IshRa OS : Sawan Barse!

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

rufana

@rufana10

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Hi Prayosha!

congrats for your first story 😊

it was a very lovely OS

sweet,simple and cute love story!

beautifully written...

liked ishra confession and their

dance in the rain the most 😳

happy ending!

loved it so much...

do write more like this dear 😊

Quote

nafnaf

@nafnaf

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Hey Prayosha that was a beautiful OS

So sweet and romantic!!! And written very expressively!!!

I loved Ishra relationship!!!

Loved the teasing Raman gets from Mihir about his honewali bhabhi!!!

Great song choices!!!

Please write more OSs

Thank you so much for the pm!!!!

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

traveller_girl

@traveller_girl

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Beautiful story

Loved it

You write very nicely

Do write more

Their convos...perfect

Mihir-raman convos...nice

Proposal was lovely...

Quote

priya12roli

@priya12roli

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

wow paryu.omg ur first os.it was just amazing.rain idea tho bohot acha tha.just contiue to write more dr.i just love it.i have read many story per i didnt reply to it.its first i register here and replying here.that to only for u.superb superb.congrats dr.

Quote

SAPNA

@ruhi_ishra

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Great work
Write more often 😛

Quote

Akriti154

@akriti154

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Superb os
lykd Ishita's innocence
n falling in love at first sight in rain
thnxx 4 pm

Quote

kras

@kras

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

It's amazing

Very beautifully written

I can't trust that this is ur first story

Quote

Sharmin

@fSharm

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Lovely os...
They met as strangers in rain..
They become friends beacuse of rain...
They became as lovers in rain...

Quote

Greeshma

@FreedomOfSpeech

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Hey dear I think I know you from TU 😊 . You're not a writer who told ha you wrote like an expert. Story was went so smoothly. And rkb mhir convo was too funny. Lovely love story which revolved around rain. I also hate rain like Raman but after reading this update I too started liking rain. Kya patha mujhe bhi Raman jaise aashiq mil jayega tho 😳 😆 . Aww ishu was so innocent i like this line "agar baarish katam hogaya tho mujhe chod ke nahi jaavogi na" 😊 . Overall its beautiful prayosha 😃 . Keep writing more and more on ishra 😃 . Thank you for beautiful update and thanks Raksha for pm and thanks pooha akka for motivating new writers.