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nahtani88

@nahtani88

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Superb OS

Thanks 4 The PM

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Tc_Tc

@Tc_Tc

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

What to say. It was amazing as usual like your other stories 👏

Idk why but I keep imaging Raman's mansion as a Rajasthani mehal 😳
Like the one in Prem Ratan Dhan

I know it's an OS but you should make it into a two shot (TS). I really think that you left it at a cliff hanger. Would love to know what happened next. Post delivery of the baby.

And you should write more Os' 😆

How old is Mihika? I don't live in India so don't know about the class systems 🥱

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Tc_Tc

@Tc_Tc

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

And like seriously you should start writing books and publishing them. They'll be very popular amongst teens and you'll be a well paid author. 😆

Your really good so give it a shot!

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Divanru

@Divanru

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Amazing loved it to the core.

Really nice update, but in complete is.

Complete it soon dear.

Love ishita in it ,poor she so simple and innocent.

Raman is as always, loving and caring.

And shagun is cunning as always.

Loved last line " they are mine"

But I want see them bonding ,loving ,and caring openly.

And also want ishu to get all his rights as a wife.

do continue soon.waiting

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nafnaf

@nafnaf

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Oh what a beautiful OS but you cannot stop it there please you have to continue!!!!

Thank you so much for the pm and I await next update soon please!!!

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usaonly

@usaonly

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Gaya I really don't want it to end my daer. It was so awesome from the beginning to the ending. So do I will know what Ishra will decide for the baby and ISHU FUTURE LIFE. It was Shagun dirty plan and her selfish how come she can kill her own baby for 4-5 th time.😡😡 And I am glad Raman decide to divorced her right away.he even ask her to give birth for this child but she refuse. Ishra feeling was born so fast and due to this baby they are get closer together. Thank god Mihika come back and then we got to know the truth about Ishu. So I will assume that after give birth to baby Raman might marry her and have a happy family. And hope in this story no twist that Shagun will come back to take away this baby cause you already end it unless you will have 2 nd part of it. SIMPLY AWESOME GAYA. Thank you for the awesome OS my dear. 👏👏👏

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traveller_girl

@traveller_girl

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Nice one...

But please make it a TS and continue it...

Really want to see Raman pamper her...

Pls continue it

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Jeslin

@lachu6

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Nice update
need an epilogue please
continue soon

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janani

@janani_divan

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Its was a brilliant os kanna.
i loved it..but you should give another update to complete this,it is needed too kanna..

Bcoz you showed only 5 months pregnency,i want complete pregnency track.dnt you think it is unfinished.

Shagun,really she is such a fool,i dnt want to utter a word to explain about her sick mentality.

Miku is same like pataka..
i enjoyed the scene when ashok clutches raman feet,show mai nahi diyana ..
tum toh kush kardiya..

i want ishu pov,we read only raman pov..
hope you consider my request author saiba.

i want this as a TS,Please update it soon..
im waiting for next update...