Tum Mere Khwabon Se Jaa Na Sake: FF (Created New Thread) - Page 28

Originally posted by: yakutamt

nice write up maanvir...read all 5 parts in a go...m

Only one qt y u married off ishita to someone else😭

Loving every bit of the growing up of rkb and ishita for the moment ...pls write soon

Originally posted by: florine_20

hey mannu di great updates yaar.
I read the first three parts.
beautiful as always.
I know I m late in commenting but I actually avoided this after the first part when u showed ishita married. and decided not to read further 😛 😉 but I m addicted to ur stories so how long could I resist reading. so back again here.

p.s. still waiting for a chaar kadam sequel
( u know we are too greedy 😃

Originally posted by: rufana10

lovely update di
after 10 yrs raman has become arrogant RKB 😉
poor ishita...RKB has come in her dream instead of raman 😛
what will she do when she will come to know that this attitude wala RKB is her raman 😳
update d next part soon

Originally posted by: rk654

simply Awesome Update. ..ye RKB version bhi uske dream me... i think uske Dream me aane ka Copy right raman ne le rakha😆😆...this part was also beautifully written...

tysm for the pm

Originally posted by: ..TeriDeewani..

Okk...toh Part 3&4 were rockin..I luved them..

Srry givin short comments on this parts..

Part 5

Di teaser bahut hi teasing waala tha... 😆

RKB ka attitude..waah kya attitude hai Yeh..

Ishu is so obsessed to Raman Godd!! 😲
Kehte haina..Over doing of something is harmful..

Ishu k saath bhi kuch aisa na hojaye..

Updt soon di..

Originally posted by: ..TeriDeewani..

Besharam..Behayaa..aisa kuch bolna chahiye aapko mujhe..So sorry for bein late..
Besharam behay aisa kuch bhi nahi bolungi...

kyunki tum agaye ho noor agaya hi...nahi to chiraghon se lau ja rahi thi...

sach me yar mai to Rakhi ki tarah "Mere Karan Arjun (Nehu Hersheys) ayenge" ka jaap jap rahi thi..khair dono aa hi gaye


*Part 2: Tum Hi Ho*

A smile instantly lits up my face at the sight in front of me.
Awww..
My hand reaches out to his ruffled hair combs it neatly making a partition to the left.

'"Cute"' I say pulling his cheeks gently.

I stifle a laugh imagining his reaction when he finds out I did that to him. He would ruffle his hair & frown saying ""Don't call me cute"
"
I would laugh & say ""Awww...You look cutest when you do that"" and he would pull me roughly, cage my hands behind my back and warn ""Will you call me cute again?""

""Leave me"" I would beg trying to get out of his hold.

""Say you won't call me cute"" he would say twisting my hands.

""Ok I won't I won't"" I would say giving up.

""Better"" he would say letting me go.

I would walk a few steps away from him, turn back with a mischievous glint, ""You look CUUUTE""I would yell & flee out of the place.

""Ishitaaa I will kill you"" he would scream annoyed.
"
"I have already written a note & forwarded it to everyone who cares for me that if you find me dead in mysterious condition, then please handover my Habeebi to the police"" I would yell from the kitchen.
*"(Habeebi in local language means Beloved. My hubby is popular as Habeebi among friends. The ringtone assigned to his call on my phone is a song called Habeebi)
"*
Aww..I so luved their fights..Jhagda karne se hi toh pyaar badhta hai..n I so luved the name Jiju is assigned as..
I place a soft peck on his cheek and try to get out of his hold. He tightens the grip around me in response and I fall back into his embrace unwilling to let go of the protective hold.

Chilly winter & husband's warm embrace...Who would want to let it go?
I glance at the clock 6:40 it says. I happily snuggle closer & doze off.
*Tu mujhe chod jaaye*
*Ye nahi ho sakta Saathiya*
Ahem ahem di aapki bhi kuch aisi hi feelings hai kya??
My**alarm beeps & I fish for my phone with sleepy eyes. 6:50 am it says.
I turn it off and struggle to get out of his hold.
After a few attempts I succeed.

I tie my hair into a lose bun, turn on the WiFi on my phone letting the WhatsApp messages to flow in, place it on the dresser & march to the washroom.

Freshened up I come back, glance at the clock 6:58.
'Hmmm...2 more mins to go' I say softly looking at him.

He looks so adorable that I can't help capture a shot and upload it as my new WhatsApp DP.
"*"His love is a gift that I open everyday""*I write in my status.
This tells tht Ishu luvs Angad a lot..
I leave the phone on th dresser and lean towards him, gently tap his shoulder & say ""Jaana. Uthiye. 7 baj gaye""
Jaana...hw sweet..
""7:15"" he mumbles, turns to the other side & goes back to sleep.
Lazy Angad..
""OK"" I say & proceed to the kitchen with my phone.

