Itna Karo Na Mujhe Pyar: FF (Part 3 on Pg 17) 29th nov - Page 8

Originally posted by: DivanIsh

RES for comment

finally UNRES

Haww! Tune ispe itna pyara cmnt likha hai aur mujhe pata bhi nahi...Duniya bhar ki batein kar li kaam ki cheez to batayi nahi tune...

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you know what you should give credit to me for this story

na na confused mat hoyo aap...concept aapka story aapki characters aapke writing aapki sab kuch aapka par dialogs mere 😉

hahaha...u deserve all credit baba...honestly Ishu Miku convo likhte waqt hamari batein hi ghoom rahi thi mere dimag me...

Mihika Ishita ki convo padhke mujhe sirf apni dono ki yaad aati hai

Wah re wah. Ab saari galti meri 🤣🤣🤣 aaj hi aap yeh dialog keh rahi thi

"Tujhe dar nahi lagta meri daant se?" Ishita was surprised.

"Nahi lagta. Kyunki I know aap sirf bolti ho. Karti kuch nahi ho" Mihika stated the obvious and laughed.

this is so you...aapko kitna hi dara lo aapko meri daant se darr nahi lagta 😕 bas hasti ho

🤣 Mai abhi b has rahi hun teri daant ko yaad karke...but jab maine ye likha tha tab mujhe tera mujhse yahi kehna yaad tha...Mai jab b tujhe daant thi to tu yehi kehti thi...but aaj to bazi palat gayi...ab tu daant aur mai hasungi...

seriously Mihika Ishita convo was the most relatable thing in this update and i loved every bit of it...totally real and original types

thank u ji😳

coming to Ishra part...i somehow knew ki usne pehchaan liya hoga and he must be acting to not recognize and see i was so right

aap kabhi galat ho sakti hain bhala😉

aakhir Raman Bhalla Hai woh aise kaise bhul jaega

then phir unki convo through Mr. Iyyengar

i loved it ...thodi professional thodi personal with lots of reluctance...that's how we meet with people during first meetings

hamari pehli mulaqat b aisi hi hogi kya?

Actually aisi hi thi...yaad hai hamara first chat thru IF?

you wrote it brilliantly 👏

thanks again😳

To phir beeti batein bhulake ek nayi pehchan banayein and yeh ek line...kitni simple si hai kuch khaas nahi hai ismein par phir bhi mujhe bahut hi pasand aayi pata nahi kyun...loved it ❤️❤️❤️

Koi connection to hai isse behna...but mai wo baat yaad nahi dilaungi...

ab jab dono business partners ban hi gaye hain toh i am excited to know how the relation progresses from partners to friends and eventually to lovers..

this is going to be one beautiful journey and i am very sure about it...bas ek ehsaan kar dena readers pe ki ismein thode kam twists rakhna and updates zara regularly karna please teacher

iski oi guarantee nahi de sakti mai...kyunkiii...wo to aage hi pata chalega😉

and like always ending was beautiful...so much pyaar already 😳

Pata hai har baar ending likhne me mai sochti hun k behna ko pasand ayega ya nahi...aur thnkfully har baar tujhe pasand aa hi jata hai...I am glad😃 See my batteesi on display😆

Raman ke saath saath hum sabko bhi usi din ke intezaar hai ab dekho kab aapki kripa ho aur woh din aaye

wah bahut badhiya baat boli...cmnt karna to koi tujhse seekhe👏

just loved the update totally

thnk u😳

bas ab jaldi se continue karo pleaseee

Haww...sachhhi...aaj subah hi koi mujhe is baat pe daant raha tha...bhul gayi ho to yaad dila dun?😈

Originally posted by: aarohi26

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Originally posted by: sulochana90

amazing

Originally posted by: Badtameez_Dil_1

I LOVE this story Maanvir it's beautiful. So so beautiful! Such a stress buster absolutely marvellous. I loved it yaar... totally!!

thank u so much for all the beautiful words umeirah...u r being too generous...

Ishu-Miku kitni zyaada hi cute hain ... dil khush hogaya by god! Ishu ka Miku ko dantna ... Miku ka casually behave karna ... sab ek dum perfect tha. I loved the lines between them ... so comical yet so endearing!

thank u so much...glad u liked it😃

& IshRa ... unke baare mein jitna kahoon bas kam hi hai!

😳

Ab jaldi se update soon!

Yes boss😳

Originally posted by: prayosha

Hiii Di...

Now It's my 101th post...1st bhi aap ke liye thi & 101 bhi aap ke liye...

hey prayosha...its really sweet of u yaar...I saw ur 100th post on CK thread...I am really honoured...love u n thnk u so much😳

Mai kitna tension me thi ki aap ho nahi & meri 100th pist ho gai...ab mai kya karu...maine aap se promise kiya tha 100th aap ke liye hi hogi...to lo Bhagwan ne meri sun li & aap aa gai...par aap nahi aati to bhi mai promise nahi todti...100th post to aap ki thread par hoti...
Arre re tune khaas karke bachake rakha ye post...Awww...dats lovely...🤗

Now Story time...

Ishita & Mihika are such a cute sister...

Raman...You already know...I love him... so kind hai na...nahi to sab ke samne Ishita ki insult kar sakta tha par ki nahi...True Gentleman ...

Ab dono partners to ban hi gaye hai...jald hi friends bhi ban jayenge...

"Chalo kam se kam Ravan Kumar se Mr.Bhalla tak to pahunch gaya. Ab to us din ka intezar hai jab mai tumhare liye sirf Raman ban jaunga"


Ab yeh Raman ne aisa kyo kaha...abhi se uss ke Dil me Kuch Kuch Hone laga kya!!!!! 😉

i am glad ke tumhe sare characters aur plot behd pasand aye...

Raman to tumhara favrt hai hi pehle se...😆

Ab phir se Gayab mat ho jana...

ok ji...aap b gayab mat hona plz...

Update soon...

sure😳