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wow you respond to each n every comment made on your storyđ thanks đ
coming to this chapter.. this one turned out to be mostly how i imagined and wanted it like raman's consistent apology and ishita's antics of not showing her dancing heart which is happy seeing his attempts and bhaw khaying nature. U portrayed my thoughts into words so beautifully.
raman has been written so differently here.. I mean how can a person be such a gem.. one does not realize his/her mistake unless someone makes them do so by asking them to imagine them in their place. but here raman did that by himself and not after ishita asking him to do so.. that is what makes raman so unique as a person in ur story.. I didn't imagine this part honestly.. I thought ishita will do something like this to ask him to be in her shoes. wow
i liked the beginning part where they slept the way they do usually as it came to them naturally
precap is giving me naughty ideas đ what do u have in store?? will wait for the next
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