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rufana

@rufana10

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#201

hiii di!
how r u? missed u a lot
today finally i read all 4 parts of this story together 😃

part 1
starting was amazing
ishita's desperation to get a glimpse of raman...
her emotions...
ishra moment in terrace 😳
loved everything 😳
but...
d ending 😲

part 2
ishita with ANGAD MALHOTRA 😲
nahiii...dramatically 😆
angad is just like your habeebi 😳...you r very lucky di 😊
oh forgot to ask how is our jiju 😉
i'm confused
though angad is sweet like jiju but i am not liking him 😕
i am so sad...raman is nowhere in this update 😔

part 3
so sweet update 😃
possessive raman 😳...cute ishita 😛
toshiji was so sweet
your hazme ki goli totally worked on me 😛
loved it so much 😉

part 4
emotional update 😭
ishita-toshiji conversation was really sweet
separation of ishra 😒

where is raman now 😕
looking forward to d next update 😳
thanks for pm 😊

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Anum_says

@Anum_says

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#202

Mano.. I don't know why. But I m feeling like crying...

They never met after that day.

Raman aya hoga na, usne wait big kia hoga ishu ka.. Haina?

Now she is married..

But from that time Raman is in her dreams..

Wow.

But she don't know na k Raman Ab kesa dikhta hoga..

OMG.. I m very excited for their meeting.

Tum Milwaogi na unhe?

Bht awesome or Emotional Update Thi..

Loved it and waiting eagerly for next part.

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asma18

@asma18

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#203

Hii manu di, Kaise ho aap 😊
sab se pehle HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY 😊
...
.ab baat update ki. ...

aww heart touching emotional update 😭
Ooh di rula diya. ...
.jab title padha """koi tere khatir hai jee raha ""
Soncha nahin tha ki itna emotional hoga. .

perfect select kiya hai 👏

Baatein ye kabhi na tu bhoolna
Koi tere khatir hai jee raha
Jaaye tu kahin, bhi ye sochna
Koi tere khatir hai jee raha
Tu jahaan jaaye mehfooz ho
Tu jahaan jaaye mehfooz ho
Dil mera maange bas ye duaa

Humdard hai, humdum bhi hai
Tu saath hai toh zindagi
Tu jo kabhi door rahe
Ye humse ho jaaye ajnabi
Tujhse mohabbat karte hain jo
Tujhse mohabbat karte hain jo
Kaise kare hum usko bayaan

Baatein ye kabhi na tu bhulna
Koi tere khatir hai jee raha

Inn lines ko aapne itne achche se itne
khubsorati se ishra k feelings ko bayan kiya hai. ..

👏 👏 👏
maine pehle iss lines ko itne achche se nahin
samjha tha. ..par ab jab bhi ye song suno gi
Yahi yaad aaye ga

Jis tarha se aapne toshiji k character ko dikhaya hai
brilliant
👏

Jis tarha toshiji ne ishita ko samjha ya ki abhi woh raman
k sath hi rahe gi aur ye bhi samjha ya k amma ne jo kiya
ishita k liye achcha tha

kyun ki mammas jitna apne bachche ko janti hai. . uss se Behtar
aur koi nahin samjh sakta. .par hum kabhi kabhi samjh nahin pate hai

Jab maine ishra k conversation padha kar
runa aaraha tha. ..yaar jis se aap ek pal alag nahin rah sakte
aap usse itne din kaise alag raho ge. ...

Uss din k baad se ishra nahin mile aur ishita bhi chennai aagai
hamesha k liye. ...
par raman ne toh ishita ko dhonda hoga na 😕

Ishita raman ki Yaadon k sath badi hoyi aur abhi tak nahin dekha usse
sirf khwaab mein hi usse mehsos kiya ..This is called true n pure
love. ..jo aap ke khareeb na hokar bhi khareeb hai.

Yaadon mein tum, khwabon mein tum..
Aankhon mein tum, dil mein tum..
Yaad karein bhi to kaise karein dost tujhko..
Jise bhula na paayein wo hi shaks ho tum..!!!

Par raman kahan hai? ? ?

Kaisa hai? ? ?

IshRa ek dusre ko kaise pehchane ge jab samne honge. .

Aur Angad hai toh ishra kaise ek...??

Chalo kehte hai na. .sabr ka phal meetha
hota hai. ...toh thoda sabr kar lete hai. .

...aur aapne kya kaha. ...Should I Continue????-------

Are continue karna pade bhai. ...

aur bahut jald. ..next part update karna pade ga

Kyun ki next update ka intezar besabri se horaha hai

Thnks for PM 😊
Continue soon. ...

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Malvika

@mayraa

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#204

Wow...it's a fabulous update Di...

Really really really liked it so much...

Toshiji's character is so awesome...

Little ishu and Raman and their bachpan ki mohabbat...haye...they are so cute...

Their talk is so adorable...

Mila kar dono ko alag kr diya not done Di...

But I know u surely have something in ur mind to make this too much interesting... And I'm waiting for it...

Waiting for next update...

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sahooa

@sahooa

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#205

lovely writting😊 i was always a silent reader in dis forum

never commented...rather too lazy 2 comment😆😆

maine aapki almost saari stories padhi hai...nd was a regular follower of ck nd even liked it a lot but kabhi comment nahi kiya but ur work forced me 2.⭐️

ur an amazing writer di ...keep continuing😛

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sukanksha

@sukanksha

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#206

Oh my God... Senti Ho gi main
So in actual after that they never meet or did they met.
Raman hai bhi real me Jo party me Mila tha.
Di plz plz plz update soon

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Deep

@rk654

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#207

i read all parts in one go...what i say...just so so beautiful, awesome superb brillant fabulous👏 ...rest fill yoreself😆😆..and songs selection was super awesome...tiil now we read ishita's POV ab raman POV kab update karengi ...
you wrote so so so so beautifully..

Edited by rk654 - 10 years ago

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maanvir

@maanvir

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: DivanIsh
RES😃😃😃
unres
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Mannu di sabse pehle 🤗

what do i say about the update...it was beyond perfectness

the sad emotions of parting out from the one you love came out very well 👏
Thnx Pankhu!

in this story i am so much in love with Toshi Ji's character
To mera attempt successful raha!😃

there were so many cute moments like how Ishita wanted to marry Raman already and how cutely Toshi Ji explained her
Kids are always cute! Arent they?

i dont know when i was reading i was like yeh mention karna hai woh mention karna hai but now when i am finally sitting i dont have words...i just want to copy the whole update here as it was all so great
Mere sath bhi aksar yahi hotha hai...yeh likhna hai wo likhna hai aur jab reply box open karti hun to kuch samajh nahi atha ke kya likhun...Glad ke tumhe pasand aya

the song selection was again beautiful
Bahut arse se ye gaana mere dimag me ghoom raha tha...finally likh diya is pe...

you don't write words...you write emotions
Awww...This is undoubtedly one of the best comments I have ever received...Thnx re...

each word casts a magic on me and i am just amazed with the beauty
Abra ca dabra...Maine tumpe Black Magic kiya hua hai😉

i know i am always repeating the same thing but this story is the most unique one i have or i will ever read

and i just loved the ending...i cannot stop myself from copying it below

He was not in my life but I was happy for he was still in my dreams.

Because...

Tum Mere Khwabon Se Jaa Na Sake

i only want to thank you for penning down this story and giving us readers a chance to go through something as beautiful as this
Tumhe to bas meri tareef karne ka bahana chahiye...Dar lagta hai kahin iski lat na lag jaye

continue this soon please

lots of love to you
Love u too

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maanvir

@maanvir

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: Nazz_naz
Khismat b hai dekho kaisii...
jis ko rakhna chaho hamesha saath..
wo kabhi aasani se nahi milte ... 🥱
Hmmm...yahi to zindagi hai boss...
Isi bat pe ek sher arz hai
Jo hum chahte hain wo nahi milta
Jo milta hai use dil nahi chahta
Par ye bhi sochlo ke agar jo chahte wo milta
To phir Khuda ko yad koun karta

the way toshi handled ishita n the way ishita made raman understand was wonderful...

Ishita ke khwabon se raman ja na saka... isliye ishita raman ko kabhi ni bhuliii...
😛
but raman ka kya? Agar wo ishita ko bhoool gaya to?
Mujhe bhi isi baat ka dar hai😕

Nyc update di... next wala jaldiii please... 😆
Koshish jari hai😃

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maanvir

@maanvir

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: Richajin
This is so heart touching.. So sad... I dont want to reas further... But still wish to know where is raman? How is he feeling? Phishhh.. Such conflicting thoughts...
U r such a tease... Writing something which i dont want to read but still end up asking for more...
Hehe...no offense...but I can't stop laughing after reading ur cmnt...
Tumhari halat pe hasi nahi arahi par jis tarah se tumne likha hai it is so cuute...
It is like saying I HATE HOW MUCH I LOVE YOU...And I totally Love u for dat mera tezi se chalta hua FAN🤗

So about continuing... A little more would do no harm.. So the greedy me wants to read more...
Pakka will write more...But advance me warn kar rahi hun...Aage ka rasta aur khatarnak ho sakta hai...so travel at ur own risk...😉