Will you forgive me? An IshRa FF- Chapter 5 updated Page 28 - Page 23

hey Kaarthikk
read part 4 & 5 together
superb updates
loved ishra rain scene in park...it was romantic😳
liked raman-abhi convo so much 😆
ishita knocked some sense into raman
and he finally talked with his parents 😃
abhi has become one of my fav character of this story...he is so cool😛
liked d way he was teasing raman 😆
want some ishra moments in next update 😳
update d next part soonish
thanks for pm

Just read the four updates in one go,awesome just awesome..
Its was so romantic 😉
P..S.your updates are pretty small, can it be a little lengthy pretty please 😊

Originally posted by: ishrasoul

its awesome...

waiting for next update eagerly

Originally posted by: cutieruhi

Yes I am happy and sad together

Happy u updated finally and sad coz I couldn't comment first.

No offence to u rida.

Coming to the update

It was nice but chotu

I like the bonding of all specially simmi and abhi

Missed ishu

Update soon and a longer one.

Originally posted by: Sri1091

Family reunion tym it is... Am very happy so Raman forgave his parents and also apologised to them gud... I love Abhi and Raman bonding... "Mata rani nahi Jhansi ki rani" I loved dat diologue and Raman and Abhi teasing each other I liked everything in dis update... So next update will be Abhi Simmi engagement and iyers and bhalla's meeting??? I hope Raman forgives Ishita tooo I so want to see them together... Continue soon

Originally posted by: janani_divan

Emotional athyachar..its cracking me boy.

yeh kya hain karthik,serious scene main be joke..

yeh sab jkr ke kroopa drushti sai huwa hain.
abhi believe in astrology...he he simmi ,mihir,abhi lovely gang .
Family reunion is super cute..waiting for simmi engagement and bhallas ,iyers party time.

Originally posted by: _SUMAN_

You write awesome updates..

But, wait bahut karate ho yaar😛

Originally posted by: Divanru

Nice update but chotu.finally family reunion.poor raman abhi always teases him.thanks for pm.do update soon and this time we want a long wala update.

nice update

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

wow such a cute update im loving abhi so much kitna tease krta hain yar raman ko bt i loved it aur satao aur satao abhi