New ishra ss-raanjhana hua main tera#2 pt 14 on pg 123 added on Feb 19

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@ruhi_ishra

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Posted: 9 years ago

#191

Thank u Raksha
I was waiting for it from long time

It was beautiful
I had tears reading it
Very emotional

Ishra love...Ishita act like maniac
Raman talk on hospital bed...Ranjhna hoon...

Lovely
thanks for pm
update soon

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Sharmin

@fSharm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#192

Raksha its awesome...
U scared me at 1st .. But read & finish it Im one of the most happiest person...

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Sushma

@SushSathisha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#193

omg rakshu u made me cry

i imagined each and everything as if its happenening in front of me!

I feel so bad for ishu an dhim.

Who is that man

he is his father na!

update soon

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@9900

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Posted: 9 years ago

#194

Nice and emotional update raksha 😃

Ishu somehow managed to chase away the goons👏

Felt sad when raman talked to ishu and fainted 😭

Felt sad when ishu struggled to find a taxi😭

She gave her earrings to the taxi driver as well😭

Even the taxi driver felt sad for ishra😭

Happy that the taxi driver gave his phone to ishu to inform someone😃

All couples are patched up now😃

The taxi driver gave the earrings back😃

Doctors are fools they don't treat a dying patient saying it's a police case😡

Finally mihir and the others came and solved the matters😃

Ishu is blaming herself for everything😲😭

Who was that man to whom mihir talked to😲

He was so rude😡

Doctor said that raman won't survive😲

Felt sad when ishu prayed in the temple😭

Omg the way she cried hugging raman pleading him to wake up was unbearable😭

Doctor asked the others to take ishitha away😭

Loved how raman holded ishu's hand when bala and mihir dragged her😳

She fell on raman and soon hugged him😳

Raman demanded for a kiss from ishu 😳

Loved their kiss😳

Please continue soon can't wait to read the next part 😃

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Prayosha

@Prayosha.DivAn

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Posted: 9 years ago

#195

Awww...So Emotional Update...

You made me cry...I am stil crying...😭 😭

First let me think...what should I say about Update...

I can imagine this scene...

These bloody goons beating my Raman...

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Raman is lying there unconscious ...lifelessly...

When Texi driver took Ishota's Earings...I was cursing him...but then he showed his humanity. ...

But Mihir called whom??? May be Raman's parents...I think so...

Doctor said Ishita to go away...how can she go away from her life...

Haaye...I love this adorable couple...

& You made this Couple extra Adorable by your Jhakas stories...& I mean it...love You Di...for Giving these beautiful stories...

Haaye...IshRa scene was superb...They are not ready to leave each other's hand...

Haaye.!...Ishita ke pyar ne Raman ko waapas bula hi liya...Raman look at Ishita .she was hugging him like her life depend on him.he hugged her more closer and said very slowly- tum darr gayi thi naa(u were scared naa)

Ishita look at him and said- nahi,main mar gayi thi(no I was dead)

He kissed her forehead and said- Maine kahan tha naa bada hi chipku aashiq hoon,itni asaani se peecha nahi chodne wala(I said naa I am not going to leave u so easily. I am very adamant)

Ishita- mujhe aapse alag hona bhi nahi(even I don't want it)

Raman- achcha agar main mar jaata toh( what if I died)

Ishita look at him and said- don't u say this rubbish or,

Raman- or.

Ishita- I will kill u.

Raman- oh please don't do this.I have seen ur jkr avatar.how u were beating those goons.thank god I am in ur good books,or else

Ishita- can't u remain silent for sometime. Let me feel ur presence around me,in me.

I loved all this lines...

Raman pulled her more closer and kissed her nose-sorry bachcha,I made u cry but I can't see u crying.see I even come back from death just to wipe ur tears.

Ishita- please don't say like this.I was dead seeing u like this.

Raman- u can't die jaan.I won't let it happen I am ur raanjhana naa.can't let u cry for any reason.

He is so right...Ishita ro rahi thi...uss se dur jaa rahi thi iss liye to Raman ko hosh aaya...

