall they try out the chaat stalls and enjoy themselves!!!

She does not feel like going home but suggests India Gate - where they have ice cream Raman orders blackcurrant ice cream for both of them and she is surprised: "They went to an ice cream seller and raman asked for 2 blackcurrent ice creams to which ishita asked him-" raman aap bhi? Aapko toh yeh flavor pasand nahi tha na?"
Raman made a goofy face and said-" actually pasand isliye nahi tha coz before I had never tasted it.. jab tumne khilaya tha usdin toh achche laga tha par..."
Ishita-" par bolte kaise? Raavan kumar ki naak jo kat jaati nahi? Big fat male ego huhhh."
Raman chuckled at her expressions and accepted-" u are right ... par ab keh toh raha hun na achche hai aur dekho kha bhi raha hun , khush?"
Ishita-" hmm maaf kiya ..." I loved the conversation!!!!!!😆😛

Then Ishita gets sad again and Raman feels that he was unsuccessful in making her forget her sadness!!!he gently placed his hand on her shoulder and said-" ishita I know what u are thinking , par main bas itna kahunga ki jaane do , nikaal do sari bhadaas once and for all."
Ishita looked into his eyes and was greatful they had a sincere emotion. She replied-" bhadaas kiss baat ki raman? Bas ek sawaal hai ki kya who hamara itna pyaar, itna concern deserve karte the? Ya hum hi bewakoof the?"
Raman knew she was talking abt both their exes and he replied-" I feel who karte the par itna zyaada nahi jitna hamne unhe diya aur galti hamari bhi thi kyunki bewakoof ka nahi pata par hum pyaar mein paagal zaroor the.. so let bygones be bygones now and smile."
It was so good when he: "he gently placed his hand on her shoulder and said-" ishita I know what u are thinking , par main bas itna kahunga ki jaane do , nikaal do sari bhadaas once and for all."
Ishita looked into his eyes and was greatful they had a sincere emotion. She replied-" bhadaas kiss baat ki raman? Bas ek sawaal hai ki kya who hamara itna pyaar, itna concern deserve karte the? Ya hum hi bewakoof the?"
Raman knew she was talking abt both their exes and he replied-" I feel who karte the par itna zyaada nahi jitna hamne unhe diya aur galti hamari bhi thi kyunki bewakoof ka nahi pata par hum pyaar mein paagal zaroor the.. so let bygones be bygones now and smile."

Good choices of songs throughout your story!!!

Gurudwara visit was so sweet - both feel calm and happier!!!!!!!

I cannot wait for the sweet moments at home - please update soon and thank you so much for the pm!!!!!!!🤗


thanks alot yaar thanks a ton😳🤗
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thanksss😉
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thanks 4 reading😃
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hey all thanks a ton for all d love u have showered on this FS, here goes the last part which is again divided into 2 A and B.🤗

Part 5 A

When they reached home they both felt like having a shower. Maybe it was the tiredness of entire day or their minds being heavy wid emotions , they just felt like washing themselves off it and so raman said-"I sooo need a shower yaar." To which ishita said-" I also need one badly. Aap jaaiye pehle main tab tak dinner bana leti hun."

As she was moving towards the kitchen, raman held her hand stopping her and said-" ruko yaar Jhansi ki rani aate hi jang ke maidaan mein utarne ke liye taiyaar?"

Ishita cud nt get sudden reason for his one liners and said-" kya raman kya bole jaa rahe ho?"

Raman smiled and said-" kuch nahi yaar I mean khana dono milkar banayenge na , sirf tum kyun? Dono equally thake na poore din toh ab workload bhi divided."

Ishita was confused by this behavior of his and said-" toh phir kya karna hai?"

Raman-" simple tum sabzi bana dena abhi phir main main paranthe bana lunga what say?"

Ishita found it fair so said -" ok aap jao fresh hokar aao tab tak main sabzi banati hun."

Raman-" fine I will just be back." Saying this he went to the room and ishita got busy in kitchen. She kept thinking abt how beautiful the day had been till now and meanwhile in their bedroom raman was smiling to himself feeling happy that he was able to make ishita's day better.

After abt 20 minutes when raman got down , he got busy in kitchen while ishita went up to freshen up. Raman made paranthas and laid the table and then called out-" arre ishita jaldi aao bhook lagi hai yaar." To which ishita shouted -" 5 minute raman bas aayi." She stepped out of showed in her kurti and leggings and as she was abt to leave the room, raman's mobile phone beeped indicating there was a message. Usually she did not see his messages but that day she felt-" dekh leti hoon office se kuch important na ho." Saying this she flicked open the message which was from mihir who said-

" bhai office mein everything was under control. Hope ki aapka aur bhabhi ka din bohot achche raha ho aur aap jo chahte the who ho hogaya ho.good night."

