Ishra TS - The Ultimate Truth ... COMPLETED - Page 13

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Nidapanjwani17

Hey r u updating today??



Tomorrow pakka
I have not written full 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
U wrote it very brilliantly...
Loved how ishu & Mani expose them...
Hope cv's learn something from this
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mayraa

Awesome update

U wrote it very brilliantly...
Loved how ishu & Mani expose them...
Hope cv's learn something from this



Thanks a lot
Your appreciation means a lot
Keep reading
will update tomorrow 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Great update but someone needs to explain to Raman what he did wrong because he still thinks that what he was doing was right and he was doing it for Ishita! Beside the fact that Shagun betrayed him he thinks that there was nothing wrong in what he did!
I look forward to the next update soon please? I would really appreciate it if you would pm me please?
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Posted: 9 years ago

Here goes Last part

Please bear with grammatical and spelling mistakes

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1 week passed

Raman has become lifeless. She has not met him since that day. Not that he didnt tried but Ishita was out of house most of the time. She kept herself busy in work. Ishita shifted to Iyer house. Adi and Ruhi had no clue about what happened between their parents. But they were smart enuf to guess that something wrong between two.

Bhalla house ( Morning )

All were busy in their chores. There was unknown silence in house, like a body without its soul. Bhalla house has lost its soul - Their Ishita.

Initially all were angry on Raman but later felt bad for him. Toshiji promised, if Ishita forgives him and comes back home then she might forgive him too. The day he wins back her trust then he will get their love too. All were talking to him but it was nothing more then a formal greet.

Raman condition was no less. He felt alone in his own house. He was missing her. He was missing his other half. He vowed himself to win her trust back.

Raman was helping Ruhi in getting ready for school and Simmi was feeding Adi.
Door bell rung and Simmi opened the door

Courier boy - Mam There is a courier for Ishita Bhalla.

Simmi - Bhaiya Woh dusre ghar mein hai and pointed towards Iyer house.

Boy - Mam That house is locked. Can you please take her courier.

Simmi took that courier and kept in on side table.

Simmi - Neelu Thodi der main courier Ishita ko de aana

Raman was leaving house and unknowingly he could not stop himself from opening that envelope.

Simmi stopped him - Bhai woh Ishita ka courier

Raman - So what I am her husband . Dont forget I have not signed those papers

The moment he opened it he was shocked. It had Ishita's appointment letter and a ticket to london.

Raman (thinking) - So she is leaving me. She is going away from me forever. No Ishita I wont let this happen. You cant go away from me. Madrassan You are mine . I will win you back. I will bring you back to this house where you belong.

Next moment he barged out and drove straight to her clinic.

Without knocking he entered her cabin. She was doing some file work and was taken aback seeing him enter suddenly.

Ishita - What you doing here.

Raman - We need to talk

Ishita - We have nothing left to talk . So please leave . I m busy

Raman - But I want to talk to you and he lifted her up and move out of her clinic.

Ishita - Raman what are you doing. Keep me down

Raman - Just shut up . I said I want to talk to you.

He pushed her inside his car and started driving.

Ishita - Raman What are you doing. Where are you taking me. Stop the car.

Raman - Farm house . No one will disturb us there. Now just keep quiet.

Ishita - Mujhe kahi nahi jana aapke saath . Raman I said stop the car.

Raman didnt replied back. After around half an hour he stopped his car.

Raman - Come out

Ishita - I want to go back. I am not coming out.

Raman pulled her out and scooped her in his arms and move inside. As soon as he enter he bolted the door.

Ishita - Yeh kya tarika hai

Raman - You are leaving me. Forever . London ja rahi hoon

Ishita looked down - Thats none of your business.

Raman pinned her to the wall - Anything related to you is my business.

Ishita - Dont forget we are divorced now

Raman - But I have not signed them . Trust me I never will

Next moment he placed his lips on her. She tried to push him back but he was stronger of two. The more she tried to move away, the more harder he pulls her . Soon she stopped struggling but at the same time didnt even responded.

He parted away.

Ishita ( pleading)- Why Raman . Please let me go.

Raman - I never will. And kissed her forehead

Ishita composed herself - I will never forgive you for what you did.

Raman with tears in his eyes - I am sorry Ishita . Please give me one last chance. I cant live without you.

Ishita - No you dont love me. Whatever you did was not love. You cheated me. I clearly told you I m happy with Adi and Ruhi. Still you went for surrogacy that though without my consent. I had my children. They were enough for me. But not for you. You wanted our child.