I loved this part...

You again made me speechless ...Iss se jyada mai aur kuch nahi keh sakti...

Edited by prayosha - 9 years ago

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Mirrah Abish

@Mirrah_Abish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#196

Everyone including the doctors were stunned to see her.she was acting like a maniac.repeating same words again and again.go on crying.not eating anything not drinking anything ,just sitting beside him ,sobbing and pleading him to come back to her.

Doctor- who is she.

Mihir-she is our bhabhi.

Doctor- I am suggesting u people to take her away coz if he die in front of her,she will go mad.she is not in her sense.

Mihir-please don't say like this.please save him.he said with moist eyes.

Doctor- we have tried but he is too critical. He may slip into coma too.please take her away if u people want her in sane mind.she may not handle his death.

Everyone cried listening to this but they have to act strong at least for ishita.they came to her and said.

Vandu- ishu come let's go home.u must be tired naa.

Ishita kept her head on his bed and said- I am not going anywhere till he is OK.

Mihika- ishu please understand Raman needs rest.visiting hours r finished. Let's go.

Ishita- I am not disturbing him.I am sitting here silently.

Mihika cried and said- I can't do this mihir.

Mihir signals bala to come with him.

Mihir-bhabhi ,bhai will be OK.u please go home.we r here with him.

Ishita- I am not going anywhere leaving him.

Mihir signalled bala.they hold her left hand and started dragging her.she was holding Raman's hand with her right hand.

Mihir-bhabhi u have to go.

Ishita cried- nahi jaana mujhe Raman ko chod ke.please mujhe unke paas rahne do.(I don't wanna leave.please let me be with him)

Everyone was crying but can't help it.

Ishita screamed- raman.

Dis whole scene made me cry

DAT tells how deeply n madly she luvs him

Beautifully written

It can't be more perfect dan dis

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Mirrah Abish

@Mirrah_Abish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#197

Mihir-bhabhi u have to go.

Ishita cried- nahi jaana mujhe Raman ko chod ke.please mujhe unke paas rahne do.(I don't wanna leave.please let me be with him)

Everyone was crying but can't help it.

Ishita screamed- raman.

They were dragging her.ishra hand was about to part when he hold her hand firmly.

Ishita stop in her way.

Ishita- mihir ,he hold me.

Everyone was stunned.mihir and bala leave her hand.Raman pulled her to himself in a jerk and she crashed on his chest.

He very slowly open his eyes and wounded his arms around her.she adjusted herself on the bed hugging him tightly. Everyone saw this and smiled between their tears.

Raman look at mihir and said I am fine with his eyes.he signalled everyone to go out .everyone went outside along with doctors leaving ishra alone.they were happy to see him alright and her with him.

Raman look at Ishita .she was hugging him like her life depend on him.he hugged her more closer and said very slowly- tum darr gayi thi naa(u were scared naa)

Ishita look at him and said- nahi,main mar gayi thi(no I was dead)

He kissed her forehead and said- Maine kahan tha naa bada hi chipku aashiq hoon,itni asaani se peecha nahi chodne wala(I said naa I am not going to leave u so easily. I am very adamant)

Ishita- mujhe aapse alag hona bhi nahi(even I don't want it)

Raman- achcha agar main mar jaata toh( what if I died)

Ishita look at him and said- don't u say this rubbish or,

Raman- or.

Ishita- I will kill u.

Raman- oh please don't do this.I have seen ur jkr avatar.how u were beating those goons.thank god I am in ur good books,or else

Ishita- can't u remain silent for sometime. Let me feel ur presence around me,in me.

Raman pulled her more closer and kissed her nose-sorry bachcha,I made u cry but I can't see u crying.see I even come back from death just to wipe ur tears.

Ishita- please don't say like this.I was dead seeing u like this.

Raman- u can't die jaan.I won't let it happen I am ur raanjhana naa.can't let u cry for any reason.

Luv dis scene also

How dre hands were abt to part

But didn't

Soo perfect

Mind blowing job

N I luv dre talk even

Awww