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Posted: 9 years ago
Hiii Di...

Chalo...achcha hai...aap ko yaad to aaya ki...aap ki real duniya se alag ek Khwabo ki duniya bhi hai...janha aap ke readers aap ka intjar kar rahe hai...Chalo koi baat nahi...Der aaye durust aaye... (Achchi wali update ke saath)



Sorry maine Part 13 par comment skip ki thi...You know...Exams time...to socha compensation kar lu ek Long comment de kar...kyo ...Kyo Achchi deal hai na...

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Part ~ 13




Aise honge na IshRa...little little ...Cute Cute...



"Bhaad me gaya carrom board. Mujhe nahi khelna" Raman shouted back.

Gussa to dekho...bechari Ishita ko rula diya...

"All boys are mean. Jab unhe hamari zarurat padti hai tab hamare peeche peeche aa jate hain. Aur jab zarurat na ho to saari mean mean batein bolke humein bhaga dete hain" I blabbered.



Appa chuckled listening to my rant which irked me more
"Aap bhi to boy hi ho na. Isiliye apko ye sab sunke maza araha hai. Mai aap se bhi katti" I said and fled to my room.


Ishita ka gusaa bhi to kam nahi...but so cute...

Mai aisi koi game nahi khelungi jo tum khel rahe ho"

"Ok Ishita. Jaisi tumhari marzi. Mai bhi tab tak koi game nahi khelunga jab tak tum mujhe maaf na kar do" he said and left.

Kya friendship hai...Saath rahe to ladte rehte hai...& dur to wo reh nahi sakte...

To phir last me friendship kar hi li...

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Part ~ 14

Koi maarega to nahi na?

Realy...ek teacher ko maat ka darr lag raha hai...Don't worry...hum utne bhi rudenahi hai... 😉

So...finally ...Competition ka din aa hi gaya...kab se wait kar rahe the...wese Ishita to Classical perform karne wali hai...to song kaunsa hoga...!!!!!!

"Lassi se tumhara gala kharaab ho jaata hai...kal tumhe perform karna hai"

See...Raman ko kitni fikar hai Ishita ki... 😳

"Coffee...for you" he said while handing over the cup to me and left giving me no time to react.

Ab tak Ishita ki pasand yaad hai...

"Main tumhe woh lassi kabhi dobara nahi peene dunga. Aur agar tumne kabhi peene ki koshish bhi ki toh main tumse katti ho jaunga. Kabhi baat nahi karunga" Raman cutely reprimanded.

Aakhir Raman ne apna waada pura kiya na...

"Tumse judi har baat mujhe yaad hai Raman. Kya tumhe bhi wo sab yaad hai? Kya mai bhi us tarah tumhare yaadon ka aur khwabon ka hissa hoon jis tarah...

Tum Mere Khwabon Se Jaa Na Sake"


Ishita ne last part me aisa kaha...to ab to use pata chal hi gaya hoga...ki Raman use yaad to tab karega na...jab wo use bhula paya ho...

Tum Mere Khwabon Me Aa Na Sake, I smiled at my broken state.

Yeh ittefaaq kaise ho gaya...!!!!!!!! 😭

Usne khud na aake meri baat ka maan rakha aur Bala ke through wishes bhejke apni duty bhi kardi, I gladly accepted inside my head.

Yes...Raman ne phir se apna wada nibhaya...true gentleman ...warna RKB jisi chij ko chahe.!..aur wo use naa mile aisa ho sakta hai...par yanha Ishita koi chij nahi...& Wo bhi to RKB nahi...par Ishita ka Raman hai...

"I know but pata nahi kyun kuch missing sa lag raha hai" I finally told him.

But why? What is the reason for this emptiness and incompleteness
I started to question myself again.


Mai kahu...kya chij ki kami hai...

Dil nahi hai Ishita ke paas...