Subbu was right har shaadi sirf bache ke liye hi hoti hai. And started crying

Raman cupped her face - No . Dont say that . I love you only you. I did all that for you. Ishita I was not understanding anything at that time. I just wanted to give you that happiness which you lost because of me. Ishita look at me

Ishita shook her head negatively

Raman - Please Ishita and raised her head with his two hands.

What do you see in my eyes..

Ishita looked deep into his eyes and looked down

Raman- Love . Ishita you are my life. Please give me a last chance. Chance to love you. Chance to fight with you. Chance to live my life. I have suffered a lot in last one week. I have gone through a lot. I cant explain you. Please dont go. I will die without you. And hugged her tightly

Ishita - Raman You always do this. How many times. Main bhi insaan hoon. Mujhe bhi dard hota hai. Whenever I have tried to trust you, you broke it brutely. But not anymore. I am going away from you. Forever

I have learned that sometimes "sorry" is not enough. Sometimes you actually have to change

Raman - Ishita Please forgive me. I will die. Tumne kahan tha na ki iss Raavan kumar ho sirf tum jhel sakti hoon. Ishita badi mushkil se mujhe sacha pyaar mila hai. I dont want to lose you.

Mere liye nahi toh Adi Ruhi ke liye . Dont snatch their mother from them.
( Folding his hands)

It was my mistake. But dont punish them and yourself.

Fine If you want I will go away you.Par unhe aur khud ko sazaa mat do. I will sign those papers but dont leave them.

I will leave tomorrow morning. I know I am very bad. You are right I could never give you any happiness instead I have given you only pain. Main kal hi yahan se chala jauga. I should have died in that accident. I could not save my child. Instead I trusted Manoj who killed my child. I trusted Shagun again. But she killed Rinki. I could never protect my family. Mujhe mar jana chahiye.

"Forgive me,Forgive this fool

Sorry that I acted so cruel I love you and I will love only you

Take my hand and let's start anew"

Ishita could not see him in that condition anymore.

She slapped him.
Ishita - Dont you dare say that. Dont ever say anything against my Raavan kumar.

She hugged him
Raman - I am sorry and kissed her hairs then kissed her whole face

Ishita - Dont say that again.

Raman - Please forgive me. I m Sorry. Dont leave at least for Adi Ruhi

Ishita pecked his lips and kissed his forehead -I am not going anywhere . But this time sirf aapke liye.

Raman - I love you . Dont leave me

Ishita - I love... She fainted in his arms.

He sensing her weight parted away

Raman - Ishita Ishita Please open your eyes

He called doctor and within few mins doctor was at his farmhouse.

Raman - Doctor What happened. Hows she

Doctor - Nothing to worry. Congratulation. Your wife is pregnant. She had low BP . Maybe due to some triggering factor like stress or exhausion. But she is fine now. Take good care of her.

Raman - What did you say. Hmmm. Yah doctor. Thank you doctor. And hugged him in excitement

Soon he left. Raman was sitting next to her.

Ishita opened her eyes - Raman

Raman - Ishita How are you. Madrassan you are pregnant.

Ishita didnt say anything just looked down

Raman as if reading her face- You knew this .Tumhe pata tha

She was still looking down.

FLASHBACK from Part 2

Ishita - Shagun Thats what I needed. Aj tak tumne mujhe sirf dukh diye hai. Par ab aur nahi .Main tumhara sach sabke samne laogi. Mere bacho ke liye aur ... ISS HONE WALE BACHE KE LIYE

Present

Raman - How could you do this . Itni badi baat. Mujhe itni badi sazaa dene ja rahi thi. Ishita This our child

Ishita had tears in her eyes

Raman wiped her tears. - Mere galti ki sazaa tum iss bache ko kyu de rakhi thi.

Ishita just hugged him- I am Sorry Raman . I wanted to tell you this that day but you left in between. I wanted to give you this happiness. But then I saw you at Manoj house. I thought you still love her.

Raman hugged her - I love you ..Only you. I was good to shagun only for our child. She is my past and you are by present and future. No one can take your place. You are my soulmate. I promise this will never happen again. I will never hide anything big from you. Ruhi promise.

Ishita - Big matlab. You will hide small things from me. Really. After all this

Raman smiled - Haan but sirf choti bate

Ishita - Jaise

Raman (smiling)- Jaise Ruhi aur mujhe tumhare drumsticks bilkul nahi pasand. Still hum chup chap kha lete hai.
Last time jab Adi aur main raat ko bahar gaye the tab actually humne ice cream race ki thi.

