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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ladyprincess

haha I was feeling bad for shagun after reading the prologue.😆

tum aur tumhare twists.. wah
this woman looks better as a vamp rather than the goody goody as in the show now
ACHI achi ni lagti ye
I want ishita to be in action in this one.. against ashok and shagun.. like to investigate what all happened and then trapping them.. I know u can write it amazingly..
"how we met?" haaah I am loving it😉


I too love her as a vamp 😆
Actions would follow after the flashback.
For now...focus on IshRa 😉
Promise, Ishita is not a weak woman in this story 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: fathimaSharmin

Im really 😡 on shagun yar...
She z the main enmy of ishra...
I just hate shagun here...
Plz yar make it a FF...
Waiting till u write the nxt part...


I know... She's just too much 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: gunmu

what Gayu dedicated to shagun😡

shagun pov😡it's ok Raman didn't
love her,she is a witch😡
I loved the drink she had because
of it Raman pushed her and she
was bleeding
I want a quick update of Raman's pov
Please😳


Someone is so dreamy watching Shagun's bleeding head 😆
That's a Shagun update...!!!
I'll compensate 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ranisa123

good morning gaya di.shagun is a witch.i want to kill her.ishra always suffering in pain because of that devil.nice update dr.now waiting to know how ishra met.continue soon dr.thanks for the pm.


Glad you enjoyed it dear 😳
I'll update asap
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mayraa

Awesome update

Plz plz plz make it ff
So it was shagun's plan to make him believe that he loves her
Last dialogue was best
" How we met " haye


Thank you Malvika 😳
Glad you enjoyed it... 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Ruhaani

YES! YES! Please make it a FF! Loving it <3


Sure 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Divanii

So i was right Shagun is behind all this
Lovely update
Waiting for next


Thank you dear...
I'll update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: divazfankau

nice update
shgun is soo evil
stupid kahi ki bus
ishra ke piche hi pad jati
hai waging for ishra first meeting
love story continew soon


Thank you dear...
I'll update asap 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kras

Omg what a update

Ye shagun kitni neech insaan h ridiculous
She deceived raman
And then tried to kill him
Because of her raman lost his memory
And ashok I m not understanding one thing about him
I should feel bad for him
Or I should bash him left right and centre for deceiving his profession
And this mihir I know he is brother and he was tensed for her sister
But he is a rich and successful buisness man also
He didn't trust raman
He didn't feel raman behavior fishy
I mean and accident se pehle tak to thk tha
Phir accident ke baad aisa kya hua Jo raman ne aisa behave kiya use ajeeb nahi laga ye sab
He didn't even try to find the truth
Agar thodi aur koshish karta to shauad uski sister itne waqt tak dukkhi na rehti
And now also if ishita didn't request him
He didn't even come to India
And now when raman told entire truth
He didn't trust him
Stupid man ishita aur raman ko alag kar diya sabne milkar
Ashok shagun mihir mihika sab ke sab pagal
Poor ishita she couldn't even see raman for long time
And Mr and Mrs arora what a parents
Beti saamne saamne bol rahi h ki Maine kisi jaan lene ki koshish ki
Wo bhi ek baar nahi kayi baar
Pata hi nahi kitne logo ko dhokha diya
Sabke pyaar ka faayda uthaya
But unhe koi fark hi nahi pada
They didn't even slap her
Amazing parents
But in fb raman slapped her
But he hospitalized her also
He is so nice person
He didn't say anything to anyone
Because he didn't want to hurt anyone
And now he is so guilty
He thinks he cheat everyone
But he don't know he is so innocent soul in all these things
And ishita poor she I don't know kaise handle karegi sab kuch pregnancy mein
Update soo


Hola...
Killed everyone 😆
Especially poor Mihir. But you're right in your interpretation. Still, we can't ignore the fact that Ashok had insisted Mihir to let Raman stay alone. And when he returned he got the shock. Even after investigating with help of Subbu he got only the point that Raman is perfectly alright and left his sister. Can't blame him completely
Coming to Shagun..., she didn't tell her parents about her deeds. I'll clear it in the next chapter with a note!
Thank you so much for the lengthy critique 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Oho... Waiting started...
I didn't say that I'll update 😆

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