Aap kahoge ke ...Dil nahi hai to wo jee kaise rahi hai...wo apne sine me jo patathar hai...jo sans lene se dhadkta hai...uske sahare jee rahi hai...par Dil nahi hai uske paas...kyon ki...Apna Dil to wo Raman ko kab ka de chuki...& Raman use apna Dil de raha hai...wo uss Dil ko kisi galtfehmi ki wajah se accept nahi kar paa rahi...iss liye mai kahungi...ki uss ke paas Dil li kami hai...
..kyo aap ko kaisa laga mera jawab...



"Maine hi chaaha tha ki tum mujhse door ho jao.
Par is doori se ek ajeeb si ghutan mujhe mehsoos hoti hai.
Tumhari kami mujhko satati hai.
Shayad mera dil tumhe apnane laga hai.
Shayad wo waqt khareeb hi hai jab mera dil pukarke kahega ke tum hi mere Raman ho
Aur main bhi duniya se pukarke yeh keh doon ki tum mere dil mein rehte ho aur

Tum Mere Khwabon Se Jaa Na Sake"




Shayad is update ke sath aap logon ka asli intezar bhi khatam...

Ishita ko ehsas hone laga hai ke ye uska Raman hai...


Really ...yaa phir aap hum sab ko sirf Sapne dikha rahe hai...!!!!!

Aap logon ko kya mehsoos ho raha hai?

Batao to jaanun



Ab hum aur kya kahe...jo samjna hai...itne me hi samaj lijiye...[
Edited by prayosha - 9 years ago
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p.s. Happy Deepawali Mannu Di
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yeepppiii...finally aapne update de
diya Dii...!!!Thank you ...!!!

Coming to Update now
Ab Uski Tareef me main kya kahun...
As always Amazing and Beautiful Update...!!

Finally they reached chandigarh for their
competition..Now waiting for their performance..

"Lassi se tumhara gala kharaab ho jaata hai...
kal tumhe perform karna hai"
AWWW...Itni Care...!!!!
I'm totally in love with this Raman..!!

I was still amazed about the fact that he
remembered such small thing but he was
here to surprise me more.
I'm also Amazed...koi kisi se Itna pyaar
kese kar sakta hai...!!

"Coffee...for you" he said while handing
over the cup to me and left giving me no
time to react.
Deta bhi kese tumne khud hi to dur rehne
ko kaha hai and like an obedeint student
he follows your orders...
Jo Waada Kiya Wo Nibhana Padega...!!
Aur dono ko hi Ek dusre ki pasand napasand
yaad hai...

Song selection was nice...Ab isme bhi koi
Bolne wali baat hai wo to aap humesha hi
karte ho...

Main jitna use bhulne ki koshish karti hoon
woh utna hi jyada yaad aa jaata hai...
Aur yeh nazdeekiyaan!!! Yeh toh mera use
bhulana aur bhi mushkil kar rahi hain...
Haaayyeee... kya line likhi hai ...Mardala

Msg conversation between Raman and Bala
was really nice ...
Jise padh ke Ishita ki khoyi hui smile Wapas
mil gayi...
Bala ne bilkul sahi kaam kiya hai ...!!

I really liked each and every line in this part ...
Aur Ending ka to Jawaab hi nahi...!!

Ishita ko ehsas hone laga hai ke ye uska
Raman hai...
Aap logon ko kya mehsoos ho raha hai?
Humare mehsoos karne ya na karne se kya
hoga Dii...hoga to wahi jo aap chaahoge...!!
Heeheee...
Update sooon...!!!!!

"Aap aur Aapki ye story Mere Khwaabo Se Jaa
Na Sake"
Edited by riYa09guPta - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb part Di...
so finally ishita is realizing her love for him..the void she is feeling... I hope she gets to hear her inner voice soon.
and Raman is soo cute..he is sad still doing everything for her..
and that lassi wala moment was just fab...
loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Mano di!
Happy Diwali..🤗
Kaise ho aap aur Jiju n Hapy Belated anniversary
Srry bahut late wish kr rhi hu bt kya kru 😭
I wanna tell u tht I hve left IF coz of studies n ab intrst bhi chala gya h
Bt I really miss u n Didu 😭
I hve read IKNMP,TMKSNJK n CKSAJH all in one go n hats off all r equally commendable
Di waise FB pe ho??
Ho toh PM kro 😳
Miss ya n luv u Diii 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hiii !manu Di !

