My first ss# FROZEN LOVE,part-7, updated on pg.49 - Page 27

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: misavelon789

Hey sorry for late reply but I just came through this story.nice concept dear.

why shagun playing double game.is she with Raman or subbu.i think you will clear the confusion in near future.
you writing this story very nicely.love to read more.

it's okay dear
stay tuned ,u will get the answers.
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Posted: 10 years ago
HI MY LOVELY BUDDIES😉
I KNOW I'M SUPER LATE😭
THANKS A TON FOR YOUR LOVELY COMMENTS😛
ENJOY READING😉
Not proofread, please check spellings and grammatical mistakes.
THANKS TO MY SWEETY ,OPPS RAKSHA ,WHO HELPED ME🤗
same day morning at 6 am

Amma...ishita screamed loudly..

Laddu,what happen tell me?you are scaring me laddu,bura sapna dekha hain kya?(have u seen any nightmare)amma asked worriedly.

Kuch nahi amma(nothing sort of amma)ishita try to compose herself..

Toh chillahi kyu(then why did u screamed)?amma asked concernely.
Amma its paining,my head is paining ahh..ishitha tell her amma little bit teary..

Ayyo laddu,main vandhu ko bulau kya(should I call vandu)?amma asked worriedly.

Amma its not headache ,its my heartache,how I can explain u.ishu thoughts herself..

Laddu..laddu say something ,shall i call vandhu?
No,amma i'm fine,dont call her..

Hmm..laddu can I ask something?amma asked ishita.

Of course amma tell me what happened?
Vo..raman ,raman tumaraha hospital main,tumarai cabin main kya kar raha hain,is he trying to harm you?amma asked ishita in one go.(what Raman was doing in ur cabin in your hospital)

RAMAN..RAMAN koun hain amma?(raman who is raman)ishu asked confusingly..
Ayyo laddu ,tum raman ko nahi jante ho?ayyo laddu,tum ko memory loss toh nahi huwa na?ayyo vishawa,subbu ..amma calling appa and subbu who are waiting out side of the ishu's room.(what u didn't know Raman,r u suffering from memory loss)

what amma,kya bol rahi ho?(what rubbish u r talking about) Ishita shocked at her mother conclusion about her memory loss.ishita shut her amma mouth with her hand and pleaded her amma to calm down..

Amma..what is this?im just trying to remembering what has been happened last night .
Bathavo laddu,kya huwa kal raat.?(tell me what happened last night)amma asked ishitha again.
Vo..mujhe kuch yaad nahi hain amma..mujhe nahi pata vaha raman kaisa pocha..yeha tak ke mujhe pata he ki...mera cabin main pani kaisa agaya mujhe nahi pata,meine nahi dekha aur mera paira fisal gaya amma,jaroor meri staff ke lapar vahi ki vajhesai yeh huwa hain...ishitha tell her amma in one go to convince her.(I didn't remember properly, I don't remember how Raman reached there.don't know from where water comes and I slipped on it.I think its due to my staff mistake)
Amma not convienced with her,again asked her,yeh kaisa hosaktha hain laddu..(how can it be possible )
Amma ,tumai pata hain na hospital main kitna work hota hain,uss ko bi nahi pata hoga,ishita try to convience her amma again.(u know naa there r many works in hospital, even she doesn't know)
Laddu,tum usko kam sai nikal lo,(u can fire her)amma order her daughter.
Okay amma i will fire her..ishita now releaved from her amma questions..

Ishu in deep thoughts...
Laddu..laddu..amma called her to bring back her to the earth.

Amma please dont call me laddu,i'm not a kid now.call me ishita or ishu..how many times i repeat you amma...ishu said irritatedly..

okay,okay gussa mat karo lad..(ok dont be angry)oops sorry ishu,now kush(happy) ..amma kissed her daughter lovingly.


ishita give her million dollar smile..
Wow my princess is smiling now appa said looking to his daughter smiling face.
appa and subbu enter the room to see ishita...
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Ishu meri princess,tum appa ko bohuth ruladiya ,tum kaisai ho..pata hain meri jaan nikal gaye ,tumai iss taraha dekar meri jaan nikal gaye hain.meri saas rukkgaye kuch der keliya,(ishu my princess,u made ur appa cried,how r u,u dont know i felt sufgocated seeing u like this)appa hugged ishita tightly and cried virguoursly,he gripped his arms protectively that no one dare to snatch his princess from him..