I start boiling water for his tea. Why so early when he isn't awake, you may wonder! Well let me tell you, hamare Habeebi thandi chayi peete hain.
Sachhi?!! Main bhi ek jamaane me thandi chai peena pasand karti thi..

When I take out the dough & start peeling off the boiled potatoes, my phone beeps.

WhatsApp notifies me of a text from my friend Mihika.
"Hogayi teri subah? Sudhar ja yaar. Kabhi to koi DP ya status apne frnds keliye daala kar" she writes with an angry emoticon.

I chuckle "Lagta hai kuch jal raha hai" I reply with a wink emoji.

"Tere kitchen me kuch jal raha hoga" she says with an annoyed face.

"Very funny" I say with a sarcastic smile.

"Waise kya ban raha hai nashte me? Mai ajaun?"

"Habeebi ke fvr8 Aloo ke parathe. U r welcome" I say with a huge smile.
Jiju k fav mere bhi fav...
"Obviously...Habeebi ke fvr8 hi to banenge. FYI I m nt intrstd. Mujhe nahi khana tere Habeebi ke parathe" she says irritated.

"Parathe Habeebi ke nahi Aloo ke hain" I say sticking the tongue out.

"Whatever!" She says miffed.

7:15 am Alarm beeps.

"Hey wait. I vl b back. Habeebi ko uthana hai" I write in a hurry.

"Habeebi Abhi Bhi Tabhi Bhi Kabhi Bhi. Jaa Jaa" she teases.
(My frnd had phrased it dis way when she heard me talking of Habeebi almost all the timeLOL)
If they don't tease u till the hell they r nt ur frnds..frnds r alwaz their to tease u..aur jo bhi aapki frnd ne phrase kiya na..bahut achhe se phrase kiya..
*Meri baaton me tera zikr sadaa
Meri yaad me teri fikr sadaa
*
Walking back to the bedroom, I could not help but wonder how my entire life revolves around him now.
*Mai jo bhi hoon tum hi to ho*
"
"Jaanaaa...It's 7:15. Uthiye"" I say shaking him and switching off the AC.

""7:30"" he says throwing away the duvet.

""Aap nahi sudhroge""I say listening him snore.

I get back to fixing his breakfast. It's 7:30 by the time I place his tea & Aloo ke parathe drenched in olive oil.
Yes Olive Oil Not Makhhan (Butter) because my husband thinks any food dresses with olive oil is healthy.
I admit olive oil is healthy but for him even an unhealthy or junk food becomes healthy just by sprinkling floz of olive oil on top.
Its like saying "*The easiest way to eat healthy is to write HEALTHY on everything that you eat"*
Waah..!! Kya soch hai..even I will advice all my frnds abt this..
Rolling eyes! He and his antics!

""Jaana 7:30. Wake up"" I say a little irritated this time shaking him vigorously.

""7:45""he says & is about to get back to sleep turning to the other side, when I pull him back to his previous position and yell ""What am I? An alarm clock? Which snoozes after every 15 minutes? I said wake up"
"
He looks startled. Then composes himself ""Please"" he begs with a puppy face.

My heart goes out for him but I mask it behind my anger ""Jo karna hai karo I am not going to wake you up again""I warn & pull away the curtains letting the sunrays hit him expecting him to wake up.

He covers his head with the pillow & says ""5 mins""
"
"I don't know. Ab nahi uthe to I am not going to iron your clothes""I say with hands on my hips.

""Nahi"" he says waking up in a jerk.

I applaud mentally for myself. I knew this would work.
"
"Please Jaan tum achhi ho na"" he tries to butter me.

""Nahi mai achhi nahi hun"" I give back.

""Tum itni khadoos kaise hogayi? Pehle to aisi nahi thi"" he laments.

""Aapne banaya hai mujhe aisa. Aap apni harkaton se baaz nahi ate isiliye mujhe khadoos banna pada""
*Mujhe tumse mili apni ada*

""Ab jaldi se utho"" I say turning back.

A pair of arms sneak across my waist from back bringing me to a force stop. He places his chin on my right shoulder and kisses my cheek calming me down ""Keep calm & say I love you""he says with a smile.

I calm down and say ""I hate you""

""Me too""he says chuckling.

I pinch his hand that is holding my waist and say ""Aap bahut bure ho""

""Aaj patha chala?"" He asks his favourite question.
"
"Patha to usi din chal gaya jis din aap mujhe dekhne keliye aye the""I say with mock anger.

