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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing yaar...
Loved every bit of it
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Posted: 9 years ago
ah haaa... that was an interesting prologue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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cheater...
no no
don't do that...
amazing update
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: AttitudeQueen13

Oh teri you're spoiling me day by day with your seductive updates 😳 of course I'm not a kid to get spoiled by some random people but still your updates are something special... You made me to crave for your writings... Don't know how I will survive if you stop your writings 😔 i know it won't happen but still I'm little scared of thinking about it...


Ok coming to update... Happy that at least thoshi was there to console ishu... Mihir yeh kya kiya he told him to do something drastic with some other meaning but Raman took it as serious huh... Oh god are you classical dancer Gaya coz you wrote so beautifully about her moments... I never felt classical dance so sexy before this her pose oh girl "Her right hand fixed on her hip and her right leg set backwards, helping her arch her body, showing how flexible her feminine figure is, her waist seeming slimmer and her bosom well shaped inside the silky fabric"... ishu felt his gaze from audience and her act of searching him like searching lord Krishna Wow that's so amazing... But Raman bhalla is too smart and left from there eee... And thoshi ma you are really amazing she directly send Ishu to his room 😛 I expected something else their you know kuch bhi sochthi hai meri dimaag😆... The funniest part was when he heard her bangles sound he checked his hands 🤣 ha hahahh... Ishitha recognized his back figure aww with out looking him she was so sure great love 😳... God I was scared by his revelation... I thought she will be angry on him but no yay... I'VE YOU IMPRISONED I can imagine her saying this to him dangerously close😉... So he again promised her that he will be back in a week good... Ishitha was so happy to know that thoshi is her MIL 😊 good MIL na 😉... Uff om called her father finally amma and appa was so happy 😃... No fights no grudges no nothing between Raman and kamina brothers 😆 nice deal loved this peaceful deal Gaya😊... Om is best father 😊... Now seedhe bedroom pe chelte hai 😆 she is full on JKR mode taking REVENGE ihahahh😈 sleep on floor bhalla😆 but the shock was Raman Kumar bhalla obeyed that 😲... Ishu also came down to sleep on floor but to other side pahahahhh I was laughing like anything after imagining Raman doing this "He creepily crawled using his legs and hands towards the other side and lied next to her" 🤣🤣... At last ahem ahem 😳 they ended doing it on the floor for a change ignoring the florid bed... I think great experience 🤬... Unique suhaag raat 😛... Uncensored writer ki uncensored reader🤣... ABHA I'M REALLY INNOCENT TRUST ME


Girl this is one lengthy comment 😲
You're one patient reader and brilliant commentator 😃
Coming to your comment... No words...you make me feel myself proud 😆
So this was all there in my story... 🥱 I never knew 🤣
I can see you enjoyed it...
And thank you so much for taking time to type down this essay 😉
I think your comment is more entertaining than my story 😳
BTW, I'm glad I could make classical dance so sexy that the great Gree enjoyed those ☺️
Love you so much for this wonderful review 🤗

PS. I miss you...😔
Where are you
Edited by Gaya3sb - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
I seriously don't want classical dancers to get spoil by your stories 🤣🤣. C ya soon
Edited by AttitudeQueen13 - 9 years ago

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