Appa,dont cry please,u know naa.i hate your tears,get hold of it..ishu kissed her appa cheeks lovingly..

I think u got your medicine now appa..ishu said looking in to her father eyes...

offcourse ..i got my medicine.appa said happily..

Ishu,r u ok,subbu asked concernely and kissed her forehead with lovingly..

im fine subbu,dont worry..ishita assured him.

Appa asked ishu,mujhe samaj main nahi araha hain raman kya kar raha hain tumaraha cabin main?(I don't understand what Raman was doing in ur cabin)

ayyo shiva please help me from all this questions,atleast give me right choices ,i will choose from it...ishu uss rakshas ke chakar main kitna jhot bolna padaiga,mujhe iss paap se bachalene ,kam sai kam mera jhot ka list thoda kam kardho...main apka darshan karke ,5001 rupees apki account main deposit karunga,ishu thought herself.(I think I have to lie many times for that rakshas,please save me from this sin,at least make them minimum,I will come to seek ur blessings and give 5001 as bribe)

Shiva:hey ishu tumarah jhot ke wajhe sai meri bank main paisa toh deposit hora ha hain,lekin tumara jhot ki chekkar main, meri patni se roju maar karaha hoo..bcoz im not spending my time with my biwi,poora din tumaraha complains ,wishes ,jhot sunnemai lage raha ho..(because of ur lies my deposit is increasing but I am being beaten by my wife daily since I am not spending time with her. .always busy in your queries)

Appa,mujhe nahi pata vo vaha kaisa pochi,already i told every thing to amma..amma,samjavo na appa ko..ishitha asked her mother to deal the matter with her appa.(I don't know how he was there,amma please make appa understand)

Par ishu..(but ishu)subbu going to ask her,par kya hainsubbu?(but what subbu)ishu asked him.
is he trying to harm you?subbu asked ishu..

Subbu,i'm not a thief,why you people not trusting me?ishita asked frustratedly..

Okay okay calm down ,dont take stress,i'm just worried about you ishu,subbu said conviencingly.
Then why are you asking me subbu,ishu asked him.

Vo sab choda,tum kaisa hain ab(leave that tell me how r u) subbu give side hug to her..you very well know how to butter me ,right subbu?ishita asked him that she caught him red handed.

Ishu,tumai kitna bar samjaya ,naam sai mat bulawo subbu ko,lekin tumai sunthi nahi ho meri bat,vo tum sai badai hain ..it is not good for him ishu..amma warnned ishita.(how many times I have told u ,don't take his name,he is elder than u)

amma,please dont open your purna grandh lectures again,kam sa kam aaj toh bakshdho mujhe..i'm patient amma,look at me ..look at my bandage..kam sai kam merahalatoh dekhar bola kar amma..(stop ur preaching amma,at least spare me today ,I am patient)

Its okay amma,jane dho.i loved to hear my name from her.And i love her more than anything in my life..ishu bach pan saihi esi tina..toh ab kyu change karne ke koyi jarurath nahi hain..subbu said happily to looking at ishita..(let it be like that amma,she is like that since childhood no need to change now)
love u subbu..ishu hugged him and pinch his cheeks lovingly..

Oho koun itna butter lagaraha hain.(ohho who is buttering)
Vandhita entered the room and greeted them..

how is my doll feeling now?vandu asked ishu ..

Main tek hu akka..please discharge karano ,im hating this hospital smell(I am OK akka,please make me discharged) ,ishu winked at vandhu naughtly...

O really ishu,you are hating hospital smell?you are a famous doctor in delhi ..and you are hating hospital smell..vandu slap ishu cheeks lightly.

offcourse i'm ,but my hospital is very clean and it smell's good akka,not like this hospital..ishu tell her akka about hospitality management..

Let me remind you,this is our hospital,you are the one who didn't take charges completly .you are the one who wanted your own hospital right,vandhu give her winning smile to ishita..

oh come on ladies stop it here,subbu pleaded them..

