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@DivanIsh

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Badtameez_Dil_1

I'll bs waiting! Aap aaram se padho... I realise ke kaafi lamba hai! 😊

I lost the second part & now I honestly don't remember what I'd written! 😭

I really hope ke main issi level ka kuch acha sa likh sakoon!

finally read...i could even read a lengthier one as it was one great update

whatever it is i want the second update...dont tell me you aren't writing

please i want the update and need to know what is there ahead

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@ChanChanMan

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: DivanIsh
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what do i say...i read it and i literally have nothing to say...i have commented on so many of your other works but i am finding it too hard to write anything here

it was painful to read...i dont know if it will show you what i mean to say and how deeply i got affected by this one but it was painful to read

you brought out happiness, pain and fear beautifully...emotions were intense and heavy

words used were just perfect and the sync was brilliant

have nothing more to say i am sorry

bas i loved it and i cannot wait for the next part

you are an awesome writer and you know it

please update soon and for god sake PM me...it is so tough to find things without PM...i will wait for the PM for the next part of this...dont disappoint me

love you😊😊😊

Thank you so much! Aap sachi ke rahe ho.. this is honestly the best I've written!

It's a pity I lost my second part... ab jo bhi likhoon gi... I know for a fact ke iss level ka nahi likh paoungi!

Start toh kardiya hai second part but it's no where near what I intended to write! 😭