""Phir mujhse shadi kyun ki?""He asks anxiously".
"
""Kyunki"..." I drag.

""Kyunki?"" He asks growing impatient.

"*Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho"*
I sing his favourite lines.

He smiles turning me to face him ""I love you""he says.

A feeling of content runs through my nerves and I say ""Love you a lot""
*Chain bhi*

He leans in and I close my eyes to taste the sweet torture but it turns out to be a painful torture as he decides to bite my cheeks instead.
""Ouch"" I scream holding my cheek.
*Mera dard bhi
*
And before I could react he locks himself in the washroom.
""I hate you"" I yell banging the door.
"
"But I love you""he screams without opening the door afraid I might pounce on him & suck his blood out.

He troubles me, he annoys me, he irritates me yet I love him because NOW he means everything to me, my love, my life.
*Meri Ashiqui ab tum hi ho
*
*"I do not look forward to Valentine's day orour marriage anniversary because I celebrate being married to you everyday of my life"*
*(I had written these lines for my Habeebi)*
Jiju ko read karvaayi ye lines?? I so luved their romantic moments..there shouldn't b a particular day to celebrate a spcl relationship..it shud b celebrated wid every moment of our life..aap ne bhi wahi kahaan..aur maine bhi wahi..😉
I typed & sent it to him on WhatsApp.
Angad Malhotra, I love you!

Now there's no place for Raman in my life except in my dreams because
*"Tum Mer Khwabon Se Jaa Na Sake"
U knw wht di. I am really in luv wid this stry..I am actually falling in love wid this stry even more n more...n I knw..infact vry much sure tht u will make me fall in luv wid this stry even more than nw..

Superb updt..I luved the way Jiju is..u r indeed really lucky to hve him in ur life..

Thank u so much di for this stry..Love u..❤️ 🤗

Tune itna achha cmnt likha hai ke i just went aww...

thnx re...

aur haan chote cmnts b chlenge...bs tu roz milte rehna...😳

Originally posted by: prayosha

Hiii Manveer Diii...

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Sabse pehle let me do awww...itna badhiy cmnt...thnx re...love u

Part - 1

~ Chand Chhupa Badal Me

Superb Starting with Superb song...

IshRa kitni achchi baatein kar rahe the...Chhat par...

Ishita ko laga Raman use yaad rakhega bhi yaa nahi...& Raman to Ishita ko hi dhundh raha tha...& jab IshRa aakhir mil hi gaye...tab aap ke Dimag ke Kido ne apna Asar dikha diya...Itne Achche scene ko Dream bana diya...

& itna achcha dream dekh kar ...joro ka jhatka to tab laga...jab Ishita ne apni aankhe kholi...wo bhi kaha...apne Pati ki Baho me...Humari story ka sab se bada Devil...ANGAD MALHOTRA...

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Bhai ab dimag ke keedon par to mera koi control nahi na...bas unhe bhi glat tym pe hi entry marni hothi hai...ab mai kya karun? (Innocent me)

Part - 2

~ Tum Hi Ho

Jiju Special Update...wow...
I am not the member of Jiju's fan club...but I liked it very much...
Haaye...Lucky ho Aap...Humare Jiju itne romantic hai...
Agar wo update...Ishita ke so called Husband ke bare me nahi par Raman ke bare me hoti...to mai gurantee deti hoo...uss part par sab se longgg Comment meri hi hoti...par bad luck...wo Angad tha...jis ki mai iss se jyada taarif nahi kar sakti...mere Raman ko bura lag jayega...

Now there's no place for Raman in my life except in my dreams because
Tum Mer Khwabon Se Jaa Na Sake...

Yeh kyun kaha Ishita ne...puri update me muje yeh hi achcha nahi laga...Ishita aise kaise keh sakti hai...mood kharab kar diya...

& yeah...meri comment Jiju ki wajah se hi adhuri reh gai...naa...aap ke wale Jiju nahi...mere Jija Ji...unki Kal BirthDay hai...Gift lene gai thi...iss liye...late ho gaya...


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Itni nafrat achhi nahi hothi😉 (Ajnabi first dialogue...yaad hai?)

Angad se itni nafrat kyun? Bechare ne kisi ka kya bigaada hai?

Part - 3

~ Mere Khwabon Me Jo Aye


Yeah...yeh kuch humare interest ki update hui na...kyonki hum Fan to IshRa ke & aap ki story ke hai...par Diwane to hum Raman ke hi hai... Raman ko hum bhul jaye Yeh ho nahi sakta...& aap Raman ko bulne ke liye majbur karo...yeh hum hone nahi denge...

Haaye...IshRa ki pehli mulakat...fight ke sath how Cute...