Okay okay main badh main dekunga tujhe(OK I will handle u later),vandu said to ishu..

Acha ,kab dekhogi tum?main bala jiju ko boldungi..vo tumai dekengi raatko.(really when will u see me,I will complain to bala jiju,he will handle u at night).she winked at her akka..
Ishu,amma signelled her to stop ...like dont speak infront of appa and subbu..

Chitti ,chittappa,subbu app log gar jake fresh hojaye,(please go and fresh up),i will look after ishu,and staff is there to look after her..

Haa..app log jaye yeh(yes u people please go),i'm fine now,ishu assured them.

No,its not good.how we leave you alone ishu..subbu asked worriedly..

come on subbu,we are in our hospital,no one eat up ishu ..vandu assured him.

Yes subbu tum jaho,dekho tum handsome hunk sai ,chees bina pizza bangaya..jawo na i will be fine..( yes subbu please go,see u r a handsome hunk, now looking like a pizza without cheese,go naa I will be fine)
okay,take care then,subbu come near to her and kissed her forehead and bid her bye..

amma,appa ,subbu left the hospital...

During the journey time,appa asked subbu about mani arrival to delhi.
Subbu,tum mani ko kya kaha?(subbu what did u told mani)appa asked him..

Appa,mani already in airport ,one hour main singapore ka flight hain.(flight is in an hour)i didnt told him about ishu...if i tell him about ishu,you very well know how mani will react..

hmm,tum acha kiya subbu,pata nahi agar uske ishu ko baramain pata chalgaye toh,he not spare any one..(yes u have done correctly, if he came to know about her,then he will not spare anyone)
haa,vishwa subbu ne sahi kiya..amma revealed that mani is not in delhi.(yes vishwa,subbu is right)
Dont worry amma,appa.i will handle it.usko nahi pata chalega yeh sab,mainai usko bol diya,ishu is not in delhi.(he will not come to know about her,I told her she is out of town.)..mani asked ishu no.of times.thanks to singapore project.i send him to handle that project..

Vishwa,hum na ishu aur subbu keliya pooja rakenge,kiska nazar lagi hogi meri beti par.( we will keep a Pooja for them,someone must have cursed them)..amma cried non stoply..

Ssshhh..madhavi please calm down,i will talk to panditji today and i will ask about pooja..

Hmm vishwa,hum pooja keliye bhalla's ko invite kare?amma asked vishwa..(shall we invite bhallas for Pooja)

NO,vishwa shouted angrily..i dont want that family near to my daughter.you got that..

kya bol rahi ho vishwa(what u r talking vishwa)..amma try to convience vishwa..

Appa stop her with his hand and shouted ..kaha diyana bas kahadiya...(I have told,its decided)
TO BE COTINUED...
BUDDY ME FOR PM'S
P.S: if I will get good response ,I will update next part tomorrow..


Edited by janani_divan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
appa is bad im angry on him thx nice
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Posted: 10 years ago
Whenever I see Subbu name on screen I wanna punch my Lappy...
So plz try to avoid that dubbu apart from that I liked this update. To be frank I am eagerly waiting for Abhi-Raman scene...Cont soon Janani..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Jannani still confuse why Ishu want to hide about Raman. And Appa hate Taman too why MU they have . And everybody scare of Abhi how do he has an important role in Ishu life.Thank for the update and you not gong to reveal soon aren't you.😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey janani it's a simply awesome one and so well written part..👏..
its laddo(loving) not laddu(a type of sweet)...😉...

ishita&lord shiva convo was hilarious..bhagwaan ko bhi koi bribe offer karta hai kya😆...

tysm for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hein ki subbu ishita ka bhai hein??? Am I right?? If so am very happy dat he is her brother otherwise I will kill him... Y appa doesn't like bhalla's??? Appa ki last diologue to k3g mein amitabh ki yaar diladi... I loved dis side of ishu jovial and her talk wid lord shiva is too cute...
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
bt so confusing
wht is with subbu n ishu
n y everyone is scared of mani
appa dont like bhallas y??
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb and long update ;)
But missed Raman badly

I m with @sri1091...,is subbu Ishita's brother
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry for late replt janani.
Great update. Love the conversation between ishu and appa.
Looking forward for the next one.
Update soon

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