Ishita mouth opened in perfect O shape - Aur

Raman - Mujhe tumhari kapdon ki thaan zyaga achi lagti hai. Because I can view your back better.
Aur jab tum lecture deti ho toh I dont listen to your single word. I am busy oogling at your sexy figure.. Aur

Ishita (placing her hands on her ears)- Bas bas . Raman Sharam karo . You are saying this in front of your child. Shameless

Raman removing her hands - Ek baat aur bolu. Madrassan tu sach mein pagal hai

Ishita - Dont call me that

Raman - Tumhi ne toh kaha tha ek pagal pati ki pagal patni ho tum.

They smiled together.


Soon Raman informed all about there talk. All were happy for them. Toshiji did their Grah Pravesh again.
It was fresh start for them.

Ishra Room

Raman came out of washroom and saw Ishita seaching for something in cupboard.

Raman - Kya dhoond rahi ho

Ishita - Raman you have created mess of this. Where is my Green kurti.

Raman - Maine kya kiya . You have made me dependent on you. I should be the one complaining.

Ishita - Mil gaye ..

Soon she went inside to change.
After few minutes

Ishita - Let me go and check Adi Ruhi

Raman - Bas karo. I have checked them. They are playing video game. Please let them enjoy.

And you rest

Ishita - You are so bad

Raman - Aur haan madrassan us Mani ko bolna tumhare zyada paas aane ki zaroorat nahi hai. Main bahut dino se dekh raha hoon tumhare aas paas mandra raha hai

Ishita - Raman you should be thankful to him. He helped me a lot

Raman - Okay I will thank him on behalf of everyone with a separate bouquet from each family member. But you stay away from him.

Ishita - Raavan kumar

Raman - Dont say that. My daughter will get scared of you. Sochti hogi meri mumma ko kitna gussa aata hai. Pagal madrassan

Ishita - Gusse ki baat ap toh mat karo and by the way, Its a boy

Raman - Girl

Ishita - I said its a boy .

Raman - Girl

This whole scene was witnessed by all family members who were standing at the door.

Ruhi - In dono ka kuch nahi ho sakta

Toshi - Inki taqraar mein bhi pyaar chupa hai

Yeh Khatti Meethi
Takraar Hai Ya Pyaar
Yeh Roottha Rootthi
Yeh Khatti Meethi

Ohh..
Saath Saath Rehna Hai
Roottna Manana Hain
Yeh Kaisi Hai Ladayi

Ohh..
Ek Dor Keeche Hain
Ek Dor Baandhi Hain
Hoti Nahi Hain Judaayi

Ohh..
Ek Duje Se Hai Shikayatein
Phir Bhi Sang Hai Yeh Hai Mohabbatein
Ek Duje Se Hai Shikayatein

Phir Bhi Sang Hai Yeh Hai Mohabbatein

Pal pal bade mohabbatein...


" Forgiveness is the final form of love."

"The Perfect Love We Seek, the Imperfect Love We Live"


EPILOGUE

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Phew ! I am done with this Ts
I have taken all my frustration in this .
Just wanna say Cvs This was my Ishra who can fight and love at the same time. But you ruined it. Hate you for that. Hate you Ekta!!!!

I know many of you might find it illogical with Ishita forgiving him and Ishita pregnant again so soon. But take it as a story. I could not think of better positive end then this.

Thanks a lot friends for bearing me. Do leave your comments for this last part too.



Edited by ruhi_ishra - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
i love this...
you are right ekta and cv killed the beauty of ishra...
hate them😡😡

coming to last part
its awesome... i totally loved it👏
want an epilogue😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Read both parts 3 and 4..
Ahh, the last part.
Now that's why I am so Hopeless, I'm so pissed at this track, just everything but still the part brought a grin on my face. Man, this is ISHRA.. They just make me smile given everything.

I can never stop loving them. Yes she forgive him easily but I guess I just needed some ISHRA dose for now to make me feel better and it did. Thank you!!

They are just ISHRA.. Adorable and the best of what they are.

Coming to the revelation, it was awesome. Loved the way it all went along.. Shagun had it.

Thank you for this story! 😳 Enjoyed it a lot.. :)

PS : IshRa, I love you ❤️ and EK, I hate you - both from the bottom of my heart...
Edited by Anu_IshraDivan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nyc story...
Kash CVs ko bhi akal mile...
Your dialouges touched my heart...!! Good work...!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice ending & yeah EK created it & destroyed with her own hands...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Luv da end ishu being pregnant luv da end but epilogue du write it n plx boy ho name Ansh plx

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