Reading this ishita was shocked, she cud not understand what to make of this gesture of raman's. did he knew abt this day for me? Did he leave his office for me? Did he do all this intentionally? But why for me? Am I really this important for him? She wanted to ask all these from raman but decided to keep it for after dinner and went down.

They had a chit chatting dinner but ishita was lost in between many times thinking how to bring up the subject wid raman. Raman did not notice this in his happiness and after completing dinner, they kept dishes away and raman sat down in hall to glance over business news on tv. Ishita silently went upstairs and raman noticed her absence only when he felt that it was too lonely and he switched off the tv and went to their room.

Seeing her, a warm smile erupted on his face as he saw her sitting on the bed in relaxing position and flicking over pages of their wedding album. There was a smile on her face and he cud see that she felt happy reliving those memories. He went towards her and said-" saath mein dekhen?" to which she silently nodded and made place for him to sit on the bed. He sat beside her as they started scrolling through the album of biggest event of their lives and relived their journey from engagement to wedding after.

As they were nearing towards end of album ,raman said-"kitna paagal the na hum ishita.." and when he saw ishita looking at hims confusedly he continued saying-"I mean yeh sab hamare shaadi ke moments jo humare liye itne memorable ho sakte the who hamne ladte jhagadte nikaal diye."

Ishita said-" raman uss time haalaat.."

Raman -" haalaat ki baat nahi hai ishita, haalaat hamne khud banaye the ..agar humne ek doosre ko jaan ne ki aur koshish ki hoti toh shayad aise bachchon ke jaise ladte nahi rehte poori shaadi mein... inn palon ko sundar bana sakte the hum ishita only if it wud nt have been abt our egos."

Ishita was amazed listening to his thoughts and then said-" raman aap maano ya mat maano par uss time situation who ho hi nhi sakti thi jo aap chahte ho , hum chahkar bhi kuch nahi kar sakte the raman so let that be."

Raman was solemn-" par phir bhi ishita yeh rishta, yeh shaadi kitni achchi ho sakti thi agar..."

Ishita interrupted him and had a firm look in her eyes and she said-" achcha hi hai raman , yeh hamara rishta hamari shaadi bohot achche hai unn rishton se jo hamein dhoka dekar hamara dil todkar chale gaye...jo hamein akela chodkar chale gaye , unn shadiyon se better hai jahan dhoka , nafrat aur aansoo hote hain... humara rishta bohot better hai unse raman and we shld be happy for that."

He knew what she was saying and said-" I know and I realize this par phir bhi who moments..."

Ishita-"yaadon aur palon ka kya hai raman who toh aur nayi bann jayengi agar hum saath honge toh , pehle walon se bhi better aur bhi khoobsurat aur haseen , meri aur aapki... hamari...hai na?"

Hope in her eyes gave new hopes to raman too and he nodded and said-" haan ban jayengi , hum banayenge yaadein ishita , hum banayenge." And they smiled looking at each other only till raman turned around and ishita stopped him saying-" jaise aapne aaj banayi nayi yaadein mere liye sab kuch karke aaj , mera din itna achche banakar , apne kaam ko chodkar..."

part 5 B scroll down


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finally the very last part😃

Part 5B

Raman understood she had got to know abt her plan and he gritted his tongue and slowly turned around to see a fierce ishita looking directly into his eyes. He knew his secret was out and he tried to divert the topic saying-" kya maine kya kiya? Nothing at all , maine kuch nahi kiya." And was turning around to walk out when she said-" raman... ab koi fayada nahi hai I know abt it."

Raman-" abt what ishita?"

Ishita-" I saw mihir's message on ur phone , I know all abt it." Raman chided himself for leaving his cell carelessly and then thought of showing his raavan avtar so that ishita doen't question him further, he raised his voice and said-" what? Tumne mera phone check kiya?"

Ishita was exasperated as he was asking abt damn phone and she said-" that's not important raman..."

Raman tried to keep his anger and said-" that is very important ishita , how dare u? tumne mera phone kaise dekha?"

