Tum Mere Khwabon Se Jaa Na Sake: FF (Created New Thread) - Page 88

Originally posted by: DivanIsh

Res

UNRES

-----------------------------o-------------------------------------------------

-----------------------------o------------------------------------------------

kya bolun comment mein main...it is just getting tougher for me to comment 😉

will think of something and edit my comment

for now it was PERFECT

Originally posted by: prayosha

Hey Di...

How are you...

I am so...happy ...after readig part 12...

You selected song from my wish list...& the one which is my most favourite song...A Biggg Thank You for this...

Haaye Haaye Haaye...Dil khush kar diya...aap ne...kya update thi...waah waah...maja aa gaya...

Ab lagta hai...jaise Tel dhire dhire garm ho raha hai...& jald hi tadka bhi laga dogi aap...

Ohhh...aap ne Song complete kiya nahi...mai chahti hi thi ki Ishita bhi gaye...& uss ne gaya & I hope ...wo din bhi jald hi aayega...jab Ishita gayegi...



Tenu chadd ke Kiththe java...Tu mera...parchava...
Tere Mukhde pe wich me to...Rab nu apne paava...
Meri Dua...Haaye...sajda tera...karti sada..
Tu sun ikraar mera...mai karu intjaar...tera...tu Dil toyu jaan...meri...
Mai tenu Samhava ki...Na tere bina lagda...Ji...





Please please please...aap jab bhi IshRa ko milvao...I know...at least 50 parts tak to yeh nahi hoga...par jab bhi ho...par please...yeh song ka yeh part add karna..

.
"Kaisa ajeeb itefaaq hai na! Ab tak tumhe hasane ki koshish mein laga tha, toh tumhare chehre par sirf gussa aur dard hi dekh paa raha tha. Abhi abhi jab koshish chodi, toh tum mujhe dekhkar muskura di. Khair jo hona hai woh toh hoga hi"

I feel it Di...yeh bolte waqt mera Raman kitna sad hoga...


& @ the last...I want to say...what the hell...The whole scenario was a dream!!!!!!...
Dil tod diya...

Par Raman ne waada kiya wo dream tha????? Antakshri dream thi?????? Yaa sirf Ishita so gai Raman ka kandha samaj kar & wo uss ke pass nahi tha sirf wo dream tha???
Please explain me...

&&& Lokking Forward for Singing Competition ...IshRa ke taraf se 2 Majedaar...Romantic...Emotional ...Dramatic songs hone chahiye...

Yeh Ishita kitne dreams dekhti hai...aisa lagta hai...jaise...Ishita ne jitni bar khuli aankho se dekha hai...uss se jyada to bandh aankho se dekha hoga...iss si baat par ek Gujarati Gazal yaad aa gai...

Nayan ne bandh rakhi ne...
Mai jyare Tamne joya chhe...
Nayan ne bandh rakhi ne...
Mai jyare Tamne joya chhe...
Tame chho...
Ena karta pan vadhare Tamne joya chhe...
Tame chho...
Ena karta pan vadhare Tamne joya chhe...

Update soon...

Originally posted by: Anum_says

Fabulous.

Interesting Update..

Looking forward to read more.

Update soon

Just tell me one thing..

Wo Pura Antakshiri wala Scene sab Dream Tha Kia?

Originally posted by: munira053

Awesome update 👏
This update reminded me of your musical series 😳 the way you beautifully make use of songs in your story telling
I was just in awwwe of Raman while reading the 'Samjhawan'part ❤️
It was more like a fun update 😆
~ jitna bhaagne ki koshish karegi utnii qareeb chali jayegii ~
N YES you took really LONG - 1 complete week 😡 😭 but this was a LONG update as well 😊 so koii gal nii 🤗
TFR.

Originally posted by: sush_rddt

super update!!!!! awe i am in love with this part!!!

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

awesome update wht u were gone skipped tbis prt?? thatk u pankhu di warna itna achha update nhi milta awww bala is damn cute i loved this antakshari

Originally posted by: sahooa

Aww such a cute part di

Kya bolun main ...kese likh dedeto ho aap aisa 😊

Loved each part of ur update

Hope to get more of the trip

Continue soon...bahut intezar karwate ho aap ndt updates ke liye

Originally posted by: sukanksha

First no khichdi talk only update talk 😉

After so long... I don't why... I got the perfect Manvir didi special update... From this chapter I feel connected... This chapter was so you. 😳

Thnk u so much...

The glimpse of miss Shaali 😆 I like her 😆

Jisse door bhagne Ki firaak Mein thi usi k sath 1 week / 7 din bandh gayi... Hope bandhegi for 7 janam.

Di Bala jb seat par aa kar baitha I thought. Angad Ki entry n I was praying no plz no plz no 😆

Uff the whole antakshari ❤️
Kya Chun Chun k songs daale...

I have 3-4 questions... I don't know why I am so confused

1. How were they seated in bus
Raman behind her... Before her... Beside her... N also where was Bala's position... 🤔

Raman was sitting beside her...Bala was sitting on the opposite row

2. Nai jeena tere Baaju... In this line u deliberately chose the word Baaju bcz it is Baajo

Is it? I just copied the lyrics from some site

3. Where are you from India??? If you are ok telling...

Karnataka

P.s. I asked u a question last time but never got reply on that 😕

Oh dat? MISS S? It stands for Miss Shaali!

Originally posted by: --abha--

Finally I completed all this part...I dont know u know me or remember me but still I have read all ur storirs and was not able to catch ok truth I was shocked when ishu was married to someone else...but asha told me to read to socha will read...and I was busy so this delay...

BUT WOW WOW WOW...it was brilliant. ...can a love story be better mixed with love, romance, teading , fun and my fav song...

flashback from beginning was so do cute ...toshiji presrnce ishra...jealous raman and then judaai or lambi judaai ...ohhh god...I was so into this time...waiting for them yo meet. ...

And they met...first I was like milte hi locha ho gaya...they fought...and guts she slapped the RKB... I always feared that if he will take revenge of slap but thank god it didn't happened...

but then her dreams ...yeh ladki...she dreamed of him everywhere ...

But then what happened was so painful ...her hurt , paint...brought a lump in my throat...I was actually feeling why to break her like that...it was like she loved him and he of all the people shagun.ouch...

and then his side of story...though he was wrong somewhere I don't know my heart goes to him...and from then I just loved his flirt and somr so filmy line. ...it just make me happy seeing him doing everything possible. ..

and u are awesome...we know that from ck but this was brilliance but now my worry lies 1st two parts...but for time I will enjoy this fb...will worry later on...

and thanks for all the pm...and sry for not commenting. ...

Awesome and beautiful journey. ...