Di aapko darned ki zarorat nahin hai. ..
Aur plzzz sorry mat boliye ...achcha nahin lagta ...

Pata hai maine 12,13 part par comment nahin kiya tha. .
thoda busy thi. .soncha next update aaye ga toh ek sath comment
karongi. ...par hoa nahin. ..par koi nai ab kar dongi. .
Chalo pehle 12,13 part ki baat campbell hai. ..phir aaj k update ki

Part 12: Main Tenu Samjhawan Ki

Awesome update di! 👏

Ishita jis se bhag rahi thi. ...woh toh uss sath tha
Uss hi k paas. ...
Do dil mileage hai ...magar chup ke chup ke. .
kya song gaya bala ne. .perfect. .

Aur uss ke baad jo Antakshari ka silsila shuru hoa
...Antakshari k zarye raman ishita ko mana raha tha aur
ishita madam hai ki maan nahin rahi hai. ..
But ending sad thi...

Part 13: Din Guzre Woh...

superb update. ...

ishra childhood memories mast the. ..
carrom board. ...ishita ne pehle hi kaha tha ko usse kehna
nahin aata hai par Raman gussa hota hai toh.
..usse kuch samjh nahin woh kya kehraha hai. .
Par gulti realise hone par sorry bolta hai. ..
Aur IshRa ki phir se dosti hogayi. .


Part 14: Kuch Kami Hai

Awesome update Di!

Finally ishra chandighard pahunch gaye compilation
k liye. ...

.Lassi se tumhara gala kharaab ho jaata hai...kal tumhe perform karna hai"I looked at him blankly as he casually said those words looking at the glass and not at me.


Coffee...for you"he said while handing over the cup to me and left giving me no time to react.

Flashback achcha tha. ...raman ne apna wada
nahin bhola. .uss ne Lassi peene nahin di. ..

Tum Mere Khwabon Me Aa Na Sake, I smiled at my broken state.


Aaise kaise hogaya. ...par zarori nahin raman jo
uss sath hai. ...woh raman ko khole ankhon se dekh
sakti hai. .
Par raman ishita se durr reh raha hai. ..jo ishita ko achcha
nahin lagraha hai. .
kehte hai na. ...
"""kisi ke durr Jane se hi. ...uss ki ehmiyath pata chal ti hai. ."""

Ishita classical song gayi gi. .par konsa? ?

Raman ishita k sath nahin gaya par bala k zarye best of luck wish
kiya. ...
Ishita jald apni feelings ko samjhe. ...
Ishita ko RKB mein raman nazar aaraha hai. .

""""Maine hi chaaha tha ki tum mujhse door ho jao.

Par is doori se ek ajeeb si ghutan mujhe mehsoos hoti hai.

Tumhari kami mujhko satati hai.

Shayad mera dil tumhe apnane laga hai.

Shayad wo waqt khareeb hi hai jab mera dil pukarke kahega ke tum hi mere Raman ho

Aur main bhi duniya se pukarke yeh keh doon ki tum mere dil mein rehte ho aur

""""""Hum bhi issi waqt ka intezar hai hai. .ishita madam
ab zyada der na lagao """"""""

Dil khush kardiya. ...Di! Update mein woh
jo hum charahe the...

~~~HAPPY
DIPAWALI ~~~
MANU Dii !!
😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank god maanvir u remembered tht u had started a story which needed to be finished...kept on thinking when will be ur next update...or u had completely forgotten abt it...
Nice update...ishita realizing her mind upheveal...
Dnt let us wait more pls update soon
Edited by yakutamt - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Wishing you a very Happy and
Prosperous DIWALI...
May this festival of lights illuminate
your life and bring the shower of
glory, health and peace...!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
it's good to see u dr.nice update.plz continue ok.
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Posted: 9 years ago
u always make us wait for ur story

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