Ishita was nt to be scared of his anger as she knew he was faking it so she said-" that's not important as that is certainly not the point raman... maine phone dekha kyunki I heard a message and mihir ka naam padhke I opened it .. but u know what don't try and divert the topic by ur anger and tell me abt it... now.."

Raman-" kya bataun tumhe ishita ? kya jaan na chahti ho tum? Wakai mein kaam nahi tha aaj ishita..."

Ishita-" kaam nahi tha toh mihir itni late tak office mein kaunsi meetings handle kar raha tha raman? Jhooth kyun bole rahe ho aap mujhse?

Raman was irritated now and said-"toh kya bolun ishita? Kya bataun tumhe iss bare mein as there is nothing to tell."

Ishita-" I want to know the reason raman ki aapne yeh kyun kiya? Who bhi mere liye?"

Raman was shocked at her audacity as instead of thanking him she was firing him wid questions and he angrily said-" problem kya hai tumhara ishita? Tumhare liye kuch karo toh problem , na karo toh problem, tum chahti kya ho? Saabit kya karna chahti ho yeh sab poochkar? Tum chahti ho I do nothing for u from now on, fine I won't . khush ab? Tumhari problem pata nahi kya hai yaar..."

and saying this he was leaving them room when ishita's tear filled voice stopped him as she said-" kya karun ramann, aadat nahi hai Mujhe...aadat nahi rahi itne pyaar aur kadar ki.. koi mere liye itna kuch kare, meri khushi ke liye, mere chehre par smile lane ke liye, meri aankhone se aansuon ko door rakhne ke liye iski aadat nahi rahi hai raman Mujhe..."

And her sobs held him back as he stood their stupefied and understood why she was behaving that way as she continued to say-" ek time tha jab koi tha jo meri smile ki kadar karta tha aur mere se pyaar karta tha par uske baad aadat hi nahi rahi ki joi mujhse itna pyaar kare , itni important main bhi ho sakti hun kisi ke liye yeh kabhi socha hi nahi tha.. isliye jab aapke gesture ke bare mein pata laga toh believe hi nahi hua ki aapne yeh mere liye kiya hai.. ek hi sawaal aa raha hai mann mein ki mere liye KYUN?"

Although her face was turned but he cud see that she was crying and he just silently moved to her and standing behind her , held her shoulders turning her around . when he saw she was sobbing nt looking into his eyes , he told her-" toh aadat daal lo na ishita." She was confused and looked into his eyes finally as he said-" aadat daal lo itne pyaar ki concern ki aur kisi aise insaan ki bhi jo tumhari hasi aur khushi ke liye bohot kuch karne wala hai." Ishita was shocked to hear these words and said-" kyun raman? Mere liye kyun?"

Raman smiled and said-" kyunki u deserve it ishita... u own it completely. Tumne meri beti , meri family Mujhe waapis di , Mujhe phir se hasna, pyaar karna sikhaya,u have given me a new life ishita. Kya main tumhare liye itna bhi nahi kar sakta? Mujhe itna bhi haq nahi hai ki I can make u smile?"

Ishita nodded a no and said-" aapko haq hai raman and I am glad ki koi mujhse finally yeh haq maang raha hai." They smiled looking into each other's eyes and knew that life was not going to be the same for them from the next day. After moments when they came out of trance and ishita started preparing for the night, raman was struck wid an idea and said-" ishita..."

Ishita-" haan?"

Raman-" hamne socha hai na ki hum yaadein banayenge? Toh shuruaat aaj se hi kyun na ki jaaye? Lets dance what say?"

Ishita was shocked and said-" kya raman kya bol rahe ho? Dance kaisa dance aur abhi , yahan?"

Raman -" haan na lets dance here and now in our very room on a nice slow song , what cud be a better start for making memories?"

Ishita was a bit hesitant at first but then said-" ok I am in."

Raman-" yes so lets do it" and saying that he dimmed the lights , switched on stereo system and went on his knees in front of ishita saying-" may I have the pleasure of having this dance wid u mrs bhalla?"

Ishita smiled coyly and said-"sure mr bhalla , pleasure wud be mine." And gave her hand in his as he stood up and music filled the room.

Sitting on his knees he offered one of his hands to ishita who accepted it gracefully. He stood up pulled her close and kept a hand on her waist as hers was on his shoulder. Other hands of theirs being intertwined together

Na hai yeh paana , na khona hi hai

Tera na hona jaane kyun hona hi hai

They moved back and forth remembering their salsa steps as song said

Tum se hi din hota hai, surmayi sham aati hai

Tum se hi tum se hi

Har ghadi saans aati hai zindagi kehlati hai

Tum se hi tum se hi

As music played on he twirled her around himself and she crash landed on his chest as they got lost in each other's eyes

Aankhon mein aankhein teri

Baahon mein baahein teri

Mera na mujhmein kuch raha

Hua kya?

