We've Only Just Begun - IshRa FF IMP Note Pg 50

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-Anku-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: DTKP100
superb update..loved the way ishra support each other..
but please update faster..dont put such a big gap in between

I didn't want to. I would have updated long ago. But my laptop gave up, crashed actually. It took 3 weeks till it got repaired and I had lost the part I wrote, had to redo it when the laptop came back.

Thanks for commenting 😊

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-Anku-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: apoo91
Very nice story.. portrayed the family's emotions very aptly. Wish even half of this was shown in the show. Continue soon

Thanks so so much for the comment. It's great to know you liked it.

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-Anku-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: meghnaghosh
Speechless is what I am right now after reading the update. The scenes that you have depicted are so heartwarming especially the ones involving Ishra. I wish Mr.Bhalla had not misunderstood them so badly.
Raman and Ishita are just so lucky to have each other.
After reading this update, I am seriously missing Ishra on-screen now 😭
As I had already mentioned earlier, this is hands down the best FF on this forum for me.
Continue soon plz

Thanks so much Meghna 🤗 It's always so great to see your comments. Mr Bhalla had his own issues, certain could be related to but most were baseless.

IshRa have always been each others emotional strength, and here too that's what they shall always be.

And you've made me emotional by calling this the Best FF. I don't deserve that but THANK YOU 😆

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-Anku-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: -K.13-
Adorable update! I loved reading about this realistic Ishita & Raman - the simple way they handle their issues and heart-to-hearts. Excited to see what Toshiji's return will do for the story!

I love writing anything realistic.And this pair had all the scope for it so I like making my imagination go free with them 😊 Thanks so much for commenting Krishy 🤗

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-Anku-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: Sri1091
Awesome update itz so realistic and the way they are handling things together itz so sweet and I am loving adi yaar he is so matured and taking care of things and also Ruhi am really excited to see wat will toshiji's entry bring Precap is something really intresting

Thanks so much for your comment 🤗

Toshi ji has arrived, to race the story now 😆

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-Anku-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: kras
Omg mind blowing update dear
U wrote everyone POV so beautifully
Mr bhalla who had so many expectations from raman and ishita but they let him down
U wrote a father's pain so nicely

Raman a son a brother and a husband
His turmoil because he played a husband role very nicely
But a son and brother in him loose
He was guilty because he let his father down
But he was right also
A husband was right
But a son was wrong
But he didn't leave his responsibility

Ishita I love her lines to raman
Whatever she said was true
This was necessary
And I m happy to read this

Simmi a sister and a daughter
She is also in turmoil
She knows her brother is right
But she can't prove this to her father

I love vandu Mrs iyer and ishu scene
I love the way they support her
I love when Mrs iyer prised raman
Ishu was so happy

I love small ishra family and alone moments

And last but not the least Mrs bhalla
A mother who want to question her ideal kids
Who knows that something is miss in this story
Who knows that that's can't be wrong

I love entire part so much

Thanks so much Kras 😃

You commented with such detail, and made me feel so nice about giving the detail too. EVERYONE in this track had their own reasons and point of views. Some where more right and some more wrong. It had a lot of scope to explore their relations and fortify IshRa's relation without their family's shadow. I am just exploring it myself and glad to know you liked.

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kavya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#227

Hi Anku ... finally finished reading this part and i am so so amazed how beautifully you portrayed each charecters emotions here... be it Raman... ishita ... Mr bhalla.. simmi ... Amma... vandu everyone portrayed beautifully by you... great job there 👏

I loved loved the sequence about Mr bhalla.. when in the show he MU Raman and was unfair with him... i was bit angry at Mr bhalla but here reading everything i kind of understand him... i wish CV 's could have portrayed it so substantially... instead of making it OTT drama... anyway its not worth expecting anything from them.. but thanks to writers like you we get such beautiful story and we can relate to charecters... 😳

Loved kids and ishu scen... Awww Adi he is such a sweet boy.. and ruhi Nautanki .. 😆 Loved that sequence... 😛

Do I need to say i loved loved ishra moments ... nowadays i am craving for ishra because in show there is no ishra at all but loved ishra here... they were so cute... ❤️

Thanks for another beautiful update Anku. . Waiting for next part eagerly continue soon.. thanks for the PM dear 🤗

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Aani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#228

Hey Anku,

So finally got the time to read the update, sorry for being late to begin with and thanks for the mention ☺️ 🤗 that is really sweet of ya 😊

I absolutely love, love, love how you have taken this update, incorportated our discussion into this one in such a smooth way that I am speechless. Its like you brought to life what were mere words discussed between us because as I read this one I could very well imagine what Mr. Bhalla was going through and his emotions were so real, so raw and so tangible.

One of the toughest and rawest phase for any family is when its split and there is no simple way to deal with it, no way that can ease the pain or the hurt that everyone goes through in their own special way. Usually when in a family if one is in trouble, we rely on those around us to help us deal with it, if not solve the problem itself but when the people who are supposed to be there for you arent - when in fact they abandon you or you feel abandoned by them how does anyone deal with it?

There is no formula to determine, no sure shot way to happiness at all and that is what I had loved the most about the track but alas our wonderful CVs know how to kill anything and everything. so I am glad to read it here in your version because I know you would give it the closure it deserved but didnt get back then 😃

As always,

Love & God Bless,

Aani

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Anju.s

@Anju.s

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#229

Hey Anku

Loved it everybody's POV. I loved that it was really long update. It was like watching 2-3 episodes in one go. But 😭 now that is not the case with the show.