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Posted: 10 years ago
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Author's note-thankyou so much for all ur good wishes and sorry if I missed to reply back anyone's comment but trust me I red all of them.before reading this part make sure u have red part 28 on page 147 from previous thread.link of which is given on page 4.anyone who wants pm can buddy me.

PART 29


All three of them r crying in their respective rooms.Rahul was very worried as what went wrong.he was determined to make this wrong right.he goes to Raman 's room to talk but stopped seeing him cry like anything.he understood something is fishy.

Rahul thought I know u r sad then why u r doing this Raman.whatever is the reason but I will clear this misunderstanding and make u people together because I can't see ishita and ansh sad.

He goes to ansh's room.he was also crying.ansh hugged him and said-Rb please stop him .I don't want him to go.please stop him.

Rahul-only u can stop him.

Ansh-how.

Rahul-make a note and give it to dude.

Ansh took his notebook and started writing.

Dude please don't go .i love u.

Ansh was tearing that page but rahul said go and give him your notebook only.ansh asked why.rahul told just do as I say if u want to stop him.ansh ran to raman's room and Raman composed himself.he hugged Raman tightly and said -don't go dude.please don't go.and gave him the note and come back to his room.

Ansh-now what will happen

Rahul -just wait and watch.

Raman saw his note and caressed his writing and kissed it fondly.

Raman -I know u love me but I can't stay here anymore.

In ansh room

Rahul-do u know ur fathers name.

Ansh-yes why did u ask.

Rahul-what is it.

Ansh-Raman Kumar bhalla.

Rahul-u remember what that bad uncle called dude.

Ansh said after thinking -I think Raman.he said and thought again and said-does it mean he is my father.

Rahul-may be just go and ask.

In Raman room

He kept ansh notebook on the bed.and just then saw his name.

ISHRAANSH BHALLA

He took his notebook again and saw the name again.

He thought does it mean he is my son.he ran towards ansh room.ansh ran towards Raman 's room.they met in the corridor.Raman kneel down in front of him and ask-what's ur fathers name.

At the same time ansh ask-what is ur name.

Both replied in unison-Raman Kumar bhalla

The time stand still for a moment.both were looking lovingly at each other.tears were coming out of their eyes.
Raman hugged him tightly saying tu mera beta hai(u r my son)
Ansh hugged him tightly saying aap mere dad ho(u r my dad)

They were hugging each other.Raman laughed maniacally while tears were dropping continuously from his eyes.he was happy,shocked,excited all together.he was feeling all kind of emotions together.he was happy that ansh is his son but was sad also because ansh was deprived of fathers love due to his mistake.

Raman -tu mera beta hai sirf mera(u r my son only makes ne)he said kissing him all over his face and hugged him once again.

Ansh-aap mere dad ho.aap kahan the itne saal .aapko pata hai mom kitni akeli thi.woh hamesha roti rehti thi.sunder kapde bhi nahi pahenti thi,sajti bhi nahi thi aur hamesha mujhse door bhagati rahti thi.par jab main raat ko sota Tha toh mujhse lipat kar khub roti thi.jab Main aapke baare Mein poochta Tha to bhi roti thi toh Maine poochna bhi chod diya.hum kitne akele the aapke bina.aap itne der se kyon aaye dad.(u r my dad.where were u all these years.u know mom cried alot for u.she doesn't use to wear good clothes nor done any makeup.she use to ran away from me but when I sleep in night she use to cuddle me and cry.she use to cry when I ask about u .so I stopped asking about u.we were all alone these years.where were u dad)he cried.

Raman -please say once again.

Ansh-dad I love u.

Raman hugged him tight -I am sorry bachcha.ur dad is bad please forgive him.

Ansh-please don't say anything about my dad.he is the best.

Raman saw him and thought ansh loves him as unconditionally as his mother do but I was such an idiot can't see their selfless love and was going far from them.

Raman kissed his forehead and said-will u forgive ur dad.

Ansh-no I will punish u.

Raman -what punishment u want to give.i am ready for any punishment.

Ansh-u have to do sit ups.he said cutely.

He smiled and asked how many.hundred will do.

Ansh-no its too much.u will get tired.ten will do.

He smiled at the love and care his son has for him.

He starts doing sit ups and ansh was counting.but soon after only five ansh said its enough or else u will get tired and mom has told me to take care of u.

Raman -when

Ansh-that day when u fainted.next day mom told me u r very sick and we have to take care of u.mom loves u very much dad.why u leave her alone.

Raman -because I was an idiot.can't see her true love for me.but now I will correct everything.

Ansh-u will not leave us alone again naa.

Raman -never ever in my life baby.

Ansh turned back and said-Rb look he is my dad.

That's when Raman sees Rahul standing there and wiping his tears.

Raman picked him in his arms and said-I am sor

Rahul interrupted -no need to explain anything just go and make her yours forever.from last five years I have been seen her to be very strong ,she fought very bravely against all odds but today I saw her broken like anything.just go and hug her.she needs u.she loves u alot.

Rahul take ansh from him and said-I will take care of him.u go and console her.saying so Rahul walked away thinking how he come to know his misunderstanding.

Flashback

When Rahul reached his room.he was crying holding a paper.he wants to see the paper so he called on the landline asking for Raman.when he go to attend the call.Rahul goes inside and saw it is a paper on which it is written that he is opening a new company on ishita Rahul bajaj's name.he immediately understood everything and determined to clear all misunderstanding between them.

Flashback ends

Rahul was smiling since his plan was successful.now his best friend will get her love,her Raman.


Ok guys that's all for now.since I have done what u all people wanted now I want lots and lots of comments.please reply and make me know did u like this revelation.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 29 is updated above .enjoy and do comment.waiting for ur lovely response.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Me second!i was expecting some ishra moments bt itz k am sure u will give it next time.an emotional update!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Me second!i was expecting some ishra moments bt itz k am sure u will give it next time.an emotional update! Loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice .pl update soon cont wait ishra milan. Kitne greedy hai na?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Raman finally knw the truth now.
Thank God.. But y company name is Ishita Rahul Bajaj..
Awesome Update dear.
Thanks for early update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow excellent update dear.. I had tears after reading it. I read it more than 10 times. Liked a lot.. Wow i dont know what to say.. Dont know what i am typing.. Just i am commenting in excitement. What a lovely scene between raman and ansh.. Ohooo just loved it a lot. It was really superb and great first update in the new thread.. Thank you dear.. You are simply superb..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
very lovely update
loved raman and ansh milan
cant wait for ishra...
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
hurray misunderstanding got cleared i'm so happy raman now knows abt ansh and ishu...
thanx for pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
Ufff finallly misunderstandings gone... ramann is such a fool...
Rahul did a great role... he is soo nyc...
nyc update 😊

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