As she pulled herself back and he saw her getting shy and loving back , he held her arm in firm but gentle wrist and turned her towards himself singing

Baton mein baatein teri

Raatein saugaatein teri

Kyun tera sab yeh ho gaya

Hua kya?

She looked into his eyes and gaining some confidence back started matching her steps to his not leaving looking into his deep eyes as the song went on

Main kahi bhi jaata hun

Tum se hi mil jaata hun

Tum se hi tum se hi

Raaste mil jaate hain manzilein mil jaati hain

Tum se hi tum se hi

As the music continued he asked her-" are u comfortable? If not we can stop , its nt a compulsion u know that right?"

She was touched by his gentlemanly behavior and looking straight into his eyes said-" I know par I am loving this ... this moment everything abt it. Dnt want it stop any sooner." He smiled looking into her eyes and signaled her something and taking his cue they started matching their steps in perfect rhythm as the song said

Aadha sa wada kabhi aadhe se zyada kabhi

Jee chahe kar loon iss tarah wafa ka

Tode na toote kabhi chode na choote kabhi

Jo dhaga tum se hi jud gaya wafa ka

He finally made her stand and moved around her taking slow steps singing his feelings for her

Main tera sarmaya hun

Jo bhi main bann paya hun

tum se hi tum se hi

Bheed mein khamoshi hai

Thodi se behoshi hai

Tum se hi tum se hi

she had tears in her eyes due 2 his gesture and as the song ended he asked her-" liked it? If yes toh ro kyun rahi ho?"

she nodded weakly and said slowly-" I loved it completely and thank u raman thanks a lot."

Raman-" for what ishita?"

Ishita-" for making these new memories wid me , for us , for our future."

Raman- he smiled weakly and said-" main bass yeh chahta tha ki aaj ka din tum aise bhool jao ki iss se juda koi bhi dard tumhe dobara takleef na de sake. I wanted u to forget this day forever ishita."

Ishita was amazed at his thoughts and said-" par aisa toh nahi ho paya na raman."

Raman confusedly asked-" nahi? Kyun?"

Ishita-" kyunki aaj ka din toh main kabhi bhi nahi bhool paungi , it is has become so special for me after all. Haan farak itna hai ki pehle iss din se dard aur sadness jude the aaj ke baad it will be one of the most cherished days of life mr bhalla. I dnt want 2 forget this day ever, it is actually not a day to forget. Samjhe? And its all becoz of u raavan kumar so thank u."

Raman was ecstatic as he felt his day had been fulfilled to the most and he hugged her tight out of happiness and said-" thank u ishita for making me believe ki main bhi kisi ko khush rakh sakta hun. And ya u r most welcome meri Jhansi ki rani . yeh din main bhi kabhi nahi bhoolunga ishita kyun its one of the bestest days of my life too na so thank u for being wid me throughout the day."

Ishita reciprocated his hug wid warmth and said-" that's gr8 since u also loved this day so we are even now mr bhalla, no sorries, so thank you'es pending between us."

Raman chuckled while hugging and said-" done , all clear."

And they kept hugging each other tight as if both of them wanted to feel loved and desired. A sense of not being alone, having a soulmate soothed their hearts and they wanted to remain that way forever if possible.

Who said "I LOVE U" is the best form of expressing ur love, healing each other's pain and making them smile is what LOVE is all abt.

so its done phew😆 now waiting 4 ur reviews eagerly...a bit lengthy if possible plzzz😳

Love❤️

Shivangi

ps- for all those waiting my SS will be upadated 2moro or day after 4 sure😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was beautiful Update
Loved it sooo much
Raavan ki fake anger pakad liya JKR ne
Quite emotional tha
Finally they both got their respective soulmates😊
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Master piece... 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww such a nice parts Shivangi...Raman made parathas...
So truth is out n ravan Kumar faking anger..bt jkr knows him very well.
Loved their convo n then lovely dance..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Shivangi,
Superb,

Cat is out of the bag and Ravan Kumar tried to control it with fake anger and got caught😆

Ishita emotions were so palable😭 poor her but she found her soul mate😉

Their outing was superb

Nice ending.

Thanks for the pm

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