Ohoo ..Humare Chotu se cute Raman ko bhi Gussa aata hai...
Abhi was 8 years old, Raman 7, Me 5 and Simmi 4.
So according to our ages we decided that Abhi and Simmi should be in one team and I would team up with Raman because 8+4=12 and 7+5=12.

Waaah waah...kya logic hai...& IshRa bhi ek team me...yeh to superb...

~ "Apna hath nikalo Abhi"
~ "Maine kaha na hath nikalo"
~ "Nahi. Abhi Ishita ke kandhe pe hath nahi rakh sakta"
~ "Kyunki wo meri partner hai"
~ "Nahi. Wo har cheez me meri partner hai. Wo meri poore life ki partner hai"


Yeh bolte waqt ...Raman kitna cute lag raha hoga...how posassive...

~ "Inni soni bahu pe to mai waari jawan"
...
I love this Toshi Ji...

But I hate Amma...& (Litterly You)... IshRa ke pyar ke Dushman...

"I Love you" he said kissing me on my cheek
1st Kiss...so sweet...
But inocent Ishita ne Appa ko bata diya...

I opened my eyes in the arms of Appa.
I looked around and realised that I had fallen asleep while crying and Appa had slept with me that night.
Then what about Raman?

It was a dream. Raman had a special power to come in my dreams.

Phir se Dream...


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Oye Raman ki die hrd fan! Tujhe Ramn ke siwa kuch aur nhi dikhta na?

To chal Ishita ko to Angd mil gaya...Raman keliye teri booking kara lun?

Part - 4

~ Koi Tere Khatir Hai Jee Raha


~"Raman"
~"Ishita"
~"Tum jaa rahe ho?"
~"Tum mujhe bhool to nahi jaoge na?"
~"I will wait for you"


It's touched my Heart...

Kyo juda kiya IshRa ko...rula diya muje...How Rude...Mere Chotu Chotu...Cute Cute IshRa ko rulaya...juda kar diya...

Ek baat Dil me aai...keh hi deti hoo...

Abhi maine Film dekhi...Humari Adhuri Kahani...
& Song maine pehli bar Dhyan se suna...

Ishq sachcha wahi, Jisko Milti naji Manzile...Manzile...

Par muje to Happy Ending hi pasand hai...please...IshRa ko humesha ke liye juda mat karna...😭

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Mere dimag me b ye gaana chal raha hai kayi dinon se...kahin yahi anjam na ho jaye is kahani ka😉

Part - 5

~ Ek Mulaqat Zaruri Hai

Yeh mera favourite part...Love You Di...

Pata hai...jab se padha hai...tab se comment karne ke liye bechen thi...par comment kar nahi paai...ab jaa kar time mila...

"Bas ek baar mere ankhon ke saamne ajao Raman"
"Please bhagwan ek baar Raman se mila do"


Yeh to mere Dil ki baat hai...

Ishita ke Grandma ki Death ho gai...so sad...par wo hi Situation IshRa ke phir se milne ka jariya bani...

Ohhh...The Great RKB ...Juniors ko Darata hai...bechari Ishita ki bicycle ki kya haalat ki...mere friends ne bhi mere saath aisa hi kuch kiya tha...mai to kitna roi thi ...

But RKB ko pata chala Ishita new Student hai...to help bhi ki...Kind hearted...but Akdu bhi...

IshRa are neighbours...so excited...

Aaye haaye...Raman ke saath...RKB bhi Ishita ke khwabo me aane laga...
Super Excited for new update...
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Chal tu isi bhane khush to ho gyi...koi to positive cmnt diy tune

Part - 6

~ Tu hai wahi Dil ne Jise Apna Kaha

Jis updateme Ishita ko pata chalega ki RKB & Raman ek hi hai...

I know...aap ke Dimag ke Kide...uss update ko No 6 par to nahi aane denge...par mera Dil chahta hai...ki wo update jald hi aaye...

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Hahaha...title dekh ke mai khud soch me pd gayi ke maine ye part kb likha😲

Phir pta chala ye mere nhi tere dimag ke keede hain😆

Aur bilkul sahi pehchana mere dimg ke keede itni jaldi ye thodi na hone denge😉

Is it long enough?????? Are you happy Now?????

Ye bhi koi poochnewali baat hai?

& FYI muje to kisi ne POEM ke bare me bataya hi nahi...to mai kaise padhu😭...just kidding...Padhi maine ...Why only Today...amazing...uss par comment baki hai...wo kal...

Yaar maine kisi ko pm nahi kiya poem k...isi thread pe jo discussionshue bs usi me mention kiya

So ...Late reply worth it or not ??????

Of course it is...😳

Originally posted by: maanvir