SS: || Karun ya na Karun?|| Pt9 Pg54 27/09 - Page 24

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rk654

brillant job sushama...both are childhood friend..and raman didn't recognise her.confussion soul .lagta hai thappad ne uske brain ka screw dhila kar diya..😆..ye ishita tu chupchap kyu khadi hai kah de childhood se pichhe padi hai🤣...very well written part..

at the end...

over to gaya main samajh gaya..update ki nahi hai date hume karan padega thoda aur wait kyuki gaya humeshahoti hai late😆

tysm for the pm


Look at this and some one told me writing hamare bas ki bath nahi 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi kutties

Heard that someone is gonna give so much entertainment. Don't prob me to say who. Because I don't know...or maybe I'm lying 😉
Anyways, I'm gonna enjoy it a lot. So no more twists. Just want to mould this update for the sake of my greed for reading an entertaining one. Moreover, I've just typed it. I know it is not a nice part.
A filler update
Not proofread.


Is it part 5?


"Some noise...outside...come closer...I'm scared..." Mihika whispered when Ishita was staring at the sealing as if there is something engraved which she want to decipher.

"What Miku...don't act childish! Sleep..." She scolded her lightly smacking her arm.

"Ishu...see...someone is coming inside...the balcony door is open...where is dadi? Ayyo...we're gone!" Mihika whispered again shivering as if she is in Antarctica unclothed!

Ishita peeped to the direction only to see a man's shadow passing in. Her clutch on Mihika's hand tightened. Now both of them started shivering so bad.

"Ishu...do something. Where the hell is dadi? Ayyo kadavule...!" Mihika snuggled closer to Ishita who was trying hard to identify the man's face in the darkness.

"Is it Ravan Kumar?" She thought and looked on as the man decended towards them.

In no time the man leaned over her meanwhile Mihika buried her face in Ishita's arms as Ishita hugged her tighter. There was no familiarity in his presence. Thus, he was a stranger. His hand slowly came over her face. It pushed down her cheeks to her neck. She gritted her teeth in disgust. The next thing he did was turning to the table and taking something from her handbag. In no time he left the place leaving behind a horrified Mihika and tensed Ishita to breath heavily.

"He took something from the table..." Ishita tried to turn on the light.

"Ishuuu...your chain?" Mihika pointed.

"That was not in the table but in my neck!" Ishita feigned ignorance.

"Ishuuu ...your chain!" Mihika repeated.

"Ayyo my chain...!!!"

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Meantime, the man/boy came out to his boss who was waiting for him.

"Did you scared her? And that pass?" Raman was curious.

"Haan Raman...she was scared to death. And that small but lengthy piece was shivered like hell. Here is the pass. Now she cannot enter in the "freshes party!"" the boy informed.

"Is there anything else?" Raman crinkled his eyebrows.

"She was so scared that she didn't mind me taking her chain. See...I got it! It was a dirty prank. But I dir enjoy her expressions!!!" the boy showed the chain seeing which Raman stood rooted to the ground.

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"Oh my chain...! It was gifted by my Raman!!! He...that bloody thief...I'm gonna kill him." Ishita started blabbering.

"Listen Ishu...it's just a chain...that too from Raman. You should be happy that the last memory of him also is no more there." Mihika started her philisophy.

"Memories never dies Miku. And that chain means a lot to me. Because it is from Raman. I mean it!" Ishita said firmly.

"Nothing can change you Ishu. Changing from the old...I mean 'Raman's Boo' to this you is a drama. You're still the same." Mihika said in serious tone.

"Yes I'm. But no one knows it. Especially him.!"

"You should say sorry. It was the mistake of you both. You misunderstood him."

"Yeah whatever. It's too late now. He doesn't even remember me. He forgot me...!" She sat on the bed crying.

"I won't believe this. Maybe he is confused. Maybe he didn't recognise you..." Mihika tried the possibilities.

"Then...how could he just...propose some random girl? How dare he? That too chee...!!! Shameless man. He doesn't know how to propose a girl!" Ishita threw a pillow on the couch as if he is sitting there.

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"Are you sure this is hers?" Raman closed his mouth to suppress his shock/happiness.

"Sure. It is hers!" He confirmed.

He hugged him tight not being able to control his happiness. He couldn't believe that it is his Ishita. He was blushing himself looking at the chain when the boy cleared his throat to gain his attention.

"What now?" Raman glared at him.

"Should I go...I mean...Will you spare me? Is the ragging over?" The boy asked nervously.

Raman smiled and hugged him again saying, "You're more than my friend. Call me 'bhai' from now on. I'll be there for you."

"Bhai...you ask me for anything. I'll do everything in my power. I'm happy that I got a handsome bhai!" The boy chirped.

"Ok beta...so you go hostal. And yeah...I want you to do one more thing before that." Raman called him from behind.

"I want you to keep it where it was..." He showed both the chain and the pass.

"Bhai?????"


Sorry for the tiny update
Waiting for your update Asha baby...😳


Gaya3
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Posted: 10 years ago
Updated part 5
I'll PM everyone later
Enjoy reading 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update gaya di!!!
Heheh thank god ko twist
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rk654

brillant job sushama...both are childhood friend..and raman didn't recognise her.confussion soul .lagta hai thappad ne uske brain ka screw dhila kar diya..😆..ye ishita tu chupchap kyu khadi hai kah de childhood se pichhe padi hai🤣...very well written part..

at the end...

over to gaya main samajh gaya..update ki nahi hai date hume karan padega thoda aur wait kyuki gaya humeshahoti hai late😆

tysm for the pm

hehe thank u so much
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Posted: 10 years ago
Now Raman would keep on loving his Boo forever😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update
but short one
very well written
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved it loved it loved it...
So now he knows that she is his boo...
Was that guy mihir who stole chain and pass???
Asha waiting for ur part...update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
yup finally raman got to knw she is his boo
awesome update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome ..
Now Raman ko pata hai k ishita hi uski boo hai..
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