Originally posted by: liveistolove
At last I am here with my view about your story..๐
Sorry di..๐ญ๐ญ ๐ญ
But aapne toh itni jaldi jaldi update de diya..โค๏ธ โค๏ธ๐ค
Its not that I don't like it.. happy that I can read a story by you very frequently.. ๐
aww that's ok dont be sorry
My combined comment for 3 parts (3rd, 4th, 5th) ..
Note: 6th & 7th ka I will post tomorrow di..nahin toh jyada lamba ho jayega..
Don't scold me for the length.. ๐คช
hahhah the length of comment is more than my update ๐
3rd part:
Ishita and Raman are on their way and ishita is full of questions.. ๐ฒ
So many questions..Thank God Raman gave reply calmly for all these questions.. ๐๐
But not ready to give any answer about their marriage..!! Again rude Raman at his best..๐ก
Ishita humble and calm as always.. ๐
Flashback..!! Raman was forced to meet a girl for marriage alliance..!! ๐ฒ๐ฒ๐ฒ As always Thoshiji was successful to convince him to meet the girl.. ๐
What followed next was a pleasant surprise..
Loved this flashback..๐
Raman was mesmerized by Ishita's beauty and its love at first sight for Raman.. โค๏ธ โค๏ธ
especially the talk between Raman and Ishita..๐
They agreed for the marriage..๐๐๐ผ
Then why does Raman hate ishita so much now..!!?? ๐๐ฒ
Back to present:
It can be seen that Ishita accepted the house as her own as soon as she entered the house.. and made balcony as her favorite spot in the house.. ๐๐
Balcony.. why that place.. ?? Because its you who is the creator of this story.. ๐๐
Kitchen talk and bedroom scene.. show very well how bad was their relation.. Ishita doesn't remember anything and Raman remember everything.. ๐
And the last line you used..
"Two strangers called as couple by the world had to search the love and if not found, they had to produce love"
Says it all about their relation and future.. ๐
thank you so much for this elaborate feedback...i am glad you liked it
4th part:
Raman doesn't like Ishita still he cared for her..!!
He is contradicting himself..
First scene of the part...
Effortlessly written..Hot & cute ate same time.. ๐ณ๐ณ ๐ณ๐ณ
Rude Raman and his anger ran away as soon as Ishita came in this avtar.. ๐๐
Rest of the scene is history.. shameless Raman and blushing ishita..
๐ค ๐ค for you..for bringing in this scene.. ๐ณ๐ณ
Ishita and Thoshiji's conversation.. sweet and clearly displaying how well they both bonded..๐
And the conversation with Raman during BF..๐๐ผ
What's the mystery hidden in amma's house..!!?? โ ๐
Ishita too have doubt and she directly asked Raman and got no answer for her question..!!
Even we want to know what's the hidden story..jaldi let us know..
Di aap ko koyi nahi beat kar sakta in keeping us curious for very long period.. ๐๐
hahhaha thank you so much again for this lovely feedback...i am overwhelmed
5th Part:
Raman is worried.. and there is something big which all of them are hiding from Ishita..!! ๐ฒ ๐ฒ๐ฒ
Flashback:
Kya kahoon me.. Flashback narrate karne mein aapse koyi behtar ho sakta hai kya..!!?? ๐โญ๏ธ โญ๏ธ๐ค
Too good you are.. ๐๐ผ
The conversation through messages..cutewala convo at the starting stage of their relationship..
I just loved Raman's approach..โค๏ธ๐๐ผ
Both have realized their love for each other but not ready to admit it..!! ๐๐
Raman..hehehe..again awestruck by Ishita's beauty..๐๐โค๏ธ
Again the conversation in the car..the process of knowing each is started..
Slight romantic and cute talk and song..
Song jo aapne select kiya hai..its beautiful..โค๏ธ
Their bond growing stronger with each passing minute.. knowingly or unknowingly both of them are ready to be with each other throughout their life.. in happy, sad, struggling stages of their life..
And the effect they both have on each other is something that they are realizing in this date or outing..๐๐๐
And the surprise.. beautiful..just beautiful.. โค๏ธโค๏ธ โค๏ธ
Nothing else I can say about it..
The way he made his feelings clear to Ishita is perfect..and the biggest thing is she is ready to give him the same unconditional love.. ๐๐
Present : Raman is in confused state..
Whatever may be his feeling towards her now..he still cares for her..
Di brilliant job you are doing.. ๐๐
Love you humesha ๐ค ๐ค ๐ค
thank you so much love you too ๐ค ๐